I wanna be your naughty boy

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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    I usually don't write poems like this, but I thought I'd have a go at it
    Let me know if you have any pointers :)


    Burning lust
    puts to work
    my burning lump
    its golden throbbing

    The sight of you
    your naked smile
    makes an evening more complete
    loving light irradiates

    A loving touch
    you kissed me quick
    gentle whips
    and tools were used

    It all feels wrong
    in a right way
    but you’re too young
    and now defiled
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Why not two at a time eh :p

    As she stood there
    To undress
    Mind went wandering
    Followed my eyes
    As did all my fingertips

    Stopped inside
    Your bellybutton

    This is wrong
    But I go on
    To journey down
    Destroy the barrier
    Once inside
    Kiss the lids
    Of big brown eyes
    I swear I see
    A hint of green

    And in the morning
    I’ll be gone
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Jamal, very good
    I think by gosh
    you've got wood
    and a tush
    and ya'll be a happy man
    you should, be
    so stand tall

    Tho' I'll let our ladies of joy
    play with your man's toy
    I am elated
    that you chose to join us
    w/o makin' a fuss
    cuz we're just horndog devils
    without any thorns
    who make gold
    outta dust

    It's all part of the healing my friend
    to put your butt to the wind
    and see who wants
    to go end to end

    Is it really just lust
    lips on a perky bust
    lips on a bone
    lips on all errogenous zones

    Lips on lips
    tongue on tongue
    tongue in mouth
    as our bodies
    moan, sCREAM n' SHOUT!!!

    I don't think any of us are too young
    after all, we're all 18 n above
    to rattle and shake
    what's perky and/or hung

    It's all just part of
    Makin' glorious love
    not war, not hate,
    just luv,
    like kisses n' hugs

    So welcum aboard Jamal, my friend
    and am sure the girls
    will be along, to show you a glorious worls
    to dance, to romance
    To make love, joy and all
    It's only the beginning, the 1st inning
    and it'll never end
    Create Good Things........
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  • Jamal wrote:
    Why not two at a time eh :p

    As she stood there
    To undress
    Mind went wandering
    Followed my eyes
    As did all my fingertips

    Stopped inside
    Your bellybutton

    This is wrong
    But I go on
    To journey down
    Destroy the barrier
    Once inside
    Kiss the lids
    Of big brown eyes
    I swear I see
    A hint of green

    And in the morning
    I’ll be gone


    You'll be sorry you got up and went my friend
    cuz I'm the gardner
    I came to plant my seeds
    and went you slipped out
    when I slipped in
    cuz your woman with the cute belly button

    was wantin' wantin' something more
    she wanted a spade to loosen her soil
    and burnin' fire to make her hot hot blood boil
    a sweating man to make her toil

    so she invited me in for lemonade
    told me I looked HOT
    and needed some of her shade

    so in her bed we laid

    We had all afternoon you see
    cuz when you left
    you didn't leave a note
    or a number
    or when your wandering mind
    would return and burn
    her curvaceous behind

    Note: Snooze you lose
    you leave, don't blink
    cuz she's gonna
    give me a sexy wink
    and offer me a drink, of lemonade
    Create Good Things........
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    I'm tired, so I'll go to bed
    surely, I will think of this
    as the sheets begin to rise
    driven by a pole more south
    where it's warm and moist
    but yours is most
    cumming fast
    is all but tomorrow
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • good one Jamal!!!

    I sure the girls will now have sweeter dreams
    now that another witty soul
    has joined the team

    so dream, dream and dream some more
    while I think of thinks to do
    and how to get 2nd base
    and eventually score :D
    Create Good Things........
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  • Score with the ladies that is

    Jamal I'm sure you've got your own balls
    and know how pitch it straight into the catcher's mit
    cuz you look like a man
    who knows what to do
    with it

    So when you wake from your dream
    and your pole is wet and moist
    remember that it's all good fun
    like American baseball, hot dogs n' buns :)

    and of course then there's teh relish, or whether it's Polish, Italian Stallion, French Kisssin' dressin', mustard, ketchup and the like, or maybe some onions of cajun spices to make all tasty n' nice,
    Create Good Things........
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  • Bu2
    Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    it's all good in here.
    Come lay your head down
    upon my pillow here

    and tell me your sweet dreams
    and your stories
    about love

    Tell us what it's like to live
    where you are, my love

    And if things get a little
    too explicit
    that's okay

    Because we all are adults
    and we all feel that way

    And your poetry is something
    that we need, every day

    There's so much hate in this world already...

    What's wrong with a little love?
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Its good now to get up
    and read all tales,
    each wilder than the last
    so sit tight and hold on fast

    imagine
    a woman's body
    ripe with lust
    let ripe some more
    then quench my thirst
    for she is like expensive wine
    She has gotten better with old age
    as we went at it
    her bones rattled in her cage
    I thought that she would fall apart
    I never knew I fucked that hard
    She was last night
    the container, vacuum-cleaner
    for my seamen
    Woke up today and she had gone
    never to return again
    The funeral is next wednesday and you are all invited
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Jamal, my first reaction was GROSSSSSSSSSSSS!

    but then I read it again and again

    When I reach that ripe old age
    and only dream 'bout gettin laid
    this is the way I wanna cross over
    f-cked to death :) like Red Rover
    before they lay by ass
    to rest
    Create Good Things........
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  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    as far as waiting for wedding night:
    that is very true.....I understand what you're saying about not knowing - - learning how to satisfy each other.
    I guess something like that would be a little awkward...
    but what if you are like 40... and really do know what you're doing.... and you met someone and took the time to
    know them, love them.... the wanting part starts digging deep inside of you, and leaving you with this feeling that you cannot shake off. That first time and every time after would be nothing but everlasting bliss.
    I had just finished reading your 'Soul Full of Lust' and it kinda hit me hard... so I wanted to see what you could do
    for mine.

    but anyway... thank you for Whispering...."I Love You" , very nice... I like
    'new visions'. I wanted to see what a man could do for it. Its always nice to change things up a bit. I'll have to try it out later. :):):)
    I refuse to "sleep around" so I just have to make it up........... reading your erotic posts makes it easy
    I love them all.
    Thank you.
  • weed
    weed Posts: 475
    edabll wrote:
    Oooh, I love this. Thanks for sharing, you have made my day!



    I'm glad you liked it.
  • weed wrote:
    as far as waiting for wedding night:
    that is very true.....I understand what you're saying about not knowing - - learning how to satisfy each other.
    I guess something like that would be a little awkward...
    but what if you are like 40... and really do know what you're doing.... and you met someone and took the time to
    know them, love them.... the wanting part starts digging deep inside of you, and leaving you with this feeling that you cannot shake off. That first time and every time after would be nothing but everlasting bliss.
    I had just finished reading your 'Soul Full of Lust' and it kinda hit me hard... so I wanted to see what you could do
    for mine.

    but anyway... thank you for Whispering...."I Love You" , very nice... I like
    'new visions'. I wanted to see what a man could do for it. Its always nice to change things up a bit. I'll have to try it out later. :):):)
    I refuse to "sleep around" so I just have to make it up........... reading your erotic posts makes it easy
    I love them all.
    Thank you.

    Weed,

    Thank for liking our collective creative work in progress in we freely express our lustful desires in poetic form.

    I think anyone who's 40 unless they're a 40 yr old virgin, probably knows what sexually satisifies them, and how to coax or teach their partner where the G-spots are. Waiting for the wedding night can be exhiliarating making it life-long memory where dreams of flesh, bone, mind, heart and soul are fulfilled. Married couples that waited probably try to re-create that night forever. However if you're ~40 and have been there and done that, why wait? This time maybe it's better to 'check out equipment's plumbing' before you own it. Nothing wron with lust, it's completey natural, but it is true love that we're all seaching to find, and to do that one lifetime at time is indeed a mystery game filled with false doors, empy elevators, and trips to Cloud 9 when we find our soulmate.

    No one has to 'sleep around' to find their soulmate or someone who will satisfy all their sexual and spiritual wants and needs, yet some may want to take the bike for ride to make sure it runs in 5 gears and is comfortable with the rider, and the passenger. :)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Weed,

    Thank for liking our collective creative work in progress in we freely express our lustful desires in poetic form.

    I think anyone who's 40 unless they're a 40 yr old virgin, probably knows what sexually satisifies them, and how to coax or teach their partner where the G-spots are. Waiting for the wedding night can be exhiliarating making it life-long memory where dreams of flesh, bone, mind, heart and soul are fulfilled. Married couples that waited probably try to re-create that night forever. However if you're ~40 and have been there and done that, why wait? This time maybe it's better to 'check out equipment's plumbing' before you own it. Nothing wron with lust, it's completey natural, but it is true love that we're all seaching to find, and to do that one lifetime at time is indeed a mystery game filled with false doors, empy elevators, and trips to Cloud 9 when we find our soulmate.

    No one has to 'sleep around' to find their soulmate or someone who will satisfy all their sexual and spiritual wants and needs, yet some may want to take the bike for ride to make sure it runs in 5 gears and is comfortable with the rider, and the passenger. :)


    Well put, holey ! You rock !
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    Weed,

    Thank for liking our collective creative work in progress in we freely express our lustful desires in poetic form.

    I think anyone who's 40 unless they're a 40 yr old virgin, probably knows what sexually satisifies them, and how to coax or teach their partner where the G-spots are. Waiting for the wedding night can be exhiliarating making it life-long memory where dreams of flesh, bone, mind, heart and soul are fulfilled. Married couples that waited probably try to re-create that night forever. However if you're ~40 and have been there and done that, why wait? This time maybe it's better to 'check out equipment's plumbing' before you own it. Nothing wron with lust, it's completey natural, but it is true love that we're all seaching to find, and to do that one lifetime at time is indeed a mystery game filled with false doors, empy elevators, and trips to Cloud 9 when we find our soulmate.

    No one has to 'sleep around' to find their soulmate or someone who will satisfy all their sexual and spiritual wants and needs, yet some may want to take the bike for ride to make sure it runs in 5 gears and is comfortable with the rider, and the passenger. :)
    Hell yeah...
    and euhm, little info : i'm still a virgin myself (by choice), but...shhhhht...don't tell :p
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • Jamal wrote:
    Hell yeah...
    and euhm, little info : i'm still a virgin myself (by choice), but...shhhhht...don't tell :p

    Well you've cum (well maybe not with a partner) to the right place man!

    and I bet you're not 40

    You're looking for just the right soumate to pass your genes (jeans) to.
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Do I wanna get to know ya, b4 I blow ya

    Should I wine ya
    Should I dine ya
    Should I know yo’ mamma n’ dada
    Before I Sixty Nine ya

    Do I wanna get to know ya, b4 I blow ya

    Should we have a long courtship
    Before we get hip-to-hip
    Before we enter the harbor
    And unload our goods
    Wood, steel, satin silk
    Whipped cream n’ milk

    Do I wanna get to know ya, b4 I blow ya

    Should we just break out the bread
    And share our lust
    On every thread
    And make wanton love
    On every bed
    And hop n’ bop
    With you on top
    And me lickin’ up ev’ry drop, of your sweet luvin’

    Do I wanna get to know ya, b4 I blow ya
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Well you've cum (well maybe not with a partner) to the right place man!

    and I bet you're not 40

    You're looking for just the right soumate to pass your genes (jeans) to.


    hahaaaaaaaaa
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • And what?
    When we've talked ourselves out of all the words in the great, big universe,
    What then?
    Do we find a more sensual language?
    I vow for that!
    Forget the cold indifferent hellos
    And the souless goodbyes.
    I want to speak with my tongue parting your lips,
    Uncoaxed hands on my hips,
    Breath, breathing like a sweet symphony in my ear,
    Your cold hands in my cold hands,
    And I shall place them, ever so gently on my warm heart,
    Where there is always a place for you,
    Even when I can't find the right words to tell you so.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Bu2
    Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    that's lovely. It reminds me of my first few kisses all those years ago. The tingling up and down the back of my neck.....lovely.
    Feels Good Inc.