Poems About Poetry

grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ever since reading Marianne Moore's Poetry, I've loved poems about poetry. It's so fun! I'll start off.
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  • Reading a poem
    Aloud, to yourself,
    In the middle of the night
    Is such a useless endeavor
    You may as well
    Spend your time
    Burning your socks,
    Or eating fingernails.
    You may as well
    Bundle yourself up
    And wade onto your lawn
    For a healthy
    Midnight constitutional.
    Have yourself a dose
    Of real air
    Without shadowed phrases
    Or canned emotion.
    The night sky being a picture
    (and therefore worth
    plenty of words)
    A walk outside
    Under it
    Will be much better for you
    Than stuffy verse
    Read aloud by a fool like you
    Could even pretend to be.
    Have a keen listen
    To the moderated way
    The Dogwoods rustle
    In that Northeast breeze,
    The way the leaves only pretend
    To touch each other.
    All the sound,
    It seems,
    Comes from within
    Each individual leaf;
    The tree somehow a chorus
    Of choruses
    Singing not to be heard
    But only to be worth hearing.
    And keep alert for wildlife:
    It's alive at night.
    The hopping and scurrying
    You'll hear all around you
    Is Nature winding Her clock,
    Pushing life forward
    In all it's forms
    While in the lightless houses
    Men sleep oblivious.
    It's all there,
    In your backyard:
    The birthings, homecomings
    And inevitable finalities
    Of so many
    Valiant creations
    Racing to-and-fro
    In arcs of invisible light.
    Soak it all up,
    And when you feel
    You can bear no more,
    Go on back inside
    (making sure you have
    put your book away,
    done the dishes,
    drawn the drapes,
    and fed the cats)
    Slither out of your shoes
    And coat,
    Pull the blankets back,
    Get cozy,
    And drift into wistful,
    Unsymbolic sleep.

    Reading a poem
    Aloud, to yourself,
    In the middle of the night
    Is such a useless endeavor
    That I have heard of folks
    Who, after having done it,
    Set off fireworks,
    Or have wept overtop
    Their mother's urn
    Until it held only mud.
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    I am surrounded by fire
    and my crown almost leaves
    the card
    when I write I'm large
    I'm an Amazon
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • This is an old poem I wrote back in September but I'll post it here. It's inspired by my favourite poet, Patrick Kavanagh.

    Great thread, grooveamatic.


    Paddy Kavanagh, you were Behaned
    I know, but laying down in the chest hospital
    you heard the rustling leaves outside
    tell you St Stephen's Green would teach you
    not to care, not to fret about the poets' rows in McDaid's
    on George Moore's use of the semi-colon,
    and not to care about the men who would begin
    their book tomorrow, better than your own four volumes.

    Paddy, teach me to go out on the river bank,
    where bridge shadows speak the mysteries of what
    brought me first to love a word as a glimmer in a field,
    a flashing fox eye, the streak of a tail,
    the reedwhoosh of a now, and free me from all else
    but to be romantically reborn in the freedom from contention.
  • Fins--"reedwhoosh"...very cool.
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  • I am surrounded by fire
    and my crown almost leaves
    the card
    when I write I'm large
    I'm an Amazon


    Couldn't have put it better myself. Something about the simplicity of the line "when I write I'm large" strikes me as being truly great.
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  • jboelhowjboelhow Posts: 170
    The words seem so clear
    when running along the keyboard
    of my creativity
    Somewhere, along the neurological
    pathways, between grey matter and
    muscle
    The poem becomes boxed
    caged in expectations
    The language screams for rules
    Noun, simile, semi colon
    The paper shies away from my emotions
    The reader must understand
    But they are my words
    my words
    my
    words
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I've posted this one before, but this seems like a good home for it.


    Amateur Poets

    I read all about us
    In magazines
    Or journals
    All the time.
    It seems
    There are too many of us
    And we depress those chosen few
    Who have--
    On occasion--
    Recieved money
    To do
    What I do
    In order to breathe;
    These professionals
    Horde more money yet
    By churning out
    Insightful
    How-to
    Articles and detailed
    Diagrams on
    How To Break Into The Biz.
    Meanwhile, the rest of us
    Keep grinding it out,
    Pushing life through
    A hole in a tomato.

    Somewhere there is a
    Probably small patch of
    Imagined land,
    Where
    The poet who is paid in money
    And the poet who is paid in toil
    Can meet, if only
    In ideals and dark dreams.
    If all us classes of poets
    Were to someday have a meeting there,
    I think I'd raise my hand
    And point out
    The only professional poet
    I've ever met
    Is the tree which stands in my backyard,
    And it hasn't written anything new
    In ages.
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  • charles wrote:
    This is not a peom
    cause it don't mean a thing
    and poem don't spell like that

    haha! quite unique! refreshing
    i can still bite my toenails.
  • A Political Poet?

    He Googles for some gruesome news: Oil slicks
    in the Arctic, forest fires down
    under. Then he chops up details, sticks
    them here and there and in an overblown
    tone of 'irony' begins to list
    hypocrisies in govermental tears
    for birds and trees that perish. He'll resist
    all subtleties. A tone that overbears
    to shout a coarse polemic is his norm.
    Oh, sure, he'll catch an audience, he shall
    please readers without subtlety or gorm
    to know good poetry-political
    from cheap and easy ditties for applause
    that reword news, sans insight, thought or pause.
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    A Political Poet?

    He Googles for some gruesome news: Oil slicks
    in the Arctic, forest fires down
    under. Then he chops up details, sticks
    them here and there and in an overblown
    tone of 'irony' begins to list
    hypocrisies in govermental tears
    for birds and trees that perish. He'll resist
    all subtleties. A tone that overbears
    to shout a coarse polemic is his norm.
    Oh, sure, he'll catch an audience, he shall
    please readers without subtlety or gorm
    to know good poetry-political
    from cheap and easy ditties for applause
    that reword news, sans insight, thought or pause.

    In my younger days I was surely guilty of this. And nowadays I still see these poems with alarming frequency. You call them out in grand fashion; it scathes. It's been a long time since I worked in form, but this looks like a sonnet to me. A scathing poetry-based sonnet! Now that's just cool!
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  • It's in a kind of Shakespearean sonnet form without the ninth-line volta. ababcdcdefefgg, yes.

    Thanks.
  • Can't believe I missed out the 'n' in typing 'governmental' up there in the last poem. Just had to correct that. Don't want anyone to think I'm thick.
  • This is very interesting groovematic
    I thought id just add to it for a little fun. Been out of the writing for a while, but i need a little pick me up.

    How can I write a poem from my heart?
    Where do I even start?
    Shall I write about how we fell apart?
    Or how we fought at Super Wal-Mart?
    How you ran into me with the shopping cart?
    No, I'm really not that smart
    Oh forget it! I'm having a major Brain Fart.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    This is very interesting groovematic
    I thought id just add to it for a little fun. Been out of the writing for a while, but i need a little pick me up.

    How can I write a poem from my heart?
    Where do I even start?
    Shall I write about how we fell apart?
    Or how we fought at Super Wal-Mart?
    How you ran into me with the shopping cart?
    No, I'm really not that smart
    Oh forget it! I'm having a major Brain Fart.

    Ha! That's great! Any poem that can make me smile like that gets my vote...thanks!
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  • If i can make someone smile every day,,,than ive accomplished my goal for the day!
    Glad to put a smile on your face!
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    So, here is a poem I wrote a few years back. It's not a good poem--there are major problems with it that I won't even try and fix. But every time I come across it I smile, and it fits quite well in here, so here it is:

    July 19, 2001

    The art of poetry is a simple one
    Yet also most complex.
    If it weren't for it's ungratifying nature
    I might compare it to sex.
    It pits you directly against yourself--
    Much to your consternation--
    And amid your thoughts of life and death
    Poetry becomes masturbation.
    It is an art that must leap from you,
    As every poet knows;
    And it hangs on your lips and cheeks:
    Poetry, blowing it's nose.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I write peoms...because I am illiterate and much more
    I add dots....because punctuation is a whore
    I object to all teh peots living now
    I will pass teh test of time

    I'm a peot
    and I hope
    that you can swing
    on my rope

    I have peotry at noon
    and at 1 I have Brit Lit
    I knew peots from the ages
    who all wrote tomes and pages

    but my peotry is short
    it's embryonic (and aborted)
    it's a mess
    I confess

    I am right
    and I write right
    peotry is teh thing

    if you can bring a little luv
    to peotry becoz
    it's jan 05
    let's all just jive
    the wrold will end quite soon

    I love peoms
    they're so cool and
    I learned while at school
    that origin-ality
    is ignore without the ie
    that is....ignore me
    doesn't matter
    got a bib so I'll just splatter
    drivel on it....bile and brimstone


    i take an e and am happy
    read my peom don't be crappy
    even e m cummings knew it
    can't go past
    just go through it

    I couldn't give a flying fuck
    what you think about my work

    I know that it will be remembered
    whereas posthumously you'll just disappear
    I hear you....
    yes I do.....you don't like my grammar or my spelling
    well, teh pudding is in the telling
    I'm teh future
    go get fukked.....

    and don't forget to close the door

    (disclaimer....I swore)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Let's hear it for peots! :)
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    here i am
    locked in these words
    look i'm just what you imagine
    feel
    i am what you feel
    tell me
    i am what you think
    let me know
    maybe he is much better than me
    i am a fragment
    i am lost
    but you found me
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    written upon reading Sifting Through the Madness for the Word, the Line, the Way, poems by Charles Bukowski

    What an unpretentious little title
    From a ninety-year old gentile,
    Slinging us all instructions
    On how to write infucktions.
    Perhaps if we found "the way"
    We could have something neat to say.
    You keep telling us "don't do it".
    Rest assured I see right through it.
    You're just afraid you're going to die
    Before anyone has read Ham on Rye.
    How much cash did that smash fetch ya?
    Can I be a literary asshole? You betchya!






    *it should be noted that the venerable Mr. Bukowski is already quite dead.
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  • Whats all this mumbo jumbo?
    Who is it that tells us what to say and how to say it?
    I say up yours I do what I want.
    Words arent to be written as one would tell us
    Words are written from the heart, and experiences we have had.
    Do words not describe emotion?
    You could sit and ponder about what words to put down on paper
    Why? Let it flow from your heart to your fingertips.
    If I feel like being a bitch today,
    than so be it,, it is my perogative to do so.
    And today my friend is the day, Im bitchy so therefore a bitchy poem.
    If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
    (Angelina Jolie)
  • I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.
  • Ah, fugh. Read line eight as "and make the sound of rain that falls as rain".
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.

    This, sir, is the real deal. Not just a great poem about poetry, but a great poem and good advice that I'd do well to think about. The first stanza is magic; who hasn't felt that way and tried, with varying results? I must endeavor more often to speak my mouth; masks always look silly on me anyway.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
    and chips and betting shops and bad pub
    grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
    poets could begin to bend and scrub
    through all this crust of wordage to the real
    stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
    sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
    and make the sound of rain that falls as rain.

    Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
    the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
    it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
    and lady poet. Don't you kill
    the poetry with posturings en vogue.
    Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.

    I love it!!!!

    it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    ISN wrote:
    (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)

    you must be talking about spell-checking all the instances of the words the and poetry we include in our posts...they are so often misspelled!

    :)
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  • ISN wrote:
    I love it!!!!

    it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)

    Glad you liked my poem. I think a poem, however written, should really be a simple question. And as Einstein once said, when the questions are simple, then you can hear God thinking. :)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    charles wrote:
    raps spar,

    step on no pets,

    grown wrong,
    -what?~*#/!!

    haha! This is really neat!
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  • dyna2dyna2 Posts: 14
    Mancun Idolatry

    settled in the words grew long
    winded and I gasped for air
    never succinct, all rescinded
    my titles, my line, my fair and winding stair
    those that began and ended in iron

    poems oh such math and caterwaul
    my feline screams and my cosine factored
    sketched these words in rusted spackle
    walking the midnight fence in prowl and under moon
    art the mess, the dress and the hard-flung spoon

    you missed me you missed me
    now you gotta kiss me

    WHAO now watch this tail make an exit
    no poet in need of lessons HERE, I can tell you that
    there are other allies for this particular cat, each of brick and scat,
    and limestone fossils that remind me of home
    ah but head held high with ne'er my silken fur disturbed,
    nor my alertness prone...
    I take the dew claw
    and carve this pome.
    "Who was that guy?"
    "Jesus Christ."
    "Seriously, man, don't be an asshole, who was he really?"
    "Jesus Christ."
    "No shit? What'd he want?"
    "My apple pie and a cigarette."
  • Students, note the gullet is enlarged
    by a science dictionary. Words
    of unknown origin, engorged,
    spew from his lips and penning fingers. Curds
    of dribble in self-claim of genius
    bleed from his swollen sensibilities.
    They must be treated with a serious
    hilarity. Note insecurities
    abounding in such ramblings as this:
    "I am a freeform poet, they are cold
    and stilted". Use the bedpan for that dross.
    You might be fooled that he's well. I'm old,
    experienced and know the symptoms well.
    Oh, one more thing. Protect against the smell.
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