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  • Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Radar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Everyone is gay.
    What else can I write?
    I don't have the right?

    I feel All Apologies for sqeaking past this thread, itsy, bitsy, teeny, weeny, yellow, poke-a-dot coleeny.

    You've been so kind and encouraging with all your, well, kind encouragements, and here you go peomizing and I missed out. :(
    Stupid short attention span. If a post has more than two pages to it, I usually skip it. Super sorry with a bottle of boogers on top.

    Hey, it's me. You weren't expecting something lemon-fresh, take-home-to-mother, did you?

    ps You wow!
    And how!
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    aaawww radar! :)

    i really appreciate you taking the time to read them, it means a lot to see that nearly all the poetry forum all-stars have looked this over.

    but you know what would be even better? new poems from radar! yep thats exactly what we need around here. ;)
  • Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Radar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by coleen
    but you know what would be even better? new poems from radar! yep thats exactly what we need around here. ;)

    Every reply I make
    is glazed poetry cake.
    Every claim you stake,
    you happy widdle phantom,
    I'll be watching you.....

    Sorry, but no new stuff until Rot Episode 2: Attack of the Clones is finished. And, no, it's not going to be called that. I think........
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Sorry, but no new stuff until Rot Episode 2: Attack of the Clones is finished. And, no, it's not going to be called that. I think........

    well whatever you decide to name your next book - please, please, please be sure to give us all the details. i promise to be among the first in line to purchase one. :)
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    That under that breast and brain there lay a prose mistress of epic proportions.

    YES!

    Coleen is sexy AND semantic all at the same time.


    Goulet is correct. You had better post more. It is now a requirement.

    Much love,

    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by setaside2
    That under that breast and brain there lay a prose mistress of epic proportions.

    YES!

    Coleen is sexy AND semantic all at the same time.


    Goulet is correct. You had better post more. It is now a requirement.

    Much love,

    seta

    *blushing*

    aww....semantic? you really think so? :)
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    its not as bad as all this really - i'm just desperate and bored in this cubicle wasteland...but in my mind i'm free :)


    silly little metaphysical me
    stifled by three and a half prefab fabric walls
    minding the time while it exists on my wrist - plodding tediously on
    finally to find that the magic hour arrives just in time to road rage blaze a manic pathway home

    shelter me in my white-walled chamber
    to fasten my focus on the telehypnotic waves
    with big brother eyes trained on the live as it late-breaking happens
    filling with every sight, sound, image
    filling up as full as the bloated landfills with my
    empty plastic nothing soul.
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by coleen
    silly little metaphysical me
    stifled by three and a half prefab fabric walls
    minding the time while it exists on my wrist - plodding tediously on
    finally to find that the magic hour arrives just in time to road rage blaze a manic pathway home

    shelter me in my white-walled chamber
    to fasten my focus on the telehypnotic waves
    with big brother eyes trained on the live as it late-breaking happens
    filling with every sight, sound, image
    filling up as full as the bloated landfills with my
    empty plastic nothing soul.

    see what happens when you write...it turns out full of real live chunky real life and that's always the best stuff...
    but still if you quit your job you can play tamborine in my band...
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    see what happens when you write...it turns out full of real live chunky real life and that's always the best stuff...
    but still if you quit your job you can play tamborine in my band...

    now that sounds like something i'd be much better suited to....me and my tamborine.

    i'm leaving now - not sure which direction i should be heading but i'll try west eventually i'll find you. wait for me?
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    maybe by the time you're hear my "band" will have more people in it then myself and everything will make much more sense...
    and be sure to head west until you hit chicago and then stop right there
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    maybe your band really only needs you in order to make sense.

    but i'll start heading west to chicago and i'll be sure to stop right there. and thats lucky for me because i've been there before so maybe the finding you will be a little less confusing.
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by coleen
    maybe your band really only needs you in order to make sense.

    but i'll start heading west to chicago and i'll be sure to stop right there. and thats lucky for me because i've been there before so maybe the finding you will be a little less confusing.

    it'll be like hide and seek, but with more sexual tension...

    and why is it so dead in the poetry hut today,
    its like everyone vanished
    or got a little bored
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Goulet
    it'll be like hide and seek, but with more sexual tension...

    and why is it so dead in the poetry hut today,
    its like everyone vanished
    or got a little bored

    it is very quiet in the poetry corner today.

    i'm sure it will be bubbling over with excitment tomorrow and i'll miss all the fun. but i guess that leaves me loads to catch up on when i get back.
  • Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Radar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by coleen
    i'm sure it will be bubbling over with excitment tomorrow and i'll miss all the fun. but i guess that leaves me loads to catch up on when i get back.

    Where are you going and can you bring me back something?
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Where are you going and can you bring me back something?

    radar i would gladly bring something back for you - but i doubt you'd want something from the hospital. its mostly icky stuff they have there.
  • Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Radar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Originally posted by coleen
    radar i would gladly bring something back for you - but i doubt you'd want something from the hospital. its mostly icky stuff they have there.

    All the better.

    Why are you hospitaled? Are you pregnant? Is it mine or Goulet's? Perhaps even Gita's........
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Are you pregnant? Is it mine or Goulet's? Perhaps even Gita's........

    wait, did i miss something?
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    poor goulet and gita, sullying their good names with imlications that they sired my child. that would make for pretty intriguing poetry on the forum wouldn't it? but if i'm pregnant than i must have missed out on something as well.

    in all seriousness though, it isn't anything interesting or dramatic and not very much fun. i'll try to find something to bring back to for you radar. ;)
  • Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Radar(Baba)O'Riley Posts: 947
    Sorry for poking and prying and prodding and turning my head and coughing.

    Maybe you could snag me one of those dressing gowns that doen't quite cover your tush all the way. Better yet, the only thing I want back is you. :)

    I feel so ooshy for saying that.
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    poke and pry to your hearts content - no harm done.

    i will do my best to liberate a gown for the ooshiest gooshiest boy around. ;)

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