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  • Still Here
    Still Here Posts: 661
    ISN wrote:
    painful as it seems
    untouched in dreams
    I walk amongst the fearless
    until they call me back together...
    while I'm apparently arranged...
    wonder aimlessly into the light...
    I am the hurt
    I feel your pain
    wash away with the tide...
    walk into the brighter day...
    and the wishes are still unspoken.


    the above makes me want to read the whole thread....but as I'm pressed for time.....I'll put that off for a while although I might read snippets....(snippets....hehehehehe)......I do like this one very much

    that's actually part 2 of another one on this thread...FinsburyParkCarrots 'requested' another verse, and I had to go from scratch...glad you liked it though, thanks!
    :)
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • Still Here
    Still Here Posts: 661
    You left me no choice.
    You wasted your time with me.
    You cannot see inside.
    You weren't my friend anymore.

    Talking in tongues
    Reaping the rewards
    Marking my territory
    Ending a beginning

    I'm not anywhere.
    I'm right here.
    I'm walking away now.
    I'm not anyone right now.

    Taking a Tuesday drive
    Waking a stranger
    Killing myself again
    Riding my wave
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.

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