Ophelia's Nun

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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh... and "Polonius a go-go" would be a KILLER username, :D
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    oh... and "Polonius a go-go" would be a KILLER username, :D

    Yeah, but he couldn't go "invisible" behind the curtain links, eh?

    :D

    Lovelovelove

    :)

    That reminds me of a play that builds up to a graveyard scene. Let me go dig. :)
  • While I'm digging, dig this, for beauty!

    :)

    http://www.virginiafairchild.com/Mine-web.jpg
  • I dug. I saw. Do you play conquers?
  • You fix me with the good eye that your missus didn't stab:
    It's slightly bluer than the other one.
    I would escape. Your hand weighs on my shoulder like a slab:
    You roar, "Have one more drink before you're done".

    Not that I was going anywhere just yet at all:
    I've only been inside this pub three hours.
    I say I'll buy the round but you shout "Ballix, it's my call!",
    and you order two good stouts and double Powers.

    You poke at someone's gut as they sit meekly at the bar:
    "Hey, Tony! Did yez know ye're gettin' fat?
    Yez used t' be a streak o' piss, as thin as this cigar!
    How did yez get as feckin' big as that?"

    And Tony doesn't answer, he just juts his chin a bit
    and nods to me "Now HE'S the feckin' lump!"
    It's true: I spy your belly in the mirror. It would sit
    Your pints of Guinness flat down on its bump.

    And when you get your pints you want a top up for the two:
    "Ye've robbed me half a glassful on each one!"
    The barman eyes your bad eye and he glowers, free from view,
    "I'll kick your feckin' arse before I'm done".

    I say, I'm fine. You interject. "You're NOT that feckin' fine!
    If I let them get away with liberties
    They'd have their greedy fingers on each hard earned quid that's mine,
    And yours, as well. Don't grant them feckers ease."

    And as you wave your hands about to demonstrate your point
    You knock your Guinness down in Tony's lap.
    Now, Tony starts to rise up. Broken glass rings through the joint:
    "Ye feckin' ass. Ye're gonna get a slap".

    You run straight out the frontdoor of the bar, your heaving gut
    All wobbling, your pockets spilling change.
    I watch you out the door: You head into the Thug and Mutt
    When you think that you're unseen and out of range.

    * * * * * *

    Yes. That's how I remember you. The pubs you drank in then
    Have gone all brass and Bud, all happy hours
    And cocktail townies. Gone are your whole kind of drinking men
    Who'd spill a pint in verse-inspiring showers.
  • That's how the sky fills the graves up around here.
    That's how the night is so black but so clear.
    That's how you tire from watching for thunder.
    That's how the day's just as long as the year.

    That's how an author dismisses his story.
    That's how a talker halts, with his mouth dry.
    That's how a lover grows silent and weary.
    That's how a poet dies: Wanting to die.
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    That's how the sky fills the graves up around here.
    That's how the night is so black but so clear.
    That's how you tire from watching for thunder.
    That's how the day's just as long as the year.

    That's how an author dismisses his story.
    That's how a talker halts, with his mouth dry.
    That's how a lover grows silent and weary.
    That's how a poet dies: Wanting to die.

    very nice!
    loved the tone in this :)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Shadows know beneath the willow bough
    How all this cold ground, closed out from the day
    was where the sun and rain laid deepest. Oh,
    Shadows know how growth's shade brings decay.
  • If you give bootlaces to some people,
    Some day they're going to want your legs
    Because they can't see that their own would be better:
    If they knocked them into shape;
    if they wanted to run away from their own machine-gun fire.

    I'm tired of carrying my wagon about the battleground
    Giving free wares to the wounded of war.
    I have a simple heart and no need to keep on this business
    of handing out my last bandages to people who have their own
    and know how to put them on.

    They'll plunder the wagon when I'm gone but I'm taking my store first.
    They'll make a raft of the tailboard and pretend the sand's an ocean
    Sailing them into more romantic miseries. They'll make a shroud
    of the wagonhood, or blinkers to fit around the sun.
    But I know, somehow, they will never have call for the wheels.
  • days, oh the days of the dayglow, good days oh
    I feel primed in a good summer day oh
    a good summer day oh the dayglow my dyaogirl

    :):):)

    Strength in soft beauty is just so absolutely attractive.
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    You fix me with the good eye that your missus didn't stab:
    It's slightly bluer than the other one.
    I would escape. Your hand weighs on my shoulder like a slab:
    You roar, "Have one more drink before you're done".

    Not that I was going anywhere just yet at all:
    I've only been inside this pub three hours.
    I say I'll buy the round but you shout "Ballix, it's my call!",
    and you order two good stouts and double Powers.

    You poke at someone's gut as they sit meekly at the bar:
    "Hey, Tony! Did yez know ye're gettin' fat?
    Yez used t' be a streak o' piss, as thin as this cigar!
    How did yez get as feckin' big as that?"

    And Tony doesn't answer, he just juts his chin a bit
    and nods to me "Now HE'S the feckin' lump!"
    It's true: I spy your belly in the mirror. It would sit
    Your pints of Guinness flat down on its bump.

    And when you get your pints you want a top up for the two:
    "Ye've robbed me half a glassful on each one!"
    The barman eyes your bad eye and he glowers, free from view,
    "I'll kick your feckin' arse before I'm done".

    I say, I'm fine. You interject. "You're NOT that feckin' fine!
    If I let them get away with liberties
    They'd have their greedy fingers on each hard earned quid that's mine,
    And yours, as well. Don't grant them feckers ease."

    And as you wave your hands about to demonstrate your point
    You knock your Guinness down in Tony's lap.
    Now, Tony starts to rise up. Broken glass rings through the joint:
    "Ye feckin' ass. Ye're gonna get a slap".

    You run straight out the frontdoor of the bar, your heaving gut
    All wobbling, your pockets spilling change.
    I watch you out the door: You head into the Thug and Mutt
    When you think that you're unseen and out of range.

    * * * * * *

    Yes. That's how I remember you. The pubs you drank in then
    Have gone all brass and Bud, all happy hours
    And cocktail townies. Gone are your whole kind of drinking men
    Who'd spill a pint in verse-inspiring showers.


    *cheers*
    nice writtings as always Fc
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Originally posted by anOmis
    *cheers*
    nice writtings as always Fc

    Thanks, anOmis.

    :)
  • Do I really fit in here,
    in this placeless virtual space?
    You see, I'm a bloke with two arms and two legs
    and I live in an actual place
    called Cambridge, England. I'm just a bloke
    and my name is Richard. I'm bearded,
    and I write to bring love, not to goad or provoke
    and I hope that my verse is well worded
    Enough to make something constructive of time
    That you spend as you scroll down the page.
    But sometimes I think that my comical rhyme
    Isn't hip with the usual rage.
  • Nice poem unkie Richard....:D
    I don't live today.....Maybe tomorrow?-Jimi Hendrix
  • Alright, nephew. cheers! :D
  • I want to sit down at the Cam today
    when I get a chance, on some old bench
    that looks out at the river. In the way
    of food I'll have some oranges for lunch,
    perhaps. Now, as I sit down there
    I want to try to get the sploshing sound
    of flowing river water locked in here
    (points to head). I want the pound
    of oars from rowing boats to part my lines
    of verse, like punctuation. And I want
    to let in simple sunlight, through the round
    vowel sounds or ciphers that I like to plant
    About my lines. I'll make sure, all the while,
    To sound my poem, free of bloated Style.
  • CLOV (fixed gaze, tonelessly, towards auditorium):
    They said to me, That's love, yes, yes, not a doubt, now you see how---
    HAMM:
    Articulate!
    CLOV (as before):
    How easy it is. They said to me, That's friendship, yes, yes, no question, you've found it. They said to me, Here's the place, stop, raise your head and look at all that beauty. That order! They said to me, Come now, you're not a brute beast, think upon these things and you'll see how all becomes clear. And simple! They said to me, What skilled attention they get, all these dying of their wounds.
    HAMM:
    Enough!
    CLOV (as before):
    I say to myself--- sometimes, Clov, you must learn to suffer better than that if you want them to weary of punishing you--- one day. I say to myself--- sometimes, Clov, you must be better than that if you want them to let you go--- one day. But I feel too old, and too far, to form new habits. Good, it'll never end, I'll never go.
    (Pause.)
    Then one day, suddenly, it ends, it changes, I don't understand, it dies, or it's me, I don't understand that either. I ask the words that remain--- sleeping, waking, morning, evening. They have nothing to say.
    (Pause.)
    I open the door of the cell and go. I am so bowed I only see my feet, if I open my eyes, and between my legs a little trail of black dust. I say to myself that the earth is extinguished, though I never saw it lit.
    (Pause.)
    It's easy going.
    (Pause.)
    When I fall I'll weep for happiness.
    (Pause. He goes towards door.)

    http://samuel-beckett.net/endgame.html
  • Ed's take on Beast of Burden that I heard in '93:

    "I'll never be your feast of learning:
    I'm a stupid fuck, I don't know nuthin';
    All I want is to drink, maybe with one other person."


    :)
  • On Raglan Road
    (Air: The Dawning of The Day)

    On Raglan Road on an autumn day I met her first and knew
    That her dark hair would weave a snare that I might one day rue;
    I saw the danger, yet I walked along the enchanted way,
    And I said, let grief be a fallen leaf at the dawning of the day.

    On Grafton Street in November we tripped lightly along the ledge
    Of the deep ravine where can be seen the worth of passion's pledge,
    The Queen of Hearts still making tarts and I not making hay -
    O I loved too much and by such and such is happiness thrown away.

    I gave her gifts of the mind I gave her the secret sign that's known
    To the artists who have known the true gods of sound and stone
    And word and tint. I did not stint for I gave her poems to say.
    With her own name there and her own dark hair like clouds over fields of May

    On a quiet street where old ghosts meet I see her walking now
    Away from me so hurriedly my reason must allow
    That I had wooed not as I should a creature made of clay -
    When the angel woos the clay he'd lose his wings at the dawn of day.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    I want to sit down at the Cam today
    when I get a chance, on some old bench
    that looks out at the river. In the way
    of food I'll have some oranges for lunch,
    perhaps. Now, as I sit down there
    I want to try to get the sploshing sound
    of flowing river water locked in here
    (points to head). I want the pound
    of oars from rowing boats to part my lines
    of verse, like punctuation. And I want
    to let in simple sunlight, through the round
    vowel sounds or ciphers that I like to plant
    About my lines. I'll make sure, all the while,
    To sound my poem, free of bloated Style.

    and coasting by
    on stroke
    the sound of twenty men
    clapping oar to water sliced
    sluiced,
    and yet still flowing
    we nod to that man on the bench
    seeking peace
    within
  • Thanks for that. :)
  • Nine of Diamonds

    Here's the one card you can't return:
    See me deal it just for you.
    Throw it back again but you will learn:
    You get this card and then you're through.
    Nine of diamonds
    Nine of diamonds
    From the green
    and to the blue

    You saw the ethic of a sacred code
    Then tried to break the good in two.
    You have the card: you'd better pay it heed:
    You've brought the death-hounds into view.
    Nine of diamonds
    Nine of diamonds
    From the green man to the blue.

    Hadn't you better run now?
    Your face is too known to be loved.
    And wouldn't you say you've been wrong now?
    My curse writes, you'll never be saved...

    as long as you're here.....

    (instrumental break)

    Can't you just sense the change now?
    Each molecule starting to die?
    Wouldn't you say you've been wrong, now?
    The last retribution's in play.
    So, what do you say?


    NINE OF DIAMONDS FOR YOU
    NINE OF DIAMONDS FOR YOU
    NINE OF DIAMONDS FOR YOU
    NINE OF DIAMONDS FOR YOU
  • My dead fathers will tighten their skulls at the jaws
    and their hollows of eyes will blaze with the sight of won wars
    and my dead mothers will rise from their graves at the sea
    and pick up their scythes to stand in an army for me

    and all our long centuries' curses that cannot rebound
    Will stain the long grass once again on our old battleground.
  • Crisp, brittle morning frost, fast glazing, white-
    furs a cloakgrey beard. A dissident.
    Snow beats upon his gulagged limbs. His light
    shuffle on the prison yard's half-meant
    to slight the guards who watch for gravity;
    for slouch; for concrete footscrapes, digging low
    For death. And in the sharp activity
    of mirror-eyes beneath a heightened brow,
    Open as a rainfilled gravepit, you
    will note this dissident absorbing each
    greywire barb garotting at the blue,
    choked December skyline. He will reach
    out beyond Siberia with these
    images, and show the State's disease.
  • Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Crisp, brittle morning frost, fast glazing, white-
    furs a cloakgrey beard. A dissident.
    Snow beats upon his gulagged limbs. His light
    shuffle on the prison yard's half-meant
    to slight the guards who watch for gravity;
    for slouch; for concrete footscrapes, digging low
    For death. And in the sharp activity
    of mirror-eyes beneath a heightened brow,
    Open as a rainfilled gravepit, you
    will note this dissident absorbing each
    greywire barb garotting at the blue,
    choked December skyline. He will reach
    out beyond Siberia with these
    images, and show the State's disease.
    how do u do it fins?? :)
    ur such a delite for this board.........for this world
    soo much life and exuberance (in a respectful way)
    even to glum and dire situations
    ur writing gifts are a yummy treat
    :D
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • Thank you.

    :)
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    very vivid descriptions Finsby, as usual :)
    lot's of life in that dissident
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    I want the pound
    of oars from rowing boats to part my lines
    of verse, like punctuation. And I want
    to let in simple sunlight, through the round
    vowel sounds or ciphers that I like to plant
    About my lines. I'll make sure, all the while,
    To sound my poem, free of bloated Style.


    a writer writing about writing style and breathing life into words... I love this!!!
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • When Bryan Anthony picked up a great
    fivehundredweight with his bare hands,
    over his head while never breaking sweat,
    and placed it on his shoulders, nine good friends
    watched that wiry man of five foot eight
    take the boulder square upon his back
    and walk across Doona with all the sleight
    of step of someone carrying a sack
    of air, toward the plot he'd dug as base
    foundations for his farmhouse. Then he took
    it off his back himself, his arms relaxed, his face
    not even red. His friends could only look
    at him and marvel at the single mind
    That drove the body on. I'll strive, in kind.
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    My blind tongue
    knows of the stag cry
    the windroar of mountaincaves
    the nightslaves to winterchill
    the killers on the pilgrim road
    and the seers who died with the bracken turning red

    and my blind tongue
    speaks of the young sun
    and gods in each birdflight
    and it tears up an old heart
    and it's courted a dead soul
    and it's scolded wild eyes
    danced for new days
    and best cursed the joys that fled
    and cursed them dead

    and my tongue tells of woods before they fell
    and my tongue speaks the old tongue for me still

    and my blind tongue
    once tasted a corpsehair
    and scared off a mad cur
    and started an enterprise for quislings,
    sizzling
    now in the beautiful hell I helped them down to
    (ha ha)

    and my blind tongue
    has rested on the old stone
    the foam of the first sea
    the breadth of the country
    hill to glen
    and then
    my tongue became the landbridge
    that first brought you here

    and my tongue fashioned tinker
    fashioned whore
    and my blind tongue was every crowd in prayer

    and my blind tongue
    sang for the springlarch
    and sang for mad Sweeny
    and told where the birds swam
    and followed sounds
    everyeveryeverytime the churchbell
    rang to me
    my calling
    my dumb calling
    profound

    my blind tongue
    my blind tongue

    * * * * * * *


    (PS... there's music to that ;))


    *wants to here the music*
    great lyrics FC!
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
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