Ophelia's Nun

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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    I am, I am. Wouldn't want to help it if I could.

    :) I see the tragedy link up there... this thread gets so big, so fast.... I feel to be the last long distance runner.


    :)


    Howdy miss BE... I do like the poem, 'specially in color. :D

    xoxo
  • "Hi-dee-ho" :D and howdy, rowdy, chowdy, mowdy, bowdy bacatchew! :)

    Danka, methought the colou;)rs were much purdier than the old beige on brown so, gave them a wee bit of life by lighting them up a bit . :)

    Piece & louvre, all! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    When you are tired of your weariness,
    and all that pain demands cannot command
    your patience any more, you start to bless
    instead of censure foolishness and fond
    comedy. Then, laughing with the bare
    brazenness of one who knew life's dark
    recesses but, in time, saw not to care
    to shout its broad importance, you will hark
    the music of your little life and death.
    Soon, turning from great catastrophic bangs
    of swallowing tornadoes, you'll gain breath
    for songs of truest tone, in comic things.
    A flower laughs a song upon a grave,
    A laugh sounds out the deepest cry we have.
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    lives opened and trashed
    look, ma, watch me crash
    no time to question
    why'd nothing last?
    grasping hold on
    hold tight and fast
    soon be over
    and i will be blessed

    let the oceans swell
  • exhale
    exhale Posts: 185
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    When you are tired of your weariness,
    and all that pain demands cannot command
    your patience any more, you start to bless
    instead of censure foolishness and fond
    comedy. Then, laughing with the bare
    brazenness of one who knew life's dark
    recesses but, in time, saw not to care
    to shout its broad importance, you will hark
    the music of your little life and death.
    Soon, turning from great catastrophic bangs
    of swallowing tornadoes, you'll gain breath
    for songs of truest tone, in comic things.
    A flower laughs a song upon a grave,
    A laugh sounds out the deepest cry we have.

    strong, but true.

    thank you for sharing
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    lives opened and trashed
    look, ma, watch me crash
    no time to question
    why'd nothing last?
    grasping hold on
    hold tight and fast
    soon be over
    and i will be blessed

    let the oceans swell

    Good to have some Ed on the thread.

    :)
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    tsis says it's this...

    01. Last Exit
    Written By: Vedder, Ament, Gossard, McCready, Abbruzzese
    Album: Vitalogy
    Release Date: 1994-12-06
    Found On: Vitalogy


    lives opened and trashed..."look ma, watch me crash"...
    no time to question...why'd nothing last...
    grasp and hold on...we're dyin' fast...
    soon be over...and i will relent...

    let the ocean swell


    what do you think it is?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Well, I've always sung...

    "Ribboosupp eee trayyysh
    Lipsuction creche
    Nine timetah question
    Why nuthin' lashh
    Gasper hold on
    The tide waves splash
    Soon be over
    And I will Mabel at last"

    But tsis may be more advised in their interpretation, of course...

    jk
    :D:D:D
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    tsis is widely incorrect, imo :)
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    more peace for my friends...


    Home, home again
    I like to be here when I can
    When I come home cold and tired
    It's good to warm my bones beside the fire
    Far away across the field
    The tolling of the iron bell
    Calls the faithful to their knees
    To hear the softly spoken magic spells



    'floyd
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    satin sound across space
    echoes of bodies over and over
    knowing together the rhythm of the moon

    silken hips move in time
    oh
    slow
    one double nebula sway
    one pulse
    found by chance
    on a parabolic mirror
    slightly readjusted

    sound, mmm
    lunar sound
    lunaluna
    oh feel her gravity
    she's moving now
    sound and energy colours the vision inside
    close my eyes

    golden hair across my chest
    sapphire eyes glittering
    simples of our moon


    astrally
    forever
    in all dimensions
    sounding
    "Bonnie and Clyde....
    Bonnie and Clyde"
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I counted thirty seven veins on the left cheek
    forty one veins on the right
    The nose was a throbbing seminar in the principle of bifurcation
    a network, a spaghetti junction of puceness
    and the teeth
    seemed to overbite and rest somewhere near the chin
    like sallow dossers about to jump a bridge
    and the hair was definitely dyed
    I don't think it was meant to be pink
    but there were definite tinges around the temples
    and the bouffant blowwave was a Thatcherite tribute
    grammar school boy done good in parliament
    with the hairstyle of a junior transport minister
    and the white shirt washed by Commons staff
    and the port stain still present on the gut from the night of the fox hunting vote
    a vote to have a vote to have a vote
    which he lost
    and which didn't please his farming constituency in the surgery the next Tuesday

    and I counted ten ports
    four double scotches
    eight havanas
    twenty four and a half mentions of the single currency
    eighteen of Sangatte
    fifty nine of his dog, Cyril
    a good measure of reference to the golf club
    and finally one for a cab to Ronnie Scott's
    which I saw him enter
    it already occupied by a mysterious blonde
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    "Anyway, apropos The Honourable Smythely Smythe-Smythe, ahem, I'm not conflabbing extraneous matter, so keep this under your goggles, but a certain personage from the Ministry relates that - and this is, you know, ahem - how shall we put this - not for PMQs on Tuesday - that - said Smythe was seen exiting a certain establishment in the Mayfair district at four in the morning in, er, let's say, ah, reassigned gender of dressage...lovely floral print job actually...a right old dolly rocker...agreeable breastages for a chap. Staples from head office wasn't quite sure about the Safeways supermarket bag under the arm... full of clinking stuff...and a carrot...looked like it was a Finsbury Park job...very big....."
  • dyaogirl
    dyaogirl Posts: 138
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    satin sound across space
    echoes of bodies over and over
    knowing together the rhythm of the moon

    silken hips move in time
    oh
    slow
    one double nebula sway
    one pulse
    found by chance
    on a parabolic mirror
    slightly readjusted

    sound, mmm
    lunar sound
    lunaluna
    oh feel her gravity
    she's moving now
    sound and energy colours the vision inside
    close my eyes

    golden hair across my chest
    sapphire eyes glittering
    simples of our moon


    astrally
    forever
    in all dimensions
    sounding
    "Bonnie and Clyde....
    Bonnie and Clyde"

    Luna’s breathing
    Beam-lit reception
    Beckons
    The dance

    Star energy pulsing in
    rhythmic recognition
    Of lovers
    within seemless
    motion
    The universe enfolded
    to her
    as his touch.

    She curtseys
    He bows
    In love’s eternal perfection of
    The dance
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    He's in lurrrrrrrrrveeeee......

    :)

    Thank you, truly, my darling Julie. :)
  • dyaogirl
    dyaogirl Posts: 138
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    He's in lurrrrrrrrrveeeee......

    :)

    Thank you, truly, my darling Julie. :)

    And so is she. His touch enfolds the universe to her.
    '..... Ah! A perfect illustration of the poststructuralist paradox. Does the signifier "Merlot" correspond with the 'truth' of the bottle I polished off last night, or do we hold in our thoughts a different "signified" of bottle-of-Merlot-ness? Perhaps we're dreaming of the same bottle!" -FinsburyParkCarrots

  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    edit



    <bats eyes>
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I started this a couple of months ago and I've been thinking I should resurrect it and carry it on...

    So, recap... :)

    SCENE: A park bench in a city district in the North East of England. This bench has two occupants: Tam and Nelly. Tam's about five five: he's bony legged. Sandy flyaway hair. He's got brown cords and a grey terylene shirt on. The collars are jumbos. Seventies jobs. He wears heavy rimmed old style National Health glasses. That's right, a domestic reference. National Health. He keeps one spectacle wing attached to the frame with sellotape, but the tape's coming loose and he's always having to lift up his bony hand from his knee to pinch the tape tighter, to keep the glasses balanced on his nose. Nelly's much shorter. Cuts her own white hair. It's very skinned in places, has tails in others. She wears a Rupert the Bear sweater. She has black jeans and flip flops. he's fifty-three, she fifty-nine. In front of them, as they stare into space - each munching on a limp cheese sandwich - two boys, about fourteen, are beating each other with long wooden boards protruding from which are nine inch nails. Both lads are laughing as one swings and misses the other.

    NELLY: A String of Pearls, that's what it was. A la da dee da la....

    (pause)

    TAM: And I said to the sergeant, the bus wasn't going to stop for me. I'm on disability. If I hadn't have rapped out with the stick it would have gone straight past.

    NELLY: What?

    TAM: The bus! Not another one for two hours. I would have had to walk all way to Brockley Whins with me bad you-know-what. (Pause) Look at them fokkin' kids. He'll have the other one's eye out in a minute. (Shouts at the boys.) Oi! Ya little bastards. I'll tell ye mams, the pair o yees. Shouldn't you be in school anyroad? Don't yoww tell ME ta fokk off, or I'll come over and wallop you one, straight across the 'ead.

    (pause)

    So, they said, Mr Carr, we're arresting you for criminal damage and being drunk and disorderly. They'd taken fokkin' samples in that cop shop and the devil knows what, and I said have yow not heard of harrassment, 'cos you're harrassin' me...

    NELLY: Or was it In The Mood? A la da dee da la... (pause) I'm cold.

    TAM: You're always cold.

    NELLY: Don't know why we always come here, day after day. Let's go back.

    TAM: We cannant go back! Remember? Big George with the pitbull? What you said about his missus, even if it was true and half the estate knows it too? And what ya did? Knockin' the windows through in the flat? And yow knowin' he's a friggin' psychopath?

    NELLY: Like you did in the bus? You could've got jail for that!

    TAM: But I didn't. They were in the wrong. I was a man with a disability. They should have stopped.

    NELLY: You cut that woman with that glass. She was sitting just inside. She was pregnant too. You should have got time for that. I've got time. Fokkin' time being with you. Who'd have thought. Thirty years.

    TAM: Rhapsody in Blue.

    NELLY: That was it. (Smiles.) A la da da a la da da a la dee dee...

    TAM: No, it's a la da da a la de de a la da da...

    NELLY: No, it fokkin' ain't!!!! It's a la la da da da la la a de de de...Oi! Yow two little bastards. Stop laughin' at us and get back to knockin' shite out of each other or I'll tell your mams...Don't you dare use that sort of language to a woman, yow foul mouthed little fokkers!!!!

    TAM: Yow tell 'em Nell! haw haw!!! I love comin' here!

    NELLY: So do I. Another sandwich, love?

    TAM: Yes please. Don't drop it on the floor like the last one. I could swear I tasted doghairs off of it....

    NELLY: Get your own bleedin' sandwich.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Christ, where was my mind back in April, when I wrote that? LOL

    No, after all, I'll let it lie and get the old wordpad out to write something totally different for tonight... :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Malvolio is peering through the bars
    of his impromptu dungeon in the yard,
    smelling when Sir Topaz lights cigars
    and groaning, "Oh my lady has been hard
    on me, when all I did was don some socks
    of yellow colour, hoping I might woo
    her, as her letter said - oh, what cruel shocks
    await me now? Pray tell: what will ensue?"

    "Oh pitiable fool", Sir Topaz breathes,
    softly through the bars, "Olivia
    will doubtless free you. I am one who grieves
    to see myself complicit in the snare
    that led you to your cell, but then you would
    proclaim yourself my lady's favourite.
    In the hearts of fools it's understood
    That favour's graced in kingliness of wit

    and lowliness of stance. I am a fool:
    Yes, I am Feste, jester, in disguise
    dressed as counsel, come to pass you gruel
    and wisdom of the holy and the wise.
    Fool counsel for a fool." With that, Malvolio
    Seethes here, "I shall revenge you, every one."
    All the times I read this tale I know
    A tragic end survives its comic tone.