My songwriting debut as promised....

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  • Hawkshore
    Hawkshore Posts: 2,185
    So the pit addiction won out in the end ;) ....once your in there is no getting out!
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  • Linda
    Linda Posts: 1,656
    cory wrote:
    Solo, I'm pretty much of the PJ mold. With my brother on drums, we are quite a bit harder than you'd think.


    harder....ok.....
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • rival.
    rival. Chicago Posts: 7,775
    nicely done dude!
  • in_hiding79
    in_hiding79 Posts: 4,315
    cory wrote:


    I freakin LOVE IT CORY!! :)

    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
    And so the lion fell in love with the lamb...,"
    "What a stupid lamb."
    "What a sick, masochistic lion."
  • awesome! i just to shove woodchips in the mouths of those assholes blabbing in the background lol
  • mookie9999
    mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Let me know what you think when you hear it.


    Great job Cory! Good song. Definitely up for a second listen.
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • josevolution
    josevolution Posts: 31,784
    ok cory again i'm at work can't freaking listen/look at any video will wait to see it at home ,wait so you are back here so much for leaving us .....
    jesus greets me looks just like me ....
  • cory wrote:


    Little Disappointed

    When you said you were doing a tribute to your Dad I thought you were doing "Every Breath You Take" the P.Diddy version

    All in all good show, was that panties I saw on the floor ? Too dark to tell
    My drinking team has a hockey problem

    The ONLY thing better than a glass of beer is tea with Miss McGill



    A protuberance of flesh above the waistband of a tight pair of trousers
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Little Disappointed

    When you said you were doing a tribute to your Dad I thought you were doing "Every Breath You Take" the P.Diddy version

    All in all good show, was that panties I saw on the floor ? Too dark to tell


    I hope you like Masters of War. I did that too. It was recorded by a friend of mine with a fucking camera phone. "Pretty visible" but the vocals are very audible and the ending is something Ed would be proud of.

    I'll have it up shortly.

    You're right about the panties. Pink.......thongs.......
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • You should have opened the song by saying you were leaving to follow you life's pursuit's, go to the can for a smoke, then 5 minutes later come back and perform.
    Progress is not made by everyone joining some new fad,
    and reveling in it's loyalty. It's made by forming coalitions
    over specific principles, goals, and policies.

    http://i36.tinypic.com/66j31x.jpg

    (\__/)
    ( o.O)
    (")_(")
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    You should have opened the song by saying you were leaving to follow you life's pursuit's, go to the can for a smoke, then 5 minutes later come back and perform.


    I did that. Were you there?
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • cory wrote:
    I did that. Were you there?

    No, but I got a bootleg of the video. It looks like it went over pretty well though, I even saw a pair of mens underwear underneath a few lace bras.
    Progress is not made by everyone joining some new fad,
    and reveling in it's loyalty. It's made by forming coalitions
    over specific principles, goals, and policies.

    http://i36.tinypic.com/66j31x.jpg

    (\__/)
    ( o.O)
    (")_(")
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    No, but I got a bootleg of the video. It looks like it went over pretty well though, I even saw a pair of mens underwear underneath a few lace bras.


    I asked some of those dudes if they had ever wiped before. Apparently not......So anyway, I took them home with me....the underwear, that is. You know, as souveniers.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • I just listened to that again and it's really growing on me now. :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Fucking top stuff, mate. Seriously.

    Are there many open mics in your neck of the woods?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    cutback wrote:
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D

    It's the usual fare of the open mic/pub venue circuit. It toughens you up, though.
  • norm
    norm Posts: 31,146
    It's the usual fare of the open mic/pub venue circuit. It toughens you up, though.

    i demand respect always, fins....:)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    cutback wrote:
    i demand respect always, fins....:)

    Pete Townshend had the right idea, kicking Abbie Hoffman offstage at Woodstock!

    This one's for Cory: me tonight, practicing a song on my 12-string through delay, for my London gigs next week, complete with the odd fluff, and cod-1950s home movie effects:


    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22640722
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Pete Townshend had the right idea, kicking Abbie Hoffman offstage at Woodstock!

    This one's for Cory: me tonight, practicing a song, for my London gigs next week, complete with the odd fluff, and cod-1950s home movie effects:


    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22640722


    Holy shit Fins! That song was fucking awesome. I mean it dude. I want to make it into a person and have sex with it. The song, not you;)

    Great stuff.

    That intro is some of the most beautiful stuff I've heard in a while.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    cory wrote:
    Holy shit Fins! That song was fucking awesome. I mean it dude. I want to make it into a person and have sex with it. The song, not you;)

    Great stuff.

    That intro is some of the most beautiful stuff I've heard in a while.

    Cheers, man. Still working on it!

    When are you playing next? Follow any session you can. Every performance will grow in stature, exponentially. Maybe the next stage is to get a band!

    I need a band. I want Jeff and Matt, if they're free. :D