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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    rollings wrote:
    this swelling tide
    that I cannot let surface
    makes its subtle appearance
    but only in tears

    WOW ! beautiful.

    Godfather.
  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    Godfather. wrote:
    rollings wrote:
    this swelling tide
    that I cannot let surface
    makes its subtle appearance
    but only in tears

    WOW ! beautiful.

    Godfather.

    thank you for that Godfather
  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    stars benevolently run amused at our boundaries
    light, as if it can cry, bows to mourn wars
    wondering what they did to create
    those of us graduating from the university of hours ago
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    :D *sigh*
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  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    sometimes.... :fp:
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    :D
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    poets write of things to come
    the earth will melt into the sun
    and you and I will be the ones
    at the pumpkin center barn dance.

    -David Allen Coe
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    So apparently, I've mastered the ability to be in two place at once.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • skyeriverwinterskyeriverwinter Posts: 1,894
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    skyeriverwinter wrote:
    i threw away my poetry journals ...i just realized...it must have been the night I ended up in the hospital...again...ugh.. :fp:
    oh no. hospital visits are generally unfun. sorry.

    do not do that; the throwing away of your writings. keep them forever.

    that's just how i see it
    i could be wrong
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    I've thrown away or burned countless notebooks of poetry/songs.

    I'm not sure how I feel about that.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    the wolf wrote:
    I've thrown away or burned countless notebooks of poetry/songs.

    I'm not sure how I feel about that.

    and by the still warm ashes
    of yet another empty page
    it was pristine and crystalline clear to her how
    she had built her own fucking cage
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    saw a shadow across the backyard
    just beyond the tree line
    moving as you moved
    at one time
    my heart caught in my throat
    I called out
    but of course there was
    no answer
    heard a murmur in the hall
    sounded as you did
    at one time
    I cried out
    but, again there was
    no answer
    JoJo runs to the front door
    wagging all over
    as he always has
    he too hears
    no answer
    still and always
    no answer
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    There is a fairly large time discrepancy between the time you think you are done peeing, and the time you actualy ARE done peeing.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    the wolf wrote:
    There is a fairly large time discrepancy between the time you think you are done peeing, and the time you actualy ARE done peeing.

    LOL
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i should feel hungry but all i feel is blah.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ok its time to feed my mind.. tho reading jason ellis im not quite sure the hunger will be satiated. :lol:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mysticweed wrote:
    saw a shadow across the backyard
    just beyond the tree line
    moving as you moved
    at one time
    my heart caught in my throat
    I called out
    but of course there was
    no answer
    heard a murmur in the hall
    sounded as you did
    at one time
    I cried out
    but, again there was
    no answer
    JoJo runs to the front door
    wagging all over
    as he always has
    he too hears
    no answer
    still and always
    no answer


    this made a lump in my throat and it took a while before I could comment, you're something else G.

    Godfather.
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    I liked the way he said my name.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • supersonicyearssupersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    So many worlds within one world so distant from one another
    Never knowing what it's like to have or have not
    Some keep themselves locked within prisons
    If they could only see the key is right there
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • supersonicyearssupersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    You think it's about you but it's not.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Some decision has already been made in the sky.
    How does that affect our individual daily lives?
    We decide.
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  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    rollings wrote:
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life

    This is lovely. :)
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  • supersonicyearssupersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    justam wrote:
    rollings wrote:
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life

    This is lovely. :)
    and could go on for 12,004 pages
    at least 7
    easily

    it is the beginning of one epic poem and only printed in hard back cover
    often covered in dust and hidden to be kept safe
    it is housed in only finer libraries and schools yet should be read by low rent
    this is great poetic literature; the exact front of life written by rollings and her basketball dirtbike tires, trees, yoyos, finch and one seemingly intoxicated $4 vintage monkey cymbals smashing little shit resting on the couch next to her
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    supersonicyears wrote:
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    supersonicyears wrote:
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea

    some of the lovely ladies here wanted to do this about a year or so ago. i can't remember who, but they wanted to complie a collection and have it published.
    Peace, Love.

    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    supersonicyears wrote:
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea

    some of the lovely ladies here wanted to do this about a year or so ago. i can't remember who, but they wanted to complie a collection and have it published.

    lovely ladies?? then i sure know it wasnt me then. :lol:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i know i know i fuckin' know... last night even GIRLS was telling me so.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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