Poems About Poetry
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Whats all this mumbo jumbo?
Who is it that tells us what to say and how to say it?
I say up yours I do what I want.
Words arent to be written as one would tell us
Words are written from the heart, and experiences we have had.
Do words not describe emotion?
You could sit and ponder about what words to put down on paper
Why? Let it flow from your heart to your fingertips.
If I feel like being a bitch today,
than so be it,, it is my perogative to do so.
And today my friend is the day, Im bitchy so therefore a bitchy poem.If being sane is thinking there's something wrong with being different....I'd rather be completely fucking mental.
(Angelina Jolie)0 -
I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
and chips and betting shops and bad pub
grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
poets could begin to bend and scrub
through all this crust of wordage to the real
stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.
Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
and lady poet. Don't you kill
the poetry with posturings en vogue.
Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.0 -
Ah, fugh. Read line eight as "and make the sound of rain that falls as rain".0
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FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
and chips and betting shops and bad pub
grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
poets could begin to bend and scrub
through all this crust of wordage to the real
stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
and make the sound of rain than falls as rain.
Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
and lady poet. Don't you kill
the poetry with posturings en vogue.
Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.
This, sir, is the real deal. Not just a great poem about poetry, but a great poem and good advice that I'd do well to think about. The first stanza is magic; who hasn't felt that way and tried, with varying results? I must endeavor more often to speak my mouth; masks always look silly on me anyway..........................................................................0 -
I want to write good doggerel. Let fish
and chips and betting shops and bad pub
grub and cloudy beer rule. I wish
poets could begin to bend and scrub
through all this crust of wordage to the real
stuff, the day to day, and make a plain
sound in speaking, free from pompous zeal,
and make the sound of rain that falls as rain.
Ah, poetry. Those sound effects that stir
the heart up in some hollow spot, and fill
it for a special moment. Listen, sir,
and lady poet. Don't you kill
the poetry with posturings en vogue.
Speak your mouth. Don't compromise your brogue.
I love it!!!!
it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......0 -
ISN wrote:(ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)
you must be talking about spell-checking all the instances of the words the and poetry we include in our posts...they are so often misspelled!.........................................................................0 -
ISN wrote:I love it!!!!
it is a booootiful sonnet which undresses artists and leaves them naked. is truth to be found in peotry (in doggerel). is there truth in art. Bukowski himself fleshed out unpretentious peotry - I remember my young lover sitting in our pensione room in Gran Canaria, reading from his Bukowski book with a bottle of rum on teh table - it doesn't get any more real. Stripping off layers of society's little embellishments. Thanks FinsMcB!!!!! (and Grooveamatic and Sound? might have got your name wrong sorry). (ps really double-check your pieces before you press submit reply....no edit....eg.. e e cummings)
Glad you liked my poem. I think a poem, however written, should really be a simple question. And as Einstein once said, when the questions are simple, then you can hear God thinking.0 -
charles wrote:raps spar,
step on no pets,
grown wrong,
-what?~*#/!!
haha! This is really neat!.........................................................................0 -
Mancun Idolatry
settled in the words grew long
winded and I gasped for air
never succinct, all rescinded
my titles, my line, my fair and winding stair
those that began and ended in iron
poems oh such math and caterwaul
my feline screams and my cosine factored
sketched these words in rusted spackle
walking the midnight fence in prowl and under moon
art the mess, the dress and the hard-flung spoon
you missed me you missed me
now you gotta kiss me
WHAO now watch this tail make an exit
no poet in need of lessons HERE, I can tell you that
there are other allies for this particular cat, each of brick and scat,
and limestone fossils that remind me of home
ah but head held high with ne'er my silken fur disturbed,
nor my alertness prone...
I take the dew claw
and carve this pome."Who was that guy?"
"Jesus Christ."
"Seriously, man, don't be an asshole, who was he really?"
"Jesus Christ."
"No shit? What'd he want?"
"My apple pie and a cigarette."0 -
Students, note the gullet is enlarged
by a science dictionary. Words
of unknown origin, engorged,
spew from his lips and penning fingers. Curds
of dribble in self-claim of genius
bleed from his swollen sensibilities.
They must be treated with a serious
hilarity. Note insecurities
abounding in such ramblings as this:
"I am a freeform poet, they are cold
and stilted". Use the bedpan for that dross.
You might be fooled that he's well. I'm old,
experienced and know the symptoms well.
Oh, one more thing. Protect against the smell.0 -
OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:
Libraries
With a collapsible history they hush about you
To deride the failings of a many,
Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
The impossible lightness of shelves.
There are endless pages. Still the world waits..........................................................................0 -
grooveamatic wrote:OK, so this isn't exclusively about poetry, but I think it fits here:
Libraries
With a collapsible history they hush about you
To deride the failings of a many,
Pluming from infinite poisons the darkness of quiet,
The impossible lightness of shelves.
There are endless pages. Still the world waits.
Quick improv:
The gnome with the black hat in the library
has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
and her nose is pressed on the page
underlining the word 'quaynte'
quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.0 -
FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:Quick improv:
The gnome with the black hat in the library
has fallen asleep on a open book of Chaucer
and her nose is pressed on the page
underlining the word 'quaynte'
quaintly as a middle English expletive, she snoring faintly.
...like a jazz saxaphonist with a sense of humour..........................................................................0 -
by the way, Finns..."Poetaster" is downright hilarious. Bravo!.........................................................................0
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so, i was thinking about poems about poetry and remembered a neat poem I had read a while back, where the poem itself was the subject of the poem. I can't remember the name of the poem, the author of the poem or exactly how the poem goes...i just basically remember the concept. so, borrowing the concept, I wrote my own. if anyone knows the poem that inspired this, let me know and/or post it! anywho, here is mine:
Fine Poem
But don't fall in love with it,
it don't love you
nor does it seek approval.
It may not even desire to be read,
fine poem that it is.
I haven't even read it.
I certainly didn't create it.
It just always was, somewhere, somehow,
these symbols, phonetics, sounds.
This poem breathes like you.
Don't take it for granted;
don't sideswipe or jabberjaw it.
Never talk down to it, coddle it, or inflame it.
Refrain from molesting it, double-crossing it, or swindling it.
Please do not read meaning into it,
or commit it to memory,
or hold it dear,
or be passionate about it.
This poem is indifferent to ages and canons.
It is not an effigy, an elegy, a eulogy or doggerel.
It is not an affront, an attack, a lambaste or tripe.
It has no lineage or pedigree.
It is not a Citizen of Time
or Maker of Dreams.
It may sneak up upon you.
The smarmy bastard might scare you!
Please do not scare it back,
for it is not a game-player, a sooth-sayer or a tickler.
It does not purport to reveal higher truths, transcendent concepts, or philosophy du jour.
'Tis no masterpiece, opus, swan song, cartouche, milieu, cartouche, flambe, frieze, or chocolate.
It hates being referred to as High Concept, avante garde, and Neo-Objectivist.
It is not a soapbox for the grandiosely absurd.
This poem has no moral standing
or rhythmic preference;
It is not capable of caring about your day.
But if you tilt your head in close, friend,
closer to the paper, the page, the pulp,
if you tilt your head in close
and hold your breath right tight
you might just hear it's heartbeat
like sunbeams dancing off water.
It's a fine poem, alright,
but don't fall in love with it..........................................................................0 -
Smile, nod, it's OK,
Lots of poems start this way!
If reading it gives you trouble
Just imagine it as subtle
And proceed to the next
Brief but wise block of text.
Smile, nod, it's OK,
Lots of poems go that way,
And in any particular case
This poem is not my glued-on face..........................................................................0 -
"Fine Poem" is extraordinary....never read anything like it (must have missed the poem that 'inspired' it...sorry, I can't help you out w/ that info.)
carry on!i can still bite my toenails.0 -
Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
and I have been waiting.
Years, now, I've waited,
long, apocryphal years,
time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
Many false muses rose to meet me:
sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
Where were you, fair clarity?
In your inspired toy-land
trouncing about,
choosing the time of your arrival
so eloquently, dramatically,
as to render me inert?
Now that you're here
better give me all you got.
I probably won't take no for an answer.
I suffered for you..........................................................................0 -
in my poem "Fine Poem" I certainly did not intend to repeat the word 'cartouche'...please disregard the first appearance of the word..........................................................................0
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grooveamatic wrote:Hello. Allow me to introduce myself.
My name is Seth Allen Dellinger
and I have been waiting.
Years, now, I've waited,
long, apocryphal years,
time with no voice, no ears, no muse.
Many false muses rose to meet me:
sexable muses, discouraging muses, drinkable muses.
Where were you, fair clarity?
In your inspired toy-land
trouncing about,
choosing the time of your arrival
so eloquently, dramatically,
as to render me inert?
Now that you're here
better give me all you got.
I probably won't take no for an answer.
I suffered for you.
You've certainly got the muse's attention, and ours, too. Thanks, Groovster.0
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