My songwriting debut as promised....

cory
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Revive the heart of the heartless...
Why would you start was has no end?
Why would you start was has no end?
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cory wrote:
Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!
EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now."The leads are weak!"
"The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"
"What's your name?"
"FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"0 -
cory wrote:I will be what i could be
Once I get out of this town
9/29/04;6/27/08;6/30/08;8/23/09;08/24/09;5/17/100 -
outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;)0
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cutback wrote:outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;)
I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.Revive the heart of the heartless...
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Wait a minute, I thought you were gone...So what was all that crying over
?
'I want to hurry home to you
put on a slow, dumb show for you
and crack you up
so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
god I'm very, very frightening
and I'll overdo it'0 -
Drop The Leash 10 wrote:impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job.
All PJ. All the time. You got that right brother.Revive the heart of the heartless...
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mookie9999 wrote:Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!
EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now.
Let me know what you think when you hear it.Revive the heart of the heartless...
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Jesus, do you have a cleaner version? I had to turn that shit off due to those rude loud ass motherfuckers in the background..'I want to hurry home to you
put on a slow, dumb show for you
and crack you up
so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
god I'm very, very frightening
and I'll overdo it'0 -
Sorry. Our Zero $ budget doesn't allow a soundboard quality recording;)
I should have whipped somebody's ass to get their attention.Revive the heart of the heartless...
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aaaaah coryyyyyy....
nice, very nice....
you rock..;)i'm not happy yet.....0 -
Sounds good though buddy..everyone, enjoy your Thanksgiving..'I want to hurry home to you
put on a slow, dumb show for you
and crack you up
so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
god I'm very, very frightening
and I'll overdo it'0 -
cory wrote:I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22489354you gotta plug the guitar and mic into the computer.....i'd like to hear these without the drunks yammering away....:)
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cory wrote:Let me know what you think when you hear it.
Not only will I let you know what I think about it, I will take a picture of the area surrounding my computer once it's finished (kleenex included)."The leads are weak!"
"The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"
"What's your name?"
"FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"0 -
Drop The Leash 10 wrote:impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job.
You can hear that in both songs I've heard of yours.
Obviously not RVM, that goes without saying.0 -
Solo, I'm pretty much of the PJ mold. With my brother on drums, we are quite a bit harder than you'd think.Revive the heart of the heartless...
Why would you start was has no end?0
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