My songwriting debut as promised....

cory
cory Posts: 736
edited November 2007 in All Encompassing Trip
Hope you enjoy:)

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063
Revive the heart of the heartless...

Why would you start was has no end?
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  • mookie9999
    mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063

    Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!

    EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now.
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • Drop The Leash 10
    Drop The Leash 10 Posts: 7,011
    cory wrote:
    Hope you enjoy:)

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=22489063
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)
    I will be what i could be
    Once I get out of this town


    9/29/04;6/27/08;6/30/08;8/23/09;08/24/09;5/17/10
  • norm
    norm Posts: 31,146
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    cutback wrote:
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D


    I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • The Champ
    The Champ Posts: 4,063
    Wait a minute, I thought you were gone...So what was all that crying over ;)?
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Drop The Leash 10 wrote:
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)


    All PJ. All the time. You got that right brother.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    The Champ wrote:
    Wait a minute, I thought you were gone...So what was all that crying over ;)?


    I am gone (kinda)....can't you read my sig? Okay, back to work.....:)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    mookie9999 wrote:
    Happy Cock-A-Doodle Cock day to you!

    EDIT: I've no sound at work so this is my only review for now.

    Let me know what you think when you hear it.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • Poncier
    Poncier Posts: 17,935
    cutback wrote:
    outstanding cory.....although i half expected you to stop mid song and tell everyone to shut the fuck up!.....i would've....;) :D
    No shit. "Shut and pay attention you assholes!"
    This weekend we rock Portland
  • The Champ
    The Champ Posts: 4,063
    Jesus, do you have a cleaner version? I had to turn that shit off due to those rude loud ass motherfuckers in the background..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Sorry. Our Zero $ budget doesn't allow a soundboard quality recording;)

    I should have whipped somebody's ass to get their attention.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • Linda
    Linda Posts: 1,656
    aaaaah coryyyyyy....
    nice, very nice....

    you rock..;)
    i'm not happy yet.....
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Linda wrote:
    aaaaah coryyyyyy....
    nice, very nice....

    you rock..;)


    Ahhh, Linda, my love. Much appreciated;)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • The Champ
    The Champ Posts: 4,063
    Sounds good though buddy..everyone, enjoy your Thanksgiving..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • norm
    norm Posts: 31,146
    cory wrote:
    I yell G.D!!! after the bridge in this song (about my dad) because I missed a note. It's pretty funny.

    http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&VideoID=22489354

    :D you gotta plug the guitar and mic into the computer.....i'd like to hear these without the drunks yammering away....:)
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    The Champ wrote:
    Sounds good though buddy..everyone, enjoy your Thanksgiving..


    Thanks dude. Be careful overstuffing that rippled pany dropper (i.e. stomach)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    cutback wrote:
    :D you gotta plug the guitar and mic into the computer.....i'd like to hear these without the drunks yammering away....:)


    Little bars are very ungrateful fuckers aren't they?;)
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?
  • mookie9999
    mookie9999 Posts: 4,677
    cory wrote:
    Let me know what you think when you hear it.

    Not only will I let you know what I think about it, I will take a picture of the area surrounding my computer once it's finished (kleenex included).
    "The leads are weak!"

    "The leads are weak? Fuckin' leads are weak? You're Weak! I've Been in this business 15 years"

    "What's your name?"

    "FUCK YOU! THAT"S MY NAME!"
  • MattCameronKicksButt
    MattCameronKicksButt Posts: 4,317
    Drop The Leash 10 wrote:
    impressive. i can tell pj inspired this one. great job. :)

    You can hear that in both songs I've heard of yours.

    Obviously not RVM, that goes without saying.
  • cory
    cory Posts: 736
    Solo, I'm pretty much of the PJ mold. With my brother on drums, we are quite a bit harder than you'd think.
    Revive the heart of the heartless...

    Why would you start was has no end?

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