hurt me baby

violet ray

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suede

i like the way you write. true and from the Heart is the only way.
smile...there will be better days.
i never knew five lines could say so much.
i never knew that three words never meant enough...

violet ray

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suede

well you're very good,
and you're welcome

violet ray

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suede

Originally posted by violet ray
bite me there
pinch me here
pull my hair

...also sounds pretty hottt!

violet ray

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violet ray

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JDE-PJ

bite me there
pinch me here
pull my hair


but don't touch
my fucking heart


push me down
tie me up
twist me around


but don't touch
my fucking heart


nice imagery you create with these words violet ray.



very good.

violet ray

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suede

HOTTT!!!
seriously though, really good.
reminds me of the song "dead girlfriend" by The Catherine Wheel.
http://thurbz.com/cw/bsiderm/dead.ram

violet ray

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JDE-PJ

Originally posted by violet ray


hey, this is good...dark sounding, but good. i've never heard of them before.

ever hear the song black metallic?

you probably have, it's also by them, they were a great band from britain, just broke up a year or two ago I guess.

violet ray

Originally posted by JDE-PJ
ever hear the song black metallic?

you probably have, it's also by them, they were a great band from britain, just broke up a year or two ago I guess.

no, i don't think i've heard that either.

JDE-PJ

Originally posted by suede
HOTTT!!!
seriously though, really good.
reminds me of the song "dead girlfriend" by The Catherine Wheel.
http://thurbz.com/cw/bsiderm/dead.ram

good song!

is this on their last album?

don't think I have ever heard this one.

JDE-PJ

Originally posted by violet ray
no, i don't think i've heard that either.

I've never seen you when you're smiling
It really gets under my skin
You say it's easy when it's faster
I still can't guess what you're after

It's the colour of your skin
Your skin is black metallic
It's the colour of your skin
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic

I think of you when you're sleeping
Of all the secrets that you're keeping
You can't stay all day under the covers
'Cause under there you'll discover

It's the colour of your skin
Your skin is black metallic
It's the colour of your skin
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
You're turning black metallic...

It's the colour of your skin
It's the colour of your skin...

Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
You're turning black metallic

It's the colour of your skin
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic
Your skin is black metallic

suede

this was an early B-side from the Ferment era...it was on the vinyl only of I Want To Touch You. CW never officially broke up, but their last album and tour was in 2000. Rob Dickinson, the singer/writer/guitarist is working on a solo album, rumored to be released in the fall of this year...i hope so. The Catherine Wheel was my favorite band...along with pj.

Black Metallic for you:
http://thurbz.com/cw/fermentrm/03black.ram

violet ray

i like this one too

violet ray

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JDE-PJ

Originally posted by violet ray
i like this one too

this is one of my favorite songs of all time violet ray.

weird that 3 of my favorite songs all have black in there title.


thanks for posting it suede, and for the info on the band, I heard they had broken up, glad they haven't, and I hope Rob's solo cd comes out and I can check it out.


oh and I want to touch you, that's another great song, you would really like that one too violet.

JDE-PJ

Originally posted by violet ray
bite me there
pinch me here
pull my hair



but don't touch
my fucking heart




push me down
tie me up
twist me around




but don't touch
my fucking heart




bruise my lips
it hurts so good
when you kiss
me like that

grab my hips
push me pull me




please don't touch
my fucking heart

very good violet, you can take out "it"though, to keep your three words flowing, hurts so good works very well:)

violet ray

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JDE-PJ

Originally posted by violet ray
thanks j,
i'll do that

oh and you got a pj reference in there, hehe, nice:)

you can leave that 4 word one, since it's pearl jam of course;)

suede

mysterious. dark. hottt. really damn good. sounds like there must've been some steamy scene's only available on the director's cut, eh? nice.

Originally posted by violet ray
bite me there
pinch me here
pull my hair

but don't touch
my fucking heart

push me down
tie me up
twist me around

but don't touch
my fucking heart

bruise my lips
it hurts so good
when you kiss
me like that

grab my hips
push me pull me

please don't touch
my fucking heart

violet ray

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suede

Originally posted by JDE-PJ
thanks for posting it suede, and for the info on the band, I heard they had broken up, glad they haven't, and I hope Rob's solo cd comes out and I can check it out.

you may as well consider them broken up, though it's not official. Neil, the drummer, and Brian, the guitarist, have been making some songs together:
http://www.50ftmonster.com

suede

Originally posted by violet ray
hehe, something like that

lucky bastard!

violet ray

Originally posted by suede
lucky bastard!

apparently he didn't think so...

Mr Pyjama

Wow you have a great style, keeping things simple but putting accross more meaning then i could with a page long set of lyrics. Grr..you make me feel dumb :-( But congratulations, they are very impressive. They remind me off something my friend would write.

violet ray

really?
wow, thank you so much!

and that's not true, i just read your lyrics, remember? i really like them:)

Mr Pyjama

Thanks Violet Ray :-), you seem a very kind person. You have a lot of respect on this board as well, look at how many people read/comment on your stuff!! Also well done for taking the time to comment on other peoples work and replying to people who complement yours :-)