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My songwriting debut as promised....

corycory Posts: 736
edited November 2007 in All Encompassing Trip
Hope you enjoy:)

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063
Revive the heart of the heartless...

Why would you start was has no end?
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  • mookie9999mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063

    Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!

    EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now.
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • Drop The Leash 10Drop The Leash 10 Posts: 7,011
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)
    I will be what i could be
    Once I get out of this town


    9/29/04;6/27/08;6/30/08;8/23/09;08/24/09;5/17/10
  • normnorm Posts: 31,146
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D
  • corycory Posts: 736
    cutback wrote:
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D


    I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Wait a minute, I thought you were gone...So what was all that crying over ;)?
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • corycory Posts: 736
    Drop The Leash 10 wrote:
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)


    All PJ. All the time. You got that right brother.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • corycory Posts: 736
    The Champ wrote:
    Wait a minute, I thought you were gone...So what was all that crying over ;)?


    I am gone (kinda)....can't you read my sig? Okay, back to work.....:)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • corycory Posts: 736
    mookie9999 wrote:
    Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!

    EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now.

    Let me know what you think when you hear it.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • PoncierPoncier Posts: 17,053
    cutback wrote:
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D
    No shit. "Shut and pay attention you assholes!"
    This weekend we rock Portland
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Jesus, do you have a cleaner version? I had to turn that shit off due to those rude loud ass motherfuckers in the background..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • corycory Posts: 736
    Sorry. Our Zero $ budget doesn't allow a soundboard quality recording;)

    I should have whipped somebody's ass to get their attention.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    aaaaah coryyyyyy....
    nice, very nice....

    you rock..;)
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • corycory Posts: 736
    Linda wrote:
    aaaaah coryyyyyy....
    nice, very nice....

    you rock..;)


    Ahhh, Linda, my love. Much appreciated;)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Sounds good though buddy..everyone, enjoy your Thanksgiving..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • normnorm Posts: 31,146
    cory wrote:
    I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22489354

    :D you gotta plug the guitar and mic into the computer.....i'd like to hear these without the drunks yammering away....:)
  • corycory Posts: 736
    The Champ wrote:
    Sounds good though buddy..everyone, enjoy your Thanksgiving..


    Thanks dude. Be careful overstuffing that rippled pany dropper (i.e. stomach)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • corycory Posts: 736
    cutback wrote:
    :D you gotta plug the guitar and mic into the computer.....i'd like to hear these without the drunks yammering away....:)


    Little bars are very ungrateful fuckers aren't they?;)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • mookie9999mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Let me know what you think when you hear it.

    Not only will I let you know what I think about it, I will take a picture of the area surrounding my computer once it's finished (kleenex included).
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • MattCameronKicksButtMattCameronKicksButt Posts: 4,317
    Drop The Leash 10 wrote:
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)

    You can hear that in both songs I've heard of yours.

    Obviously not RVM, that goes without saying.
  • corycory Posts: 736
    Solo, I'm pretty much of the PJ mold. With my brother on drums, we are quite a bit harder than you'd think.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • HawkshoreHawkshore Posts: 2,160
    So the pit addiction won out in the end ;) ....once your in there is no getting out!
    Van 92.07.21 / Van 98.07.19 / Sea 98.07.22 / Tor 98.08.22 / Sea 00.11.06 / Van 03.05.30/ Van 05.09.02/ Gorge 06.07.22 & 23 / EV Van 08.04.02 / Tor 09.08.21 / Sea 09.09.21 & 22 / Van 09.09.25 / Van 11.09.25 / Van 13.12.04 / Pem 16.07.17 / Sea 18.08.10
  • LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    cory wrote:
    Solo, I'm pretty much of the PJ mold. With my brother on drums, we are quite a bit harder than you'd think.


    harder....ok.....
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • rival.rival. Chicago Posts: 7,775
    nicely done dude!
  • in_hiding79in_hiding79 Posts: 4,315
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063


    I freakin LOVE IT CORY!! :)

    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
    And so the lion fell in love with the lamb...,"
    "What a stupid lamb."
    "What a sick, masochistic lion."
  • chiquimonkeychiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    awesome! i just to shove woodchips in the mouths of those assholes blabbing in the background lol
  • mookie9999mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Let me know what you think when you hear it.


    Great job Cory! Good song. Definitely up for a second listen.
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • josevolutionjosevolution Posts: 29,907
    ok cory again i'm at work can't freaking listen/look at any video will wait to see it at home ,wait so you are back here so much for leaving us .....
    jesus greets me looks just like me ....
  • Phantom PainPhantom Pain Posts: 9,876
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063


    Little Disappointed

    When you said you were doing a tribute to your Dad I thought you were doing "Every Breath You Take" the P.Diddy version

    All in all good show, was that panties I saw on the floor ? Too dark to tell
    My drinking team has a hockey problem

    The ONLY thing better than a glass of beer is tea with Miss McGill



    A protuberance of flesh above the waistband of a tight pair of trousers
  • corycory Posts: 736
    Phantom Pain wrote:
    Little Disappointed

    When you said you were doing a tribute to your Dad I thought you were doing "Every Breath You Take" the P.Diddy version

    All in all good show, was that panties I saw on the floor ? Too dark to tell


    I hope you like Masters of War. I did that too. It was recorded by a friend of mine with a fucking camera phone. "Pretty visible" but the vocals are very audible and the ending is something Ed would be proud of.

    I'll have it up shortly.

    You're right about the panties. Pink.......thongs.......
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • RolandTD20KdrummerRolandTD20Kdrummer Posts: 13,066
    You should have opened the song by saying you were leaving to follow you life's pursuit's, go to the can for a smoke, then 5 minutes later come back and perform.
    Progress is not made by everyone joining some new fad,
    and reveling in it's loyalty. It's made by forming coalitions
    over specific principles, goals, and policies.

    http://i36.tinypic.com/66j31x.jpg

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