Poems About Poetry

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  • Whats all this mumbo jumbo?
    Who is it that tells us what to say and how to say it?
    I say up yours I do what I want.
    Words arent to be written as one would tell us
    Words are written from the heart, and experiences we have had.
    Do words not describe emotion?
    You could sit and ponder about what words to put down on paper
    Why? Let it flow from your heart to your fingertips.
    If I feel like being a bitch today,
    than so be it,, it is my perogative to do so.
    And today my friend is the day, Im bitchy so therefore a bitchy poem.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Ah, fugh. Read line eight as "and make the sound of rain that falls as rain".
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.

    This, sir, is the real deal. Not just a great poem about poetry, but a great poem and good advice that I'd do well to think about. The first stanza is magic; who hasn't felt that way and tried, with varying results? I must endeavor more often to speak my mouth; masks always look silly on me anyway.
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  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain that falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.

    I love it!!!!

    it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    ISN wrote:
    (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)

    you must be talking about spell-checking all the instances of the words the and poetry we include in our posts...they are so often misspelled!

    :)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    ISN wrote:
    I love it!!!!

    it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)

    Glad you liked my poem. I think a poem, however written, should really be a simple question. And as Einstein once said, when the questions are simple, then you can hear God thinking. :)
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    charles wrote:
    raps spar,

    step on no pets,

    grown wrong,
    -what?~*#/!!

    haha! This is really neat!
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  • dyna2
    dyna2 Posts: 14
    Mancun Idolatry

    settled in the words grew long
    winded and I gasped for air
    never succinct, all rescinded
    my titles, my line, my fair and winding stair
    those that began and ended in iron

    poems oh such math and caterwaul
    my feline screams and my cosine factored
    sketched these words in rusted spackle
    walking the midnight fence in prowl and under moon
    art the mess, the dress and the hard-flung spoon

    you missed me you missed me
    now you gotta kiss me

    WHAO now watch this tail make an exit
    no poet in need of lessons HERE, I can tell you that
    there are other allies for this particular cat, each of brick and scat,
    and limestone fossils that remind me of home
    ah but head held high with ne'er my silken fur disturbed,
    nor my alertness prone...
    I take the dew claw
    and carve this pome.
    "Who was that guy?"
    "Jesus Christ."
    "Seriously, man, don't be an asshole, who was he really?"
    "Jesus Christ."
    "No shit? What'd he want?"
    "My apple pie and a cigarette."
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Students, note the gullet is enlarged
    by a science dictionary. Words
    of unknown origin, engorged,
    spew from his lips and penning fingers. Curds
    of dribble in self-claim of genius
    bleed from his swollen sensibilities.
    They must be treated with a serious
    hilarity. Note insecurities
    abounding in such ramblings as this:
    "I am a freeform poet, they are cold
    and stilted". Use the bedpan for that dross.
    You might be fooled that he's well. I'm old,
    experienced and know the symptoms well.
    Oh, one more thing. Protect against the smell.
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:

    Libraries

    With a collapsible history they hush about you
    To deride the failings of a many,
    Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
    The impossible lightness of shelves.

    There are endless pages. Still the world waits.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:

    Libraries

    With a collapsible history they hush about you
    To deride the failings of a many,
    Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
    The impossible lightness of shelves.

    There are endless pages. Still the world waits.

    Quick improv:

    The gnome with the black hat in the library
    has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
    and her nose is pressed on the page
    underlining the word 'quaynte'
    quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.

    ;)
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Quick improv:

    The gnome with the black hat in the library
    has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
    and her nose is pressed on the page
    underlining the word 'quaynte'
    quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.

    ;)

    ...like a jazz saxaphonist with a sense of humour. :)
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    by the way, Finns..."Poetaster" is downright hilarious. Bravo!
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    so, i was thinking about poems about poetry and remembered a neat poem I had read a while back, where the poem itself was the subject of the poem. I can't remember the name of the poem, the author of the poem or exactly how the poem goes...i just basically remember the concept. so, borrowing the concept, I wrote my own. if anyone knows the poem that inspired this, let me know and/or post it! anywho, here is mine:

    Fine Poem

    But don't fall in love with it,
    it don't love you
    nor does it seek approval.
    It may not even desire to be read,
    fine poem that it is.
    I haven't even read it.
    I certainly didn't create it.
    It just always was, somewhere, somehow,
    these symbols, phonetics, sounds.
    This poem breathes like you.
    Don't take it for granted;
    don't sideswipe or jabberjaw it.
    Never talk down to it, coddle it, or inflame it.
    Refrain from molesting it, double-crossing it, or swindling it.
    Please do not read meaning into it,
    or commit it to memory,
    or hold it dear,
    or be passionate about it.
    This poem is indifferent to ages and canons.
    It is not an effigy, an elegy, a eulogy or doggerel.
    It is not an affront, an attack, a lambaste or tripe.
    It has no lineage or pedigree.
    It is not a Citizen of Time
    or Maker of Dreams.
    It may sneak up upon you.
    The smarmy bastard might scare you!
    Please do not scare it back,
    for it is not a game-player, a sooth-sayer or a tickler.
    It does not purport to reveal higher truths, transcendent concepts, or philosophy du jour.
    'Tis no masterpiece, opus, swan song, cartouche, milieu, cartouche, flambe, frieze, or chocolate.
    It hates being referred to as High Concept, avante garde, and Neo-Objectivist.
    It is not a soapbox for the grandiosely absurd.
    This poem has no moral standing
    or rhythmic preference;
    It is not capable of caring about your day.
    But if you tilt your head in close, friend,
    closer to the paper, the page, the pulp,
    if you tilt your head in close
    and hold your breath right tight
    you might just hear it's heartbeat
    like sunbeams dancing off water.
    It's a fine poem, alright,
    but don't fall in love with it.
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Smile, nod, it's OK,
    Lots of poems start this way!
    If reading it gives you trouble
    Just imagine it as subtle
    And proceed to the next
    Brief but wise block of text.
    Smile, nod, it's OK,
    Lots of poems go that way,
    And in any particular case
    This poem is not my glued-on face.
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  • "Fine Poem" is extraordinary....never read anything like it (must have missed the poem that 'inspired' it...sorry, I can't help you out w/ that info.)

    carry on!
    i can still bite my toenails.
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
    My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
    and I have been waiting.
    Years, now, I've waited,
    long, apocryphal years,
    time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
    Many false muses rose to meet me:
    sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
    Where were you, fair clarity?
    In your inspired toy-land
    trouncing about,
    choosing the time of your arrival
    so eloquently, dramatically,
    as to render me inert?
    Now that you're here
    better give me all you got.
    I probably won't take no for an answer.
    I suffered for you.
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    in my poem "Fine Poem" I certainly did not intend to repeat the word 'cartouche'...please disregard the first appearance of the word.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
    My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
    and I have been waiting.
    Years, now, I've waited,
    long, apocryphal years,
    time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
    Many false muses rose to meet me:
    sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
    Where were you, fair clarity?
    In your inspired toy-land
    trouncing about,
    choosing the time of your arrival
    so eloquently, dramatically,
    as to render me inert?
    Now that you're here
    better give me all you got.
    I probably won't take no for an answer.
    I suffered for you.


    You've certainly got the muse's attention, and ours, too. Thanks, Groovster. :)