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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg
    When I see this I think of a life wasted. Long before the rains began.
    There could be a million tears shed for this dog.

    The ignorance that allows his potential love to be overlooked is infuriating.

    The heartbreaking life leading up to this photo is unconscionable.

    Life on a leash for a loving, vibrant dog who has the need to be Mans best friend,
    is cruel, thoughtless, selfish.

    To take a dog and train it to be as vile as its owner,
    to be feared by human and animal alike, is a heinous crime.

    "Death came around, forced to hear it's song
    And know tomorrow can't be depended on"

    I am a hopeful person and see him now in a loving family,
    the rains having saved him from a miserable life.

    He runs with a small boy and looks after his little girl.

    Waits on Dad in the evenings for a pat on the head and a bone.

    Curls in his mistress' arms at bedtime to hear his story time and again and listen to his song,
    a song of being saved, she sings softly

    "Hold me, and make it the truth,...
    That when all is lost there will be you.
    Cause to the universe I don't mean a thing
    And there's just one word that I still believe and it's
    Love,... love. love. love. love."

    And he has found the love he so deserves for the rest of his days.

    Because they are all good dogs,
    good dogs looking for good people.
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg
    When I see this I think of a life wasted. Long before the rains began.
    There could be a million tears shed for this dog.

    The ignorance that allows his potential love to be overlooked is infuriating.

    The heartbreaking life leading up to this photo is unconscionable.

    Life on a leash for a loving, vibrant dog who has the need to be Mans best friend,
    is cruel, thoughtless, selfish.

    To take a dog and train it to be as vile as its owner,
    to be feared by human and animal alike, is a heinous crime.

    "Death came around, forced to hear it's song
    And know tomorrow can't be depended on"

    I am a hopeful person and see him now in a loving family,
    the rains having saved him from a miserable life.

    He runs with a small boy and looks after his little girl.

    Waits on Dad in the evenings for a pat on the head and a bone.

    Curls in his mistress' arms at bedtime to hear his story time and again and listen to his song,
    a song of being saved, she sings softly

    "Hold me, and make it the truth,...
    That when all is lost there will be you.
    Cause to the universe I don't mean a thing
    And there's just one word that I still believe and it's
    Love,... love. love. love. love."

    And he has found the love he so deserves for the rest of his days.

    Because they are all good dogs,
    good dogs looking for good people.

    i agree with everything you said
    and it makes me so sad i cry
    i hope this flood
    "Washed" his love!
    and now he can smile
    and so can we :)
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg


    To take a dog and train it to be as vile as its owner,
    to be feared by human and animal alike, is a heinous crime.


    So true.

    I enjoyed your writing. (if 'enjoyed' is the right word)
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Not touching you
    hands retreat
    my fingers repeat distance again
    when I was inside of you
    I found home

    But you threw me away
    broken depressed wine bottles
    unwashed faces
    and mirrors piss my pants
    puking on me
    as food stamps feed my ribs and drug

    Wake up
    almost home
    the evening has burnt off
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    chadwick wrote:
    Not touching you
    hands retreat
    my fingers repeat distance again
    when I was inside of you
    I found home

    But you threw me away
    broken depressed wine bottles
    unwashed faces
    and mirrors piss my pants
    puking on me
    as food stamps feed my ribs and drug

    Wake up
    almost home
    the evening has burnt off


    Excellent
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg

    how great
    is a
    dog's life
    so
    they say
    but
    life is
    full of
    lonely days
    no one comes
    to talk or play
    they feed me once
    then go away
    i dream so much
    of puppy days

    sun and
    wind and
    blowing rain
    broiling summer
    snowy days
    how it
    blows
    and stings
    my ears
    yet no one
    sees me
    over here
    and when
    i sleep
    and dream away
    i always
    dream of
    puppy days

    once
    they said
    they'd love me
    always
    and treat
    me to the
    very best
    could they
    forget
    how much
    it means
    to feel
    an arm
    around
    my neck
    i miss the
    boy
    his silly
    grin
    and how we
    played
    in puppy
    days

    life is hard
    and life
    is cold
    so here i sit
    i'm growing
    old
    this chain is
    hard
    and oh so heavy
    how i fear
    they'll leave
    me here
    so much i miss
    my puppy days

    i've done
    my best
    i've loved
    them well
    protected
    them and
    kept them
    safe
    don't feel
    like loving
    yet i know
    i heard them say
    they'd love and cherish
    every day
    warmest hands
    and warmer hearts
    oh how
    i long for
    puppy days

    i'm so so tired
    and cold
    and lonely
    and if it rains
    forever now
    and if i go
    to heaven high
    it won't matter
    any way
    my heart
    was broken
    long before
    and when
    i take my
    last big sleep
    i hope
    its always
    puppy days
    please let
    me dream
    of
    puppy days
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    I dream of puppy days with my eyes so wide they water
    Smarting from the dream of summer fields and freedom
    Freedom from the demons that came to us in twilight
    That clamped their jaws so tightly. That shook us
    To the core
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    tremors wrote:
    I dream of puppy days with my eyes so wide they water
    Smarting from the dream of summer fields and freedom
    Freedom from the demons that came to us in twilight
    That clamped their jaws so tightly. That shook us
    To the core


    lovely
    i sure wish i had your talent ;)
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg

    how great
    is a
    dog's life
    so
    they say
    but
    life is
    full of
    lonely days
    no one comes
    to talk or play
    they feed me once
    then go away
    i dream so much
    of puppy days

    sun and
    wind and
    blowing rain
    broiling summer
    snowy days
    how it
    blows
    and stings
    my ears
    yet no one
    sees me
    over here
    and when
    i sleep
    and dream away
    i always
    dream of
    puppy days

    once
    they said
    they'd love me
    always
    and treat
    me to the
    very best
    could they
    forget
    how much
    it means
    to feel
    an arm
    around
    my neck
    i miss the
    boy
    his silly
    grin
    and how we
    played
    in puppy
    days

    life is hard
    and life
    is cold
    so here i sit
    i'm growing
    old
    this chain is
    hard
    and oh so heavy
    how i fear
    they'll leave
    me here
    so much i miss
    my puppy days

    i've done
    my best
    i've loved
    them well
    protected
    them and
    kept them
    safe
    don't feel
    like loving
    yet i know
    i heard them say
    they'd love and cherish
    every day
    warmest hands
    and warmer hearts
    oh how
    i long for
    puppy days

    i'm so so tired
    and cold
    and lonely
    and if it rains
    forever now
    and if i go
    to heaven high
    it won't matter
    any way
    my heart
    was broken
    long before
    and when
    i take my
    last big sleep
    i hope
    its always
    puppy days
    please let
    me dream
    of
    puppy days
    Puppy days, well done and heart wrenching.
    You capture the forgotten outside dog living life on a leash in a most sensitive way, his longing for his beloved Puppy Days.
    I don't understand people who could do that. Just forget them like that.
    My greatest blessings in my life have been my doggies loves. I'm not ashamed to say I'd rather be with an Animal, hey Eddie is singing that right now :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg
    When I see this I think of a life wasted. Long before the rains began.
    There could be a million tears shed for this dog.

    The ignorance that allows his potential love to be overlooked is infuriating.

    The heartbreaking life leading up to this photo is unconscionable.

    Life on a leash for a loving, vibrant dog who has the need to be Mans best friend,
    is cruel, thoughtless, selfish.

    To take a dog and train it to be as vile as its owner,
    to be feared by human and animal alike, is a heinous crime.

    "Death came around, forced to hear it's song
    And know tomorrow can't be depended on"

    I am a hopeful person and see him now in a loving family,
    the rains having saved him from a miserable life.

    He runs with a small boy and looks after his little girl.

    Waits on Dad in the evenings for a pat on the head and a bone.

    Curls in his mistress' arms at bedtime to hear his story time and again and listen to his song,
    a song of being saved, she sings softly

    "Hold me, and make it the truth,...
    That when all is lost there will be you.
    Cause to the universe I don't mean a thing
    And there's just one word that I still believe and it's
    Love,... love. love. love. love."

    And he has found the love he so deserves for the rest of his days.

    Because they are all good dogs,
    good dogs looking for good people.

    i agree with everything you said
    and it makes me so sad i cry
    i hope this flood
    "Washed" his love!
    and now he can smile
    and so can we :)
    :D
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg

    how great
    is a
    dog's life
    so
    they say
    but
    life is
    full of
    lonely days
    no one comes
    to talk or play
    they feed me once
    then go away
    i dream so much
    of puppy days

    sun and
    wind and
    blowing rain
    broiling summer
    snowy days
    how it
    blows
    and stings
    my ears
    yet no one
    sees me
    over here
    and when
    i sleep
    and dream away
    i always
    dream of
    puppy days

    once
    they said
    they'd love me
    always
    and treat
    me to the
    very best
    could they
    forget
    how much
    it means
    to feel
    an arm
    around
    my neck
    i miss the
    boy
    his silly
    grin
    and how we
    played
    in puppy
    days

    life is hard
    and life
    is cold
    so here i sit
    i'm growing
    old
    this chain is
    hard
    and oh so heavy
    how i fear
    they'll leave
    me here
    so much i miss
    my puppy days

    i've done
    my best
    i've loved
    them well
    protected
    them and
    kept them
    safe
    don't feel
    like loving
    yet i know
    i heard them say
    they'd love and cherish
    every day
    warmest hands
    and warmer hearts
    oh how
    i long for
    puppy days

    i'm so so tired
    and cold
    and lonely
    and if it rains
    forever now
    and if i go
    to heaven high
    it won't matter
    any way
    my heart
    was broken
    long before
    and when
    i take my
    last big sleep
    i hope
    its always
    puppy days
    please let
    me dream
    of
    puppy days
    Puppy days, well done and heart wrenching.
    You capture the forgotten outside dog living life on a leash in a most sensitive way, his longing for his beloved Puppy Days.
    I don't understand people who could do that. Just forget them like that.
    My greatest blessings in my life have been my doggies loves. I'm not ashamed to say I'd rather be with an Animal, hey Eddie is singing that right now :D

    Thanks...I know...it just breaks my heart
    my doggie is king of the castle!
    was then, is now, always will be <3
    all 85 pounds of him...heheheeeee

    animal? pj radio? i was listening in the car today....1,2,3,4, 5 against 1!
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    drowning.jpg


    To take a dog and train it to be as vile as its owner,
    to be feared by human and animal alike, is a heinous crime.


    So true.

    I enjoyed your writing. (if 'enjoyed' is the right word)
    Thank you and I so enjoy your poems.
    Often I want to give you a hug and make sure you are happy,
    that anything that has hurt is gone, that is the Mom in me :oops: :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    Puppy days, well done and heart wrenching.
    You capture the forgotten outside dog living life on a leash in a most sensitive way, his longing for his beloved Puppy Days.
    I don't understand people who could do that. Just forget them like that.
    My greatest blessings in my life have been my doggies loves. I'm not ashamed to say I'd rather be with an Animal, hey Eddie is singing that right now :D

    Thanks...I know...it just breaks my heart
    my doggie is king of the castle!
    was then, is now, always will be <3
    all 85 pounds of him...heheheeeee

    animal? pj radio? i was listening in the car today....1,2,3,4, 5 against 1!
    Hey our Lucy is about that size, biggest dog I ever had!
    Yes PJ radio, love it!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    chadwick wrote:
    Not touching you
    hands retreat
    my fingers repeat distance again
    when I was inside of you
    I found home

    But you threw me away
    broken depressed wine bottles
    unwashed faces
    and mirrors piss my pants
    puking on me
    as food stamps feed my ribs and drug

    Wake up
    almost home
    the evening has burnt off
    Dear Chadwick,
    You touch my heart, means a lot.
    I wonder if you can not say no to me ;)
    Thank you, you are very kind
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:

    I enjoyed your writing. (if 'enjoyed' is the right word)
    Thank you and I so enjoy your poems.
    Often I want to give you a hug and make sure you are happy,
    that anything that has hurt is gone, that is the Mom in me :oops: :D


    Thankyou - please don't worry tooooo much. I'm tough - seen a few sights. Have great family and friends. The hurt I find best setting loose by setting alight. It all burns off! There's a lot of material tho.

    As the man from the Shins says

    'But I learned fast how to keep my head up 'cause I
    Know there is this side of me that
    Wants to grab the yoke from the pilot and just
    Fly the whole mess into the sea.
    &
    Of course I was raised to gather courage from those
    Lofty tales so tried and true and
    If you're able I'd suggest it 'cause this
    Modern thought can get the best of you!'

    :)
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:

    I enjoyed your writing. (if 'enjoyed' is the right word)
    Thank you and I so enjoy your poems.
    Often I want to give you a hug and make sure you are happy,
    that anything that has hurt is gone, that is the Mom in me :oops: :D


    Thankyou - please don't worry tooooo much. I'm tough - seen a few sights. Have great family and friends. The hurt I find best setting loose by setting alight. It all burns off! There's a lot of material tho.

    As the man from the Shins says

    'But I learned fast how to keep my head up 'cause I
    Know there is this side of me that
    Wants to grab the yoke from the pilot and just
    Fly the whole mess into the sea.
    &
    Of course I was raised to gather courage from those
    Lofty tales so tried and true and
    If you're able I'd suggest it 'cause this
    Modern thought can get the best of you!'

    :)
    words to live by- I like that!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    sw5.jpg
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg


    the sun sets on a life not worth knowing
    and as she pulls away
    she has no idea where it is she is going
    all she knows is she aint going back
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg


    the sun sets on a life not worth knowing
    and as she pulls away
    she has no idea where it is she is going
    all she knows is she aint going back

    been there, done that
    and you've captured it so well
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg

    Edna is mighty dismayed
    Using 35mm film
    one hours wait
    Dammnit.
    She missed the UFO
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    DangDang wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg

    Edna is mighty dismayed
    Using 35mm film
    one hours wait
    Dammnit.
    She missed the UFO
    i agree with you
    that's exactly what i was thinking
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg


    the sun sets on a life not worth knowing
    and as she pulls away
    she has no idea where it is she is going
    all she knows is she aint going back


    I just love it !!!!! and the poem is perfect. I have about 6 more yrs - kids will be grown and hopefully out, so I'm hoping to disappear for awhile.... 8-)
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    mikalina wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    sw5.jpg


    the sun sets on a life not worth knowing
    and as she pulls away
    she has no idea where it is she is going
    all she knows is she aint going back


    I just love it !!!!! and the poem is perfect. I have about 6 more yrs - kids will be grown and hopefully out, so I'm hoping to disappear for awhile.... 8-)

    haha my youngest is 11 and so in 6 years shell be readying herself for uni, shes told me shes gonna live with me forever but theres no way ill allow that. when shes old enough i am outta here. 8-)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    :lol: I have to laugh - my son wants to live with me "forever" too. What is it with these KIDS!!!!

    Us moms have places to go and things to do.... ;)
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  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mikalina wrote:
    :lol: I have to laugh - my son wants to live with me "forever" too. What is it with these KIDS!!!!

    Us moms have places to go and things to do.... ;)

    thats funny, my son and I had this talk a while back because it's only 2 years till college, I told him
    he can do what ever he wants....... NOT !... he's going to a local city college for two years then to SDSU or
    USD if he's lucky and after he graduates then and only then can he move out if he wants.... :lol:
    they grow so fast so we're holding on as long as we can.. :D

    Godfather.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    mikalina wrote:
    :lol: I have to laugh - my son wants to live with me "forever" too. What is it with these KIDS!!!!

    Us moms have places to go and things to do.... ;)

    They'll go, they'll come back

    You'll go, they'll come back!!
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    tremors wrote:
    mikalina wrote:
    :lol: I have to laugh - my son wants to live with me "forever" too. What is it with these KIDS!!!!

    Us moms have places to go and things to do.... ;)

    They'll go, they'll come back

    You'll go, they'll come back!!


    absolutely..they will

    and then after a while...WE will

    heheheeeeeee :lol:
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    chadwick wrote:
    DangDang wrote:
    I also think that it would be well for "instant thoughts" to be forked into "instant thoughts" and another thread "instant messages"
    i fully agree.
    instant thoughts was created, was designed for spontaneous creative writing.
    it is not an instant message service.
    i do not want to be mean and nasty about it but it is out of control.

    thank you, dangdang.
    and thank you, pandora.

    let's get creative.
    i want to write poetry with you people.
    we need a workshop.

    every weekend i am hosting a poetry workshop in my backyard.
    bring a tent or a bag of weed.

    how about a tent bag full of weed?
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    I killed it
    a dream?
    yes
    dead by my hand
    emptiness
    guilt
    deserved?
    yes.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    this kills me... i relate.

    the pic is too big, and i don't know how to fix it.

    http://ih3.redbubble.net/work.1558016.5 ... tiness.jpg


    anybody have anything for it?
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
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