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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Ms. Haiku wrote:
    Monday was created by a trust-fund baby!

    Also, as many pleasures were created in reaction to horrific circumstances . . . chocolate was created on Tuesday ;)

    you might just be insane ;)
    that is quite brilliant.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i wish i were a puppy.
    you'd adopt me, keep me safe.
    i'd take naps with you on rainy days.
    curl up to you under blankets so warm.
    i'd stay next to you forever, safe and sound.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    x (3) = what the fuck
    funny shit really.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    The words behind which I hide
    represent the turn of tides
    A whirl of emotions in this world
    a world that does not feel a single thing

    Keep me from harm
    oh won't you please try
    at least to keep me warm
    close to, or better yet, inside your heart

    Love me back
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Love says
    freedom is understanding
    freedom is forgiveness
    freedom is giving
    so let's be free
    each man, each woman, be
    better than we
    fear
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    justam wrote:
    Love says
    freedom is understanding
    freedom is forgiveness
    freedom is giving
    so let's be free
    each man, each woman, be
    better than we
    fear
    Love says one thing
    thinks another
    Do not be fooled
    mistrust is the safe approach

    Do not believe a cynic's view
    mistrust the mistrusting
    yet be careful who you trust
    and let not your heart fall victim in this life
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Jamal wrote:
    Love says one thing
    thinks another
    Do not be fooled
    mistrust is the safe approach

    Do not believe a cynic's view
    mistrust the mistrusting
    yet be careful who you trust
    and let not your heart fall victim in this life

    LOL! :D
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    justam wrote:
    LOL! :D
    errrm...
    I liked your piece and wanted to respond in a poetic way

    But I kind of meant what I wrote (it may be the whisky taling though :p)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • risarisa Posts: 42
    hmm... thoughts...

    i am stranded in a cup
    standing on ice
    fearing that any moment now
    i will be
    the extension of the sea
    i waited all day.
    you waited all day..
    but you left before sunset..

    ...should have stayed for the sunset...
    if not for me.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    risa wrote:
    hmm... thoughts...

    i am stranded in a cup
    standing on ice
    fearing that any moment now
    i will be
    the extension of the sea

    i likey.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    morning head, my eye are cloudy sleepers.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    seeing the sound of acid raindrops on the cottage roof
    hearing rainbows in a distant sky
    'tis wonderful to be alone
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Jamal wrote:
    errrm...
    I liked your piece and wanted to respond in a poetic way

    But I kind of meant what I wrote (it may be the whisky taling though :p)

    I'm sorry I laughed. It struck me as funny because it had those overly cautious lines mixed into the message. I know you're not an old lady, but I could picture one sitting in a rocking chair... ;)

    Is my foot farther in my mouth now? :D
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    justam wrote:
    I'm sorry I laughed. It struck me as funny because it had those overly cautious lines mixed into the message. I know you're not an old lady, but I could picture one sitting in a rocking chair... ;)

    Is my foot farther in my mouth now? :D
    Well, I guess you're kind of right, now I think about it :o ... I've always loved rocking chairs anyhow :p

    And yes, yes it is :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • jamie ukjamie uk Posts: 3,812
    ...that this is the one gig in the history of gigs that I would love to have been at. Sheer class.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GZrfK8lFQ1I&feature=related
    I came, I saw, I concurred.....
  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    Music and a pair of scissors.
    Should it sound dangerous?
    I'm not crying out for help,
    Lights are off, fire burns,
    No shades in this cave,
    Perception turned off.
    Call me redemption,
    Get rid of the rest.
    I'm smaller now,
    I'm shrinking,
    I can't see.
    I do think,
    I do feel,
    I'm still
    mine,
    you.
    me.
    I.
    .
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
  • romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    ...............................................
    .......No ceiling,............................
    ....Can't go further .......................
    Than I've been before....................
    Can't crowl further today,................
    My mistakes are all gone,.................
    Should I make them return?..............
    Music and a pair of scissors...............
    Should it sound dangerous?..............
    I'm not crying out for help, ..............
    Lights are off, fire burns, ................
    No shades in this cave, ..................
    Perception turned off. ...................
    Call me redemption, ......................
    Get rid of the rest.........................
    I'm smaller now, ..........................
    I'm shrinking,..............................
    I can't see.................................
    I do think,.................................
    I do feel,..................................
    I'm still.....................................
    mine,......................................
    you........................................
    me.........................................
    I...........................................
    ............................................
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    That's pretty cool, romybian
    love it ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • risarisa Posts: 42
    chadwick wrote:
    i likey.

    wow.
    thanks!
    i waited all day.
    you waited all day..
    but you left before sunset..

    ...should have stayed for the sunset...
    if not for me.
  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    so she phrases, "i never did mind about the little things..." what things? was it about me? was it about her family? was it about her lovers? funny thing... it's been two years... but now she's been drifting in my mind from time to time. i think of writing her. but i won't... i know i won't. i don't want to. i don't need to. i feel i'm missing something though... something for myself. there's no future headed that direction but i feel like i forgot something. so i think i need to return. forgiveness, maybe. the friendships. or perhaps i feel i didn't do it enough... i was great really. it's jsut i'm forgetting something... maybe it stuck to my subconscious and i need to overcome a few things so i can let out whatever it is. ah, what the hell... i need to get over myself.
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    There's an invisible muzzle
    on me, is it such a puzzle?
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  • KFrost2008KFrost2008 Posts: 36
    Sitting here, drowning in my, tears of woe...

    Losing, everything, I've ever known...

    I want you more, but I push you away, because of all the stupid things I say

    I want to play, I want to be, but I can't because my talent is weak

    I want to suceed, but how can I, if I am not willing to invest time

    The woes I am facing

    Are harder than anything I have ever done before

    Decision making

    Of failing....or failing more
    I can kill because in God I trust.

    06/24/06-Cincinnati, OH-US Bank Arena
    08/05/07-Chicago, IL-Grant Park(Lollapalooza)
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    We have two cats
    two jobs
    two televisions
    two ways of seeing things
    two separate families
    two checking accounts
    two bodies
    two different parts
    two paths to choose
    two parties to choose from
    Feels Good Inc.
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    I'm tired of no news is good news
    When I said I wanted to get laid, I didn't mean a headfuck
    It's just half a glass, not full, not empty
    I have become uncomfortably numb, except for the stabbing pain in my brain
    Pollyanna's all out of glad game, where's the rainbow connection now?
    meh, I don't know how to play this game
    Give me a home where the buffalo roam
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    What are sleeping trees?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    chadwick wrote:
    What are sleeping trees?
    The ones from the lord of the ring ... :D:D:D

    I believe the correct term is 'Ent' :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    I am sorry comes to mind.
    Chill out, chill out, chill out.
    Control yourself young-man. (looking in a mirror)
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Bu2 wrote:
    We have two cats
    two jobs
    two televisions
    two ways of seeing things
    two separate families
    two checking accounts
    two bodies
    two different parts
    two paths to choose
    two parties to choose from

    (a friend of mine told me this the other day)..

    we have two ears and one mouth,
    we need to listen more than we talk.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • deadnothingbetterdeadnothingbetter Posts: 2,202
    chadwick wrote:
    (a friend of mine told me this the other day)..

    we have two ears and one mouth,
    we need to listen more than we talk.
    what? I can't hear you! ;)
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    deadnothingbetter wrote:
    what? I can't hear you! ;)
    We have to eyes
    we should see more than we hear
    ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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