Ophelia's Nun

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  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    Wherever there are scars and cuts,
    there lies a piece of me inside.
    Wherever cries for attention are ignored,
    I hear but can't do a thing.
    Whenever we are apart and angry,
    I'm happy just to stay together.
    Whenever I can't take the hunger,
    I feed my face with angst.
    Whoever told you I was here,
    was just a part of me escaped.
    Whoever went for broke and jumped,
    was only me falling off the edge.
    When I hit the fucking bottom,
    whoever saves me deserves to die.
    How will I ever learn the ropes?
    Sometimes can't find my face.
    Whoever thinks I can handle this,
    you don't think worth a shit.
    Where will I end up when I live?
    When will I live where I end up?
    Who can practice what they preach,
    when they preach to hear themselves speak?
    Why must I ask all these questions?
    When will I find all the answers?
    Where will I go when I get home?
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • I enjoy the clarity and directness of your voice in this poem very much. It's a gift to be able to speak clearly in a poem. :)

    Thanks for the comments on this thread, by the way!

    :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    John Cafferkey's red tractor, streaked with gold
    mane mud, beats the greeny boreen like a stick
    upon a bodhran, and it rattles old
    rhythms with its wheels, blur spinning, thick
    with tumbling jumps and yelps from Rex the dog
    who loves the chase of rubber on the road
    of irises and orchids by the bog
    of black Doona, deep rushing, heather broad.
    And I laugh, in the tractor bucket, rust
    reddening my hands that hold the edge
    of my groundbanging shuttle pounding dust
    and shuddering in tune as we hit hedge
    upon big hedge on taking corners. How
    the music of my land is made, here, now.

    the music of this land is everywhere
    it's in grafton street and stephen's square
    it's in the soles of my feet and pushes me
    it's in the plushy soft bog and the hare hanging in the shed
    bleeding (not speeding), the smell of shit in Monaghan
    the purple and the brown and green of Donegal
    the sheen on the farmer's head and his broad teeth
    it's in the queer fear that grips you when you go home
    and know there is no home now
    it's in the soles of my feet and it takes me everywhere
    it lands me level where I stand
    and makes me want to dance
    my son has it in his soul
    and in his eyes - it can't be disguised
    I hear it in my heart
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    very very good flow...:D
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    blame Ireland.....blame Ireland....hehehehehehe.....thank God....

    (thanks....btw.....:) )
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Originally posted by ISN
    the music of this land is everywhere
    it's in grafton street and stephen's square
    it's in the soles of my feet and pushes me
    it's in the plushy soft bog and the hare hanging in the shed
    bleeding (not speeding), the smell of shit in Monaghan
    the purple and the brown and green of Donegal
    the sheen on the farmer's head and his broad teeth
    it's in the queer fear that grips you when you go home
    and know there is no home now
    it's in the soles of my feet and it takes me everywhere
    it lands me level where I stand
    and makes me want to dance
    my son has it in his soul
    and in his eyes - it can't be disguised
    I hear it in my heart

    Ah, you know how it is. :)
  • Originally posted by ISN
    the music of this land is everywhere
    it's in grafton street and stephen's square
    it's in the soles of my feet and pushes me
    it's in the plushy soft bog and the hare hanging in the shed
    bleeding (not speeding), the smell of shit in Monaghan
    the purple and the brown and green of Donegal
    the sheen on the farmer's head and his broad teeth
    it's in the queer fear that grips you when you go home
    and know there is no home now
    it's in the soles of my feet and it takes me everywhere
    it lands me level where I stand
    and makes me want to dance
    my son has it in his soul
    and in his eyes - it can't be disguised
    I hear it in my heart

    Wow, beautiful interpretation. It feels like I traveled through Ireland in a minute, but came away with the important aspects rather than the glamor.

    I like the way you think.
    Liberal Douchebags that Blame Bush for Everything are Useless Pieces of Trash. I Shit on You.
  • A choir's kyrie skies
    in steeping arching stone;
    A candle shadow flies:
    Three tongues in one.

    And when the echo falls
    Below the window light
    Will pity greet the calls
    enflamed in flight?
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    This thread is awesome.. the poetry here blows me away.. i will contribute whenever i feel it, but you jammers are the best!!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • "Why am I me?", he asked.

    Then he asked,
    "Am I me?"

    Then he asked,
    "What is an 'I'?"

    Then he asked,
    "What is a 'me'?"

    Then he asked,
    "Is 'me' merely
    an objective personal pronoun
    relating to the 'I'
    or is it imbued with different meanings
    of social and individual ontology?"

    Then he asked,
    "What are the meanings of 'social'?
    What are the meanings of 'individual'?
    What are the meanings of 'ontology'?"

    Then,
    "What is meaning?"

    And,
    "Is 'meaning' different from 'meanings'? How?"

    And then,
    "How can language reflect meaning or meanings?"

    And then, then,
    "What is language?"

    But then still,
    "What is a question,
    if not language,
    which may
    or may not
    reflect meaning,
    or meanings,
    which we must question
    the meaning or meanings of?"

    Then, then, then,
    "What is 'why'?"

    And then,
    "What is 'how'?"

    After which,
    "What is 'what'?"

    To which some bright spark replied,

    "Eh?
    What?"

    :D
  • All day long
    You made a word bomb
    with no clock that went tick
    nor a dynamite stick
    Just some hateful aplomb
    That blew wrong

    Folly all along
    Folderol, the word bomber song.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    I promise I'll be good no drama
    I'll behave well what do ya say?
    This is all for you. Be cool.
    I know we both "secretly" miss Seta
    (shhh we do.)
    And it's like living with only one shoe.
    Oh shit and I'm the cat who pooed
    So this is how the magic begins?
    Haha ha!

    You are a handsome man aren't you?
    Only handsome men want to shave
    in the sun when they are perfected.

    Tell me, what are FinsburyParkCarrots
    other than good for your eyes?
    And tell me the deep spiritual meaning
    behind food.
    It's raining you
    must be right at home.

    Haven't a good quote for ya I'm usually
    prepared with a quote but all I've got
    is the theme to Indiana Jones the one
    where the ball keeps rolling...
    Yeah that one...

    Write a happy ending Fins.

    Out of intuition prespire higher.
    Zippity do da it wouldn't surprise me
    if coke bottles fell out of the sky.

    That same question What is language
    was recently asked here too
    I agreed with my peer
    to teach the teacher
    a thing or two.
  • Thank you for that. Yes, AmaT, be good.
    And thank you for the "handsome" bit. I am,
    I'm told, by my fair lady J, food
    for feasting eyes of love. I clam
    quite tightly at a tendency to brag
    "It's true of course, I'm really quite a fella",
    so I'll not boast. Let other tongues go wag
    about the face behind the black umbrella
    that mystery has opened on the skies
    of raining curiosity, packed with sighs
    that pour down on a moment's thought full throttle ...
    every drop shaped like your cola bottle.

    :)
  • And on that note I'm off to bed. Don't trash the place while I'm gone, anyone. ;)

    :D
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    Originally posted by Amaterasu
    I promise I'll be good no drama
    I'll behave well what do ya say?
    This is all for you. Be cool.
    I know we both "secretly" miss Seta
    (shhh we do.)
    And it's like living with only one shoe.
    Oh shit and I'm the cat who pooed
    So this is how the magic begins?
    Haha ha!

    You are a handsome man aren't you?
    Only handsome men want to shave
    in the sun when they perfected.

    Tell me, what are FinsburyParkCarrots
    other than good for your eyes?
    And tell me the deep spiritual meaning
    behind food.
    It's raining you
    must be right at home.

    Haven't a good quote for ya I'm usually
    prepared with a quote but all I've got
    is the theme to Indiana Jones the one
    where the ball keeps rolling...
    Yeah that one...

    Write a happy ending Fins.

    Out of intuition prespire higher.
    Zippity do da it wouldn't surprise me
    if coke bottles fell out of the sky.

    That same question What is language
    was recently asked here too
    I agreed with my peer
    to teach the teacher
    a thing or two.

    nice tribute...this thread just never ceases to wow me.

    BTW, Finsbury...I really liked 'Eh,What?'...what is AMT?
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • AMT is "A Moving Train", the current affairs and political debate board on this BBS.

    :)
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    right and I feel really stupid for having asked that...:D
    thanks.
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Glad you are Still Here
    and

    w
    o
    w

    thats all.
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    Originally posted by Amaterasu
    Glad you are Still Here
    and

    w
    o
    w

    thats all.

    thanks. I think...

    crescent shaped hearts love no-one, empty like a stone and hollow in my bones, I'm all alone, freaking out on fucking lies I see, everyone finds themselves inside, got no alibi, in a hole, going down, coming to the calls heard by only one, rusty edges fly around, by the way, youth deprived, soul survived, went with the time, ticking away...
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • You sip weak tea to breakfast news and hear
    the radio presenter in his smug
    estuary drawl, faux-insincere,
    cod-test the politician. "I'm no mug,
    There's prozac in the water, in our tea,
    and flouride too." The politician groans,
    "What you people always fail to see
    when hurling words like airy sticks and stones
    is that we understand the stats; we've got
    the finest brains all on the job; we know
    what's best in this case. Accusation's rot."
    The interviewer coughs. There's silence now.
    This water's kicking in, I'm in concord
    with one more lie, another cup of fraud.
  • "The people can't be trusted,
    Now they're shouting doubt,
    Making out we're busted:
    How'd we vote them out?"
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    the mayor is a major ass,
    the chief's seen better light,
    so much blood spilt in the grass,
    it happened over night,

    none had seen the brutal mess,
    freedom's come and gone,
    heisted in a truck, no less,
    chained locked, and it is done,

    the mayor's wife has run away,
    it's known the chief is missing,
    some children saw them yesterday,
    it's rumoured they were kissing,

    and what of freedom's prison,
    is there nothing more to this,
    freedom's not for everyone,
    unless you steal a kiss...
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • I like it... keep it rolling! :)
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    olderman...very cool poem, i liked it alot...

    finsbury...you are my new favorite poet. right behind ed vedder...

    :D
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • A bobbing crown, an open bill,
    a breast of rising blue;
    Coverts open, poised and still
    for perch stretch, and a true
    new song, made to calling tides
    Heard far beyond the land:
    Within a word a bird resides
    Held in the reader's hand.
  • dyaogirldyaogirl Posts: 138
    From the core, liquid rich iron flows
    the inner moon-size heart generates
    magnetic energy
    humanity cradled

    we begin our red-fire molten birth

    the Centaur spear pierces earth’s center

    202 flames erupt!

    Glorified white light
    rains down pure ethos beauty

    land alights
    embers develop
    multi-colored dimensional understandings

    Salt of the human tear
    becoming oceans of connections

    whispers of oral traditions

    breatheing intimate insight
    of civilizations’ perpetual soul.

    Zeus climbs atop of the Acropolis
    and roars to
    four
    billion
    viewers
    across continents
    Agamemnon and Achilles time` swords rest

    And here
    In the gathering under one roof,
    One vision
    parades in dignity of human triumph
    entrusted to keep mankind’s fire dances alive
    in unified competition of the one world.

    Children come! Voices raised curious to hear,
    attracted to the brilliant beauty of the single torch
    igniting their hopes to carry on honored traditions.
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • Meee darlin' replied with the best poem of the whole thread! I love you, dyaogirl! :)
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    :)
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
  • Fumble like a dog nosing piss on a track to a cave
    Back to a safe beating, if that's how you're voting.
  • Still HereStill Here Posts: 661
    nice short one...to the point.
    PJ: Toledo-9/22/96. E. Lansing-8/18/98. Detroit-8/23/98. Detroit-10/7/00. Detroit-6/25 & 6/26/03. Toledo-10/2/04 [VFC]. Detroit-5/22/06. Chicago-8/5/07 [Lolla]. Cleveland-5/9/10. Baltimore-10/27/13.

    EV: Honolulu-4/21 & 4/22/07 [Kokua]. Detroit-6/26/11.
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