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'come on jeff, you know he's not.'
jeff rolled his eyes. seeing this johnny pushed him off.
'richard has had the hots for you for ages you must know that.'hear my name
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I know he did some time ago, but not any more. You are making too much out of it.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
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johnny couldn't help but notice the wry little smile on his lover's face.
'you're enjoying this aren't you? you think it's some kind of fun to have this guy after you. have you spoken to robby about richard? i suggest you do cause i'm not getting caught up in of richard's bullshit. or your bullshit for that matter.'
johnny got up from the bed grabbing his pillow and left the room.hear my name
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When Johnny woke up on the couch he saw Jeffrey in the chair across the room, he wasn't awake. Johnny smiled at the thought that he must have stuck a chord. He knew it was a bittersweet victory, but if he could achieve Jeff losing sleep over his point of view there might be hope for him yet.
Still silently grinning he walked into the kitchen to make himself some coffee before hitting the shower.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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coming out of the bathroom wrapped in only a towel, jeff was waiting for him. johnny looked at him but didn't stop.
'johnny wait. you're right. richard does amuse me. and it's flattering to have him fawn all over me. but i'm not gonna let it come between us.'hear my name
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It already is puppy, it already is. The question is what are you willing to do about it? Maybe you'd like to consider that while you fix us some coffee? I have to get dressed.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
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chastened, jeffrey watched as johnny disappeared into their bedroom. he thought that perhaps he's underestimated johnny. and he didn't think that any relationship he got into would be for the long term. but that's exactly what this thing with johnny was turning into. and it didn't freak him out as much as he thought it would. he had to keep in mind that monogamy meant he had to be true to johnny. and only johnny.hear my name
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Where do you want your coffee? Any chance for us to drink it together?« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
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johnny walked into the kitchen doing his jeans up. his shirt hung open.
'you are such a pouter. you know that?'
johnny kissed jeff's cheek and picked up his mug off the bench.hear my name
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Well?« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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'well what?'hear my name
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Well what are you going to do about him being between the two of us?« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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'he's not coming between us johnny. richard is nothing to me. i love you. i want to be with you and only you. you must know that.'
as jeff stepped forward and rested his hand on johnny chest, johnny moved back.hear my name
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I know you love me Jeff, I can feel it. However that doesn't change that fact that he already is between us. The way you dismiss this every time annoys me. He and his presence annoys me and your flirtlike behaviour annoys me.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»0 -
jeff was getting annoyed with johnny's seemingly puritanical attitude.
'fuck john. you knew i was a flirt when you got involved with me. don't attack me because you're insecure.'hear my name
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Who's being insecure now? I didn't attack you. I was expressing what I feel. You think he isn't between us, well he is. Don't go looking for excuses for your behaviour, just own up to it. Yes your behaviour makes me feel insecure, if you would step back for a minute and look at it from my point of view, you might find that it isn't such a weird thing to feel.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»0 -
'when have i ever cheated on you? i can't changed my behaviour. and you should expect me to john'
johnny noticed that was the second time jeff had shortened his name to the more formal.
'are you testing me? is this what all this is about?'hear my name
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No I don't think so. I am a loose person John, you know I am. I can't change this because it is who I am in more than just this way. I mean nothing by it, I often am not aware of it. It just happens. The most important thing is that my heart belongs to you.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»0 -
johnny was tired of the round and round of this conversation. he sighed.
'look jeff, i have to tell you how i feel. i don't like the way you act around richard and i don't like the way you let him touch you.'
again jeff tried to lay his hand on johnny. johnny stepped back.
'don't touch me jeff.'hear my name
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Oh come on don't be this way.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»0
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