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kdpjam
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when he woke this morning, it felt like he had been sleeping for years;
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~
~it is shining it is shining~
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kdpjam wrote:when he woke this morning, it felt like he had been sleeping for years;There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:stagnant air shoved from the ceiling fan sank in his throat
an overcast day outside in which to make his way.lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
kdpjam wrote:an overcast day outside in which to make his way.There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:but, first, he had to wake up. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tasted better. he took his time.lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
kdpjam wrote:and the coffee tasted better. he took his time.There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:mesmerized by cloud formations he thinks of travel
the further away, his mind was close therelay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
the further away, his mind is closer there.
have to keep the tense!lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
kdpjam wrote:the further away, his mind was close thereThere is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:his mind ran quickly home when his tie dipped in the toaster
time to take off the tie that chokes. the walk-in closet just as cluttered as his thought; where is my suitcase anyway ? he pondered.lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
He wakes feeling unsung years beneath his skin
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there;
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster
OK kdpjam, what do you think? I took some liberties, I hope you don't mind.There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:He wakes feeling unsung years beneath his skin
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there;
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster
OK kdpjam, what do you think? I took some liberties, I hope you don't mind.
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there;
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster.
Time to take off the tie that chokes. The walk-in closet just as cluttered as his thought; where is my suitcase anyway? He pondersThere is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:He wakes feeling unsung years beneath his skin
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there;
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster
OK kdpjam, what do you think? I took some liberties, I hope you don't mind.
i really like it bib.... its greatthanks for making it better~
lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
kdpjam wrote:i really like it bib.... its great
thanks for making it better~
There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:He wakes feeling unsung years beneath his skin
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there;
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster.
Time to take off the tie that chokes. The walk-in closet just as cluttered as his thought; where is my suitcase anyway? He ponderslay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
kdpjam wrote:and what do i do when i find it? his heart sank.There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird0 -
Bibliobella wrote:Careless with our hero's heart a mouse ran across the kitchen floor.
the weary day was awakening now;lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0 -
With new thoughts
and new reflections
he chose another different way to live his life.A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?0 -
kdpjam wrote:a life in which he wanted to face his days; no more sleeping for what seemed an eternity
And no more of an eternity to lay sleepingA whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?0 -
great! here is what we have so far:
He wakes feeling unsung years beneath his skin
as the ceiling fan shoves stagnant air down his throat.
An overcast day outside in which to make his way~
within which he chooses to wake. This choice is a bad-tasting vitamin
and the coffee tastes better. He takes his time.
Mesmorizing cloud formations fill his eyes with visions of travel
the further away, his mind is closer there.
his mind sprints quickly home when his tie dips in the toaster.
Time to take off the tie that chokes. The walk-in closet just as cluttered as his thought; where is my suitcase anyway? He ponders~
and what do i do when i find it? his heart sank.
Careless with our hero's heart,
a mouse ran across the kitchen floor.
The weary day was awakening now!
With new thoughts and new reflections he chooses another
different way to live his life.
A life in which he wanted to face his days; no more
sleeping for what seemed an eternity~
and no more of an an eternity to lay sleeping.lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
~it is shining it is shining~0
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