i read in here and in your posts for the past
that you are interested in what goes through a writer's head
am i correct?
yes very much so
insanity is as easy as i can explain it.
i do not know one single creative writer or artist of any kind that isn't out of their mind.
many are genius.
many are kind, gentle, and arrogant.
it is not owned
it just happens
im not genius.
im fucked in the head.
...............
feelings and thoughts coming down
like snowfall or dispersed fireworks
flame or chill
it is time
it is dreams
always her
she's always around
it is always her...
she held the power of love in her hand,..
the pale horse had arrived,.
but what of it's rider?
the ethereal sky brought with it
a distant memory,..
of a love unfulfilled,.. a wanting,... a need...
for the one that made her delicate skin crawl,..
for the one that made her breathe..
the one that always remained in clear sight,..
but just out of reach,..
a shadowy dream,....
a love denied.
Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
Cake, hey everyone likes cake,
even people like me who don't much like sweets.
Now I wonder why that is?
Is it the light composition?
Is it the fact it comes in many colors?
You can cut it with a feather
Maybe it is the frosting they like
and then they just leave the cake.
No I think it is the joy cake symbolizes.
From the time we are one year old,
barely realizing much in the world
there is the cake.
It is a beautiful sight.
It comes with a party too,
smiling faces and presents
and candles a light.
Each year whether we like to eat cake or not
we look forward to it as a symbol of celebration
on the anniversary of our birth.
The Joy of Cake is basic, it a celebration of life!
she held the power of love in her hand,..
the pale horse had arrived,.
but what of it's rider?
the ethereal sky brought with it
a distant memory,..
of a love unfulfilled,.. a wanting,... a need...
for the one that made her delicate skin crawl,..
for the one that made her breathe..
the one that always remained in clear sight,..
but just out of reach,..
a shadowy dream,....
a love denied.
This is just beautiful I can always count on you, thank you
Please may I ask, dear Wolf being so creative, could you leave a subject or pic to inspire another?
Cake, hey everyone likes cake,
even people like me who don't much like sweets.
Now I wonder why that is?
Is it the light composition?
Is it the fact it comes in many colors?
You can cut it with a feather
Maybe it is the frosting they like
and then they just leave the cake.
No I think it is the joy cake symbolizes.
From the time we are one year old,
barely realizing much in the world
there is the cake.
It is a beautiful sight.
It comes with a party too,
smiling faces and presents
and candles a light.
Each year whether we like to eat cake or not
we look forward to it as a symbol of celebration
on the anniversary of our birth.
The Joy of Cake is basic, it a celebration of life!
thank you!!!!
you're welcome got one for you talented lady,
my thought......a newborn in your arms
i fully agree.
instant thoughts was created, was designed for spontaneous creative writing.
it is not an instant message service.
i do not want to be mean and nasty about it but it is out of control.
thank you, dangdang.
and thank you, pandora.
let's get creative.
i want to write poetry with you people.
we need a workshop.
every weekend i am hosting a poetry workshop in my backyard.
bring a tent or a bag of weed.
How I wish.....
that is what I was thinking kind of like a workshop
wait...............
you are the host
what was i thinking?
I can be the organizer--This thread is sparking stuff, yes..STUFF, so instead of it being a giant conglomoration--not that theres anything wrong with giants or conglomorations--what say lets break it down into whatever creative category it might fall under, and create a separate thread for that.
Pandora, I already started a "cake" thread.
I think "Virtual Tent" might be a good thread name for the creativity workshop chat
or "analyze this" for the "post a painting, interpretative poetry" stuff.
Cake, hey everyone likes cake,
even people like me who don't much like sweets.
Now I wonder why that is?
Is it the light composition?
Is it the fact it comes in many colors?
You can cut it with a feather
Maybe it is the frosting they like
and then they just leave the cake.
No I think it is the joy cake symbolizes.
From the time we are one year old,
barely realizing much in the world
there is the cake.
It is a beautiful sight.
It comes with a party too,
smiling faces and presents
and candles a light.
Each year whether we like to eat cake or not
we look forward to it as a symbol of celebration
on the anniversary of our birth.
The Joy of Cake is basic, it a celebration of life!
thank you!!!!
you're welcome got one for you talented lady,
my thought......a newborn in your arms
rubbery squishy bloody cries
shiny new joy speaking to me
sweet smell and warmth fill the air
loving glow emanating from a little being
bliss bundled cradled in my arms suckling
my arms full of happiness...I smile
she held the power of love in her hand,..
the pale horse had arrived,.
but what of it's rider?
the ethereal sky brought with it
a distant memory,..
of a love unfulfilled,.. a wanting,... a need...
for the one that made her delicate skin crawl,..
for the one that made her breathe..
the one that always remained in clear sight,..
but just out of reach,..
a shadowy dream,....
a love denied.[/quote]
**** Such beautiful words filled with love and romance... Life is treating you well....
I can be the organizer--This thread is sparking stuff, yes..STUFF, so instead of it being a giant conglomoration--not that theres anything wrong with giants or conglomorations--what say lets break it down into whatever creative category it might fall under, and create a separate thread for that.
Pandora, I already started a "cake" thread.
I think "Virtual Tent" might be a good thread name for the creativity workshop chat
or "analyze this" for the "post a painting, interpretative poetry" stuff.
What say ya?
I thought maybe one thread so as to not scare away the people who are shy to post. I thought perhaps we have some hidden creative writers here who might just stick something in so to speak.
We can work off each other here it shouldn't get too messy just creative, creative is kind of good messy don't you think?
you're welcome got one for you talented lady,
my thought......a newborn in your arms
rubbery squishy bloody cries
shiny new joy speaking to me
sweet smell and warmth fill the air
loving glow emanating from a little being
bliss bundled cradled in my arms suckling
my arms full of happiness...I smile
I feel it, its been a long time for me and I feel it!
Nothing like it, "bliss bundled cradled" very beautiful skye
thank you
I can be the organizer--This thread is sparking stuff, yes..STUFF, so instead of it being a giant conglomoration--not that theres anything wrong with giants or conglomorations--what say lets break it down into whatever creative category it might fall under, and create a separate thread for that.
Pandora, I already started a "cake" thread.
I think "Virtual Tent" might be a good thread name for the creativity workshop chat
or "analyze this" for the "post a painting, interpretative poetry" stuff.
What say ya?
I thought maybe one thread so as to not scare away the people who are shy to post. I thought perhaps we have some hidden creative writers here who might just stick something in so to speak.
We can work off each other here it shouldn't get too messy just creative, creative is kind of good messy don't you think?
Very good idea !! maybe every so often something will come to my mind...
I thought maybe one thread so as to not scare away the people who are shy to post. I thought perhaps we have some hidden creative writers here who might just stick something in so to speak.
We can work off each other here it shouldn't get too messy just creative, creative is kind of good messy don't you think?
Very good idea !! maybe every so often something will come to my mind...
i read in here and in your posts for the past
that you are interested in what goes through a writer's head
am i correct?
yes very much so
insanity is as easy as i can explain it.
i do not know one single creative writer or artist of any kind that isn't out of their mind.
many are genius.
many are kind, gentle, and arrogant.
it is not owned
it just happens
im not genius.
im fucked in the head.
...............
feelings and thoughts coming down
like snowfall or dispersed fireworks
flame or chill
it is time
it is dreams
always her
she's always around
it is always her...
something like that
I thought this over for awhile and we have spoke of this before
when you tell me this I get the feeling your creativity is almost a separate entity,
driven. I think crazy is relative, we are all crazy to some degree, it is the passion in us.
great alternative.....like "caption this photo" only a little more elaborate, is that what you meant by posting a picture for others to write on?
I usually put my stuff in poetry and prose, and a lot of what hits me in the moment is in instant thoughts..but this sounds like a wonderful idea pandi!
great alternative.....like "caption this photo" only a little more elaborate, is that what you meant by posting a picture for others to write on?
I usually put my stuff in poetry and prose, and a lot of what hits me in the moment is in instant thoughts..but this sounds like a wonderful idea pandi!
Yes, let's get creative
cool... take me away
that Salvador Daly?? looks it... I love it
yes it is 1937 Knights of Death
this also 1937 Visions of Eternity
perhaps it inspires you?
I like starin into good paintings...thanks for this.. who knows, I might actually come up with somethin above and beyond myself for a change: )
I too find pictures and painting to be very inspiring, I get lost in them and find myself in them
please share here because you inspire the rest of us with your beautiful words and thoughts
I like the word - Passion - there is a inner passion. Not crazy....
that is just how I feel. Lucky to all of you who have a creative writing passion. Thank you.
I taught my kids to feel good about themselves and their feelings even when they are overwhelming. If anyone says they are a geek, like my Two Geeks thing I wrote, that that is a very good thing because that just means they are passionate about something. Never be ashamed of that. Same if they think they are"crazy" its just a passion, feeling very strongly and working it out in your head, finding who you are.
Maybe PASSION would be a good trigger word to write about. any takers?
I like the word - Passion - there is a inner passion. Not crazy....
that is just how I feel. Lucky to all of you who have a creative writing passion. Thank you.
I taught my kids to feel good about themselves and their feelings even when they are overwhelming. If anyone says they are a geek, like my Two Geeks thing I wrote, that that is a very good thing because that just means they are passionate about something. Never be ashamed of that. Same if they think they are"crazy" its just a passion, feeling very strongly and working it out in your head, finding who you are.
Maybe PASSION would be a good trigger word to write about. any takers?
may i?
she struggles to it let show
les it be manipulated
mangled further by one more
egocentrical fool
that thinks her passionate
true loving spirit
belongs to him
beg, borrow or steal
but she won't be held back
kept from letting her smile shine
her silliness fuels her
others laughter ignites her
to dance to such music
for it is in her.
and can't be turn off
beg, borrow or steel.
I thought this over for awhile and we have spoke of this before
when you tell me this I get the feeling your creativity is almost a separate entity,
driven. I think crazy is relative, we are all crazy to some degree, it is the passion in us.
uncontrollable passion.
it can only be that.
nothing else would explain it.
when something is so deeply powerful it creates a passion inside where beautiful madness reigns
nothing else can ever fill it
this energy remains hungry for all eternity.
then you are artistic.
or maybe i am bullshit
and have no idea
what i am talking about.
:crazy:
Comments
i read in here and in your posts for the past
that you are interested in what goes through a writer's head
am i correct?
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
So am i - but sometimes the writer needs to keep a few things private. But, please share what you can. I find the process very interesting....
its beautiful I think
i do not know one single creative writer or artist of any kind that isn't out of their mind.
many are genius.
many are kind, gentle, and arrogant.
it is not owned
it just happens
im not genius.
im fucked in the head.
...............
feelings and thoughts coming down
like snowfall or dispersed fireworks
flame or chill
it is time
it is dreams
always her
she's always around
it is always her...
something like that
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
this is not at ALL what came into my mind when reading the words "peanut butter and pearl jam"
"what a long, strange trip it's been"
i'll take one of this
and some nacho cheese doritos please
peanut butter pearl jam & doritos
not bad
not bad at all
i like milk too
thank you, godfather
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
she held the power of love in her hand,..
the pale horse had arrived,.
but what of it's rider?
the ethereal sky brought with it
a distant memory,..
of a love unfulfilled,.. a wanting,... a need...
for the one that made her delicate skin crawl,..
for the one that made her breathe..
the one that always remained in clear sight,..
but just out of reach,..
a shadowy dream,....
a love denied.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
thank you!!!!
This is just beautiful
Please may I ask, dear Wolf being so creative, could you leave a subject or pic to inspire another?
my thought......a newborn in your arms
I can be the organizer--This thread is sparking stuff, yes..STUFF, so instead of it being a giant conglomoration--not that theres anything wrong with giants or conglomorations--what say lets break it down into whatever creative category it might fall under, and create a separate thread for that.
Pandora, I already started a "cake" thread.
I think "Virtual Tent" might be a good thread name for the creativity workshop chat
or "analyze this" for the "post a painting, interpretative poetry" stuff.
What say ya?
rubbery squishy bloody cries
shiny new joy speaking to me
sweet smell and warmth fill the air
loving glow emanating from a little being
bliss bundled cradled in my arms suckling
my arms full of happiness...I smile
she held the power of love in her hand,..
the pale horse had arrived,.
but what of it's rider?
the ethereal sky brought with it
a distant memory,..
of a love unfulfilled,.. a wanting,... a need...
for the one that made her delicate skin crawl,..
for the one that made her breathe..
the one that always remained in clear sight,..
but just out of reach,..
a shadowy dream,....
a love denied.[/quote]
**** Such beautiful words filled with love and romance... Life is treating you well....
We can work off each other here it shouldn't get too messy just creative, creative is kind of good messy don't you think?
Nothing like it, "bliss bundled cradled" very beautiful skye
thank you
Very good idea !! maybe every so often something will come to my mind...
that's what I was hoping we can help each other
when you tell me this I get the feeling your creativity is almost a separate entity,
driven. I think crazy is relative, we are all crazy to some degree, it is the passion in us.
that Salvador Daly?? looks it... I love it
that is just how I feel. Lucky to all of you who have a creative writing passion. Thank you.
this also 1937 Visions of Eternity
perhaps it inspires you?
and I like the way you feel : )
tho maybe a lil bit o crazy gets the passion really going? I don't know... at times crazy's all I got
please share here because you inspire the rest of us with your beautiful words and thoughts
Maybe PASSION would be a good trigger word to write about.
may i?
she struggles to it let show
les it be manipulated
mangled further by one more
egocentrical fool
that thinks her passionate
true loving spirit
belongs to him
beg, borrow or steal
but she won't be held back
kept from letting her smile shine
her silliness fuels her
others laughter ignites her
to dance to such music
for it is in her.
and can't be turn off
beg, borrow or steel.
angels share laughter
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
it can only be that.
nothing else would explain it.
when something is so deeply powerful it creates a passion inside where beautiful madness reigns
nothing else can ever fill it
this energy remains hungry for all eternity.
then you are artistic.
or maybe i am bullshit
and have no idea
what i am talking about.
:crazy:
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
nuh.. i dont play games.
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
Hi across/oceans - passion mixed with a little bit of crazy .... good combination... :thumbup: