Poems About Poetry

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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:

    Libraries

    With a collapsible history they hush about you
    To deride the failings of a many,
    Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
    The impossible lightness of shelves.

    There are endless pages. Still the world waits.
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  • OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:

    Libraries

    With a collapsible history they hush about you
    To deride the failings of a many,
    Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
    The impossible lightness of shelves.

    There are endless pages. Still the world waits.

    Quick improv:

    The gnome with the black hat in the library
    has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
    and her nose is pressed on the page
    underlining the word 'quaynte'
    quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.

    ;)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Quick improv:

    The gnome with the black hat in the library
    has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
    and her nose is pressed on the page
    underlining the word 'quaynte'
    quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.

    ;)

    ...like a jazz saxaphonist with a sense of humour. :)
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    by the way, Finns..."Poetaster" is downright hilarious. Bravo!
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    so, i was thinking about poems about poetry and remembered a neat poem I had read a while back, where the poem itself was the subject of the poem. I can't remember the name of the poem, the author of the poem or exactly how the poem goes...i just basically remember the concept. so, borrowing the concept, I wrote my own. if anyone knows the poem that inspired this, let me know and/or post it! anywho, here is mine:

    Fine Poem

    But don't fall in love with it,
    it don't love you
    nor does it seek approval.
    It may not even desire to be read,
    fine poem that it is.
    I haven't even read it.
    I certainly didn't create it.
    It just always was, somewhere, somehow,
    these symbols, phonetics, sounds.
    This poem breathes like you.
    Don't take it for granted;
    don't sideswipe or jabberjaw it.
    Never talk down to it, coddle it, or inflame it.
    Refrain from molesting it, double-crossing it, or swindling it.
    Please do not read meaning into it,
    or commit it to memory,
    or hold it dear,
    or be passionate about it.
    This poem is indifferent to ages and canons.
    It is not an effigy, an elegy, a eulogy or doggerel.
    It is not an affront, an attack, a lambaste or tripe.
    It has no lineage or pedigree.
    It is not a Citizen of Time
    or Maker of Dreams.
    It may sneak up upon you.
    The smarmy bastard might scare you!
    Please do not scare it back,
    for it is not a game-player, a sooth-sayer or a tickler.
    It does not purport to reveal higher truths, transcendent concepts, or philosophy du jour.
    'Tis no masterpiece, opus, swan song, cartouche, milieu, cartouche, flambe, frieze, or chocolate.
    It hates being referred to as High Concept, avante garde, and Neo-Objectivist.
    It is not a soapbox for the grandiosely absurd.
    This poem has no moral standing
    or rhythmic preference;
    It is not capable of caring about your day.
    But if you tilt your head in close, friend,
    closer to the paper, the page, the pulp,
    if you tilt your head in close
    and hold your breath right tight
    you might just hear it's heartbeat
    like sunbeams dancing off water.
    It's a fine poem, alright,
    but don't fall in love with it.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Smile, nod, it's OK,
    Lots of poems start this way!
    If reading it gives you trouble
    Just imagine it as subtle
    And proceed to the next
    Brief but wise block of text.
    Smile, nod, it's OK,
    Lots of poems go that way,
    And in any particular case
    This poem is not my glued-on face.
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  • "Fine Poem" is extraordinary....never read anything like it (must have missed the poem that 'inspired' it...sorry, I can't help you out w/ that info.)

    carry on!
    i can still bite my toenails.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
    My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
    and I have been waiting.
    Years, now, I've waited,
    long, apocryphal years,
    time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
    Many false muses rose to meet me:
    sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
    Where were you, fair clarity?
    In your inspired toy-land
    trouncing about,
    choosing the time of your arrival
    so eloquently, dramatically,
    as to render me inert?
    Now that you're here
    better give me all you got.
    I probably won't take no for an answer.
    I suffered for you.
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    in my poem "Fine Poem" I certainly did not intend to repeat the word 'cartouche'...please disregard the first appearance of the word.
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  • Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
    My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
    and I have been waiting.
    Years, now, I've waited,
    long, apocryphal years,
    time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
    Many false muses rose to meet me:
    sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
    Where were you, fair clarity?
    In your inspired toy-land
    trouncing about,
    choosing the time of your arrival
    so eloquently, dramatically,
    as to render me inert?
    Now that you're here
    better give me all you got.
    I probably won't take no for an answer.
    I suffered for you.


    You've certainly got the muse's attention, and ours, too. Thanks, Groovster. :)
  • You've certainly got the muse's attention, and ours, too. Thanks, Groovster. :)


    You sure do. Keep this thread going, it's truly entertaining!
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    dyna2 wrote:

    you missed me you missed me
    now you gotta kiss me


    these lines keep coming back to me....just so childlike....but they resonate!
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Groovster....I love fine poem (and your use of italics in it and with first....and also I think 'to a muse' is particularly awesome.....yoru sense of hummous is so spot-on.....I wonder about you sometimes.....I was going to send you a pm....cos you're so curious.....don't go away anytime soon.....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I like teh phrase 'apocryphal years'....were they lean?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    ISN wrote:
    Groovster....I love fine poem (and your use of italics in it and with first....and also I think 'to a muse' is particularly awesome.....yoru sense of hummous is so spot-on.....I wonder about you sometimes.....I was going to send you a pm....cos you're so curious.....don't go away anytime soon.....:)

    I'll be staying around for awhile....I've still got plenty of stuff that I want to burden you guys with. :)


    PM me to your hearts content!
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    ISN wrote:
    I like teh phrase 'apocryphal years'....were they lean?


    lean, yes. and quite unnecessary.
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