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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna sat in her room wondering if she had the answer. she certainly didn't find it at dizzy's. she was tired. it was time to be some place else.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She had vaguely hoped he would be there, ever since last saw him she felt more empty then before her little E.R. episode.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey really was the only thing holding her here. think anna think. i closed my eyes and smiled at the thought of him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    A true lover and friend he is, no need keeping a brave face when I'm around him.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i need him. i need him. i need him. now.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I'll, I'll ... call him. God no, ... you stupit cunt.....why did I fuck up the phone?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    breathe, breathe, count to ten. i didn't realise it but when i looked down i'd been scoring a groove up my arm with my thumbnail. not good anna, not good.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey, ... why isn't anyone there for me, oh Annie do something .... why isn't anyone doing anything!
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    no i won't do this. how can i expect anyone to be there if i can't be there for myself? fuck you anna and fuck you davey fuck you.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Fuck you mother and fuck my fucking father, .... and Davey you're supposed to be so reliable,... where are you now, best that you just piss off all together.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey stood on the street looking up at the red curtains that hung in anna's kitchen, contemplating whether or not he should go to her.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    davey stood on the street looking up at the red curtains that hung in anna's kitchen, contemplating whether or not he should go to her.


    Not to sure he walked to the door, stopped half way to it and leand agaist a lantern, to once more overthink what he was going to say.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    he sighed, decided if he didn't do it now he never would, then closed the gap between him and anna.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ringing the bell he got the distinct feeling something was wrong upstairs and got his keys out of his pocket.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    standing in front of a canvas when davey came through the door, anna stared at him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey ... Davey......you.. you don't look ....so good, Apparently that's what I said as I slipped out of consciousness.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i woke up in a hospital bed, my sister sitting anxiously by my side. i managed to say davey's name before the door opened.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    But fell back on my pillow to weak to do anything, god when I think back on that day I still feel the shame and dissapointment in myself.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the nurse checked my vitals and asked how we were doing in that patronising tone they get when you seriously do not want to be lying in bed and they know they're in control. my sister held her tongue until nurse betty left.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well here we are once more, my beautiful sister, she smile uneasy, why do you insist on meeting here?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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