Originally posted by Mr Pyjama Thanks Violet Ray :-), you seem a very kind person. You have a lot of respect on this board as well, look at how many people read/comment on your stuff!! Also well done for taking the time to comment on other peoples work and replying to people who complement yours :-)
that's very nice of you to say, thanks
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
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Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
Originally posted by A HitchHiker Poet great emotion
hey thanks:)
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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that's very nice of you to say, thanks
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
hey thanks:)
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
This is the one I like.