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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    to close my eyes and just drift away, that'd be sweet.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    And who's to say I can't I need this right now she thought, I need to go where drifting is is the way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey did make it clear we were through, didn't he? maybe he would come with me if i asked.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Maybe if the just took off, no planning nothing of the sorts, and just go out of the blue they would find themselves feling good again about eachother.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    who am i kidding? davey said he's had enough.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • imspinnin
    imspinnin Posts: 933
    She'll just have to try to sleep away all the madness, and hope for sunshine in the morning.
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    isn't that what her mother used to say? christ, no wonder the woman was dead.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    isn't that what her mother used to say? christ, no wonder the woman was dead.


    She sat down for a coffee at Dizzy's and leand back in her chair.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    what was it in me that was keeping davey at arm's length? why couldn't i just give myself to him? why did everything have to happen on my terms? after three years you'd think i would have worked it out.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sipping her coffee she started to think of a way out of this perdicament.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ******************
    as the wind whispered through the trees, davey could swear they were talking to him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Whispers of days long gone by made him review his memory's of Anna, so many loving and sometimes bittersweet joy.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    when he picked her up from the hospital yesterday, it wasn't his intention to leave her high and dry. he just figured that the time had come for both of them to re-evaluate what was most important to them. and what they were both willing to do to make it work, if that's what they wanted.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Without even noticing he had stood up form his bench and was strolling his way back to the city, still mind wondering.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    from the first time he laid eyes on anna, it had taken davey nearly a year to get anywhere near her. to say she was skittish would have been a massive understatement.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She never lost that sweet butterfly like charme, he loved her for it even though he didn't know how, not to be threatend by it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    at times she had the most tenuous hold on life. and then there were those times when she'd grab it and give it a shake to within an inch of its life and hers.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She kept things spicy there was no denying that, he himself needed to step out of line every now and again, but she was in a league of her own.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    he knew it had a lot to do with growing up in a house where all she and her broither would hear was their father screaming abuse at their mother, closely followed by the sound of dull thudding, crying and then silence. no wonder she wanted to fly.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    he knew it had a lot to do with growing up in a house where all she and her broither would hear was their father screaming abuse at their mother, closely followed by the sound of dull thudding, crying and then silence. no wonder she wanted to fly.

    He would follow if he could, he tried fearsly and got a long way but he always managede to lose his way, while grinning he thought; she usaully gives me directieons to what ever level she was on.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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