a new short poem

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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    when the time is right
    the moment has passed
    its like youve just decided
    to jump into the net
    when the time comes
    to reach out with the moment
    the inception is a blueprint
    for the seconds ahead
    love for the shy
    is a heart attack
    love for the shy
    is a heart attack

    she loves me
    she loves me not
    she loves me
    she loves me not

    when the time is right
    stay there with it
    cause youll live with regret
    and youll never know
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    replenish the edit
    erase the dork
    contained in the mind
    this is a call
    bits of rambling voyage
    into the realm of
    spontanious descent
    replenish the edit
    a nation of youth
    revolutionize pits
    to erase the truth
    that soft interiors need
    a second chance to be
    something more than this
    redundant dork within
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    every little thing about you
    i miss
    my soul begins haunting itself
    instantly
    down the road
    down the road
    such a sad picture
    whys it have to be this way

    im not the father i wish to be
    my patience deteriorates
    haunting me
    its only been minutes
    since youve been gone
    i pray to god now
    for your safety alon
    this lonely road
    this lonely road
    such a sad picture
    why it have to be this way
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    renewed inspiration
    a little on the rainy side
    falling down the slopes of face
    landscaped veins
    happens
    when your so far away

    other than the morning
    or the evening time
    im a little out of word
    and thats when i come

    to say a little sorrow
    to invent something within
    new or unheard of
    by eyes that seen this hand

    and your so fay away now
    on the outside
    im iron steel
    but on the inside
    just a rusted wheel
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    my baby
    my little baby
    sing to me
    bring me to life
    im following you home
    but i dont want your anger
    just want your smile
    just want your picture
    come to life
    my baby
    my little baby
    how i understand
    that i feel a need
    to be with you
    right now
    write now
    bring me to life
    ami suppossed to hide
    or reveal this face
    i just dont know the rules
    my baby
    my little baby
    nothing i can do for you
    just sit here wasting time
    wondering how life can be
    such a seperated highway
    and as i drive by
    i look for your face
    as your with me
    wanna set you free
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    easing into gear
    the nerves are healing
    slowly building speed
    heart is softening
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i know what i might be thinking
    cmon theres no way im feelin this way
    this love for you in an infinite stage
    how could this love be for real
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    after reading this thread i sure wish the edit/delete option wer still available
    my god when someone writes such pure unintelligent thoughts someones supposed to reveal themselves and say "hey,you suck kevin"

    thank you
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    for awhile i thought this would end
    someday youd give me your hand
    but lately ive realized
    that i may never do the things
    i dream of doing
    that i might just fade away
    as a nothingman
    in my little town

    if i could id live with kids
    if i could id sing to the world black
    if i could someday id ask you all the whys storred up inside my mind
    but life isnt about freedom i guess
    and all these choices i made
    led me to this road of emptiness
    and its here that i hate you most
    and its here that i hate myself
    and its here that i wish i were dead

    i will always hate you
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    why i wonder its so hard for the ones i love the most to actually sit and listen to me play for more than ten minutes is one reason i will never love you
    there are millions of these stupid questions for you and ive reached a point where i figure i might live on social security for the rest of my life
    that i may never sing songs to a group a people who admire the band that sorrounds

    ellaine this thread is dedicated to how much i truly hate you forever
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i hate you
    more than
    the skies are blue
    and when its grey
    and full of rain
    i think of your pain

    it must be lonely
    doing what you do
    but i cant forgive
    the shit i been through

    and when the day
    comes to an end
    i listen to the song
    again and again

    your just not sensitive
    to my families picture
    respect has eluded you
    and forever i will
    hate you
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I don't understand how people can suddenly hate people they previously loved. I have never been able to do that.

    Does it help you to separate if you find hate? I'm curious because it seems so foreign to me.
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    justam wrote:
    I don't understand how people can suddenly hate people they previously loved. I have never been able to do that.

    Does it help you to separate if you find hate? I'm curious because it seems so foreign to me.
    It does help, only it isn't as easy as it sounds ...

    Hatred at least doesn't require the other person to feel the same way about you. it's the easy way out, if you know what I mean.
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Jamal wrote:
    It does help, only it isn't as easy as it sounds ...

    Hatred at least doesn't require the other person to feel the same way about you. it's the easy way out, if you know what I mean.

    That's the way it seems when I see it.
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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i was taught to hate
    and in response
    i hate her

    of all the time here on earth
    theres only a percentage
    of it thats worth all the
    hate i feel for her
    all the time i spend alive
    wishing that i was sleeping

    all these years wasted

    i never was good at good things
    but im good at hating her forever

    oh and i never loved her
    never spent time with her
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out

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