colaberation.

jboelhow

Any songs completed? It would be cool to hear some of them even if they are rough cuts.

walkerlastgen1

I have the music composed for obituary... but that's all Iv'e really had time for with finals and all...

walkerlastgen1

Is this for me personally, or anyone?

walkerlastgen1

p.s. i like it im knee deep in three already... so may be a while

we_were_but_stones

Hey guys sounds like a kool idea that you've got going here
I'm not sure exactly what stage you're all at, but I thought I'd post some lyrics that I wrote on here, just to see what you think of them
K here goes...

Curtains

All's not well in paradise
Her mind's been wandering
Away....

And all of Hell's been spitting ice
Since he crumbled within
That day.....

One choice of plan he will regret
The straw that broke the lovers
Heart....

Can't hide and can't forget
Now his words are tearing him
Apart...

Chorus
Behind the scenes
A new story unfolds
Behind their eyes
The plot's left unsolved


She clings to fortune in her hand
Grips it tight with a packet
Of cigarettes....

For another face has joined the stage
Behind the spotlight
He's been waiting....

And the chain has broken up
A shape of three different, bitter
Sides....

Things will never be the same
We can see im fading
With the pain....


Chorus
Behind the scenes
A new story unfolds
Behind their eyes
The plot's left unsolved


Now we're all strangers.....
Wandering....
Wondering....


Chorus
Behind the seams
The misery unfolds
Behind their eyes
The sorrow evolves


Ok that's it
Not sure about the choruses yet or the some of the lines
Anyway, I'd love to hear your comments on it
Thanks

walkerlastgen1

I lovethe line...All hell's been spitting ice...

as far as where we are... there are only a couple of songs being tampered with that I know of... do you have an Idea of who you would like to take a shot at it?

we_were_but_stones

I dunno really
It's interesting hearing everyone's ideas and stuff, but I'm not sure where I'd begin
Is it like writing and recording a whole song?
Cos I always have ideas for lyrics, as well as songs (I play bass so it's hard to write a song with one instrument - I can imagine it in my head, but that's about it)

we_were_but_stones

Thanks for the compliment on that line too

riantLoVEsu

and I thought I had some spagetti in my brain!! ")


i need to write this
2 you 2 read this

my life
trippen in this
and
it scares me
u know it does
i didnt mean to
what?????
(how?)

Zaan11

Just tossing this out there

-Untitled-

She lay me on a soft,
spinning bed of confession
I can hear her wondering aloud...about
about time I give her more than just a tear
Oh the stories, the stories she will hear...

Into the North we ride
I'm flying high...above
this fairy-tale land
Oh, and if this place
had roots to make it still
they'd be tied together
with make-believe and dreams...
Make-believe and dreams...yeah

Smiling, she says go on
still spinning in confession
I can feel her, slilently, wondering...about
About time I tell her more than just a fear
Oh the stories, the stories she will hear...

Into the South we slide
I'm sinking low...below
where sleeping dogs lie
Oh, and if this place
had wings to make it soar
they'd be ripped apart
with empty hearts and lies...
empty hearts and lies...no, no

Together we may find
a place inside your mind...
she says
Wings and roots are fine
It's going to take some time...
she says
Taking a fall...hear, the baby's cry
Spreading his wings...see, the man fly...fly...
she says...she says
she says...she says
she says...she said

walkerlastgen1

sorry it's been so long since my last post.. my internet is a bitchhhhh ....This is good stuff zan... you think some aggresive music would be fitting?

Zaan11

Sure.

Or maybe slower in some parts and having it kind of build up. Feel free to tinker with it as you see fit.

walkerlastgen1

kind of like given to fly?

Zaan11

yeah that's a great example man.

I have some more stuff layin around, iif ya want me to post some more let me know.

walkerlastgen1

sorry ive been absent for so long guys my home pc crashed and I can't get on unless i go somewhere...please keep posting...obituary is finished but I don't know hoew I'l ever post it? sorry to all..