amity, doubt it.

bug

Hi! About that sentence, hope you don't mind my opinion...
Yes, it's true. But i musr say, everybody knows it, nobody truely cares! :(

catefrances

bug wrote:

Hi! About that sentence, hope you don't mind my opinion...
Yes, it's true. But i musr say, everybody knows it, nobody truely cares! :(

what sentence would that be bug?

bug

catefrances wrote:

what sentence would that be bug?

"So here we are
Having the time of our lives
As we dance amongst what are
Ruins of mindless destruction and
Killing for our own amusement."

I don't know if you wrote this or if it is a quote, all i can say is that it is a fact, from my pont of view. But i also consider a fact that nobody truly cares, nobody truly wants to get involved, nobody truly wants to loose his confort.

catefrances

bug wrote:

"So here we are
Having the time of our lives
As we dance amongst what are
Ruins of mindless destruction and
Killing for our own amusement."

I don't know if you wrote this or if it is a quote, all i can say is that it is a fact, from my pont of view. But i also consider a fact that nobody truly cares, nobody truly wants to get involved, nobody truly wants to loose his confort.

yeah i wrote it.
and i think you're right, nobody does seem to care. sometimes i don't even care.

pickupyourwill

catefrances wrote:

yeah i wrote it.
and i think you're right, nobody does seem to care. sometimes i don't even care.

i like you're poem catefrances--and your sig. I feel like that's where I'm at these days, too---that the world is fucked and so am I. can't seem to get out of this depression. hope that things get better for ya. Never lose that hope for a better tomorrow---its got to get better.

catefrances

pickupyourwill wrote:

i like you're poem catefrances--and your sig. I feel like that's where I'm at these days, too---that the world is fucked and so am I. can't seem to get out of this depression. hope that things get better for ya. Never lose that hope for a better tomorrow---its got to get better.

my sig is lifted from the therapy? song, stop it you're killing me

Ms Silhouette

I'll tread water with you, willing our heads above
the stinking soup of rhetoric and effluent that surrounds.
kick out, scratch, bite, rage at the circling fins.
I'll put my body on the line to protect yours
But I'm powerless to save you from the snapping, thoughtless jaws
of cold grey predators come to take us
piece by piece. wound and slice. tear at flesh, bite by bite.
taking us little by little
They swallow with no thought to the flavor
Filling their empty, empty guts then moving on to the next tired soul.
I'll tread water with you and put my body on the line for yours
but I suspect we should just lie back and float now and let them take us
I'm sinking
I'm sorry

catefrances

Ms Silhouette wrote:

I'll tread water with you, willing our heads above
the stinking soup of rhetoric and effluent that surrounds.
kick out, scratch, bite, rage at the circling fins.
I'll put my body on the line to protect yours
But I'm powerless to save you from the snapping, thoughtless jaws
of cold grey predators come to take us
piece by piece. wound and slice. tear at flesh, bite by bite.
taking us little by little
They swallow with no thought to the flavor
Filling their empty, empty guts then moving on to the next tired soul.
I'll tread water with you and put my body on the line for yours
but I suspect we should just lie back and float now and let them take us
I'm sinking
I'm sorry

oh oh oh.
you got it girl.
this deserves its own thread.

Ms Silhouette

catefrances wrote:

oh oh oh.
you got it girl.
this deserves its own thread.

nah, was just unthinking ranting.
how bout this?

Sinking beneath the surface
Hurtling to the depths
Angry that you've beaten me
Raging at your voracious hatred
Kill me quick

catefrances

Ms Silhouette wrote:

nah, was just unthinking ranting.
how bout this?

Sinking beneath the surface
Hurtling to the depths
Angry that you've beaten me
Raging at your voracious hatred
Kill me quick

unthinking ranting is the best kind.

catefrances

Slowly surely standing upright
Harder now
Against the flow
Raging upwards raging onwards
Keeping all at bay

Ms Silhouette

catefrances wrote:

unthinking ranting is the best kind.

Guess it depends on who's doing it!

catefrances

Ms Silhouette wrote:

Guess it depends on who's doing it!

me of course. i got that ranting thing down, girlfriend. as im sure a couple of people on here could attest to.

Jeanie

catefrances wrote:

me of course. i got that ranting thing down, girlfriend. as im sure a couple of people on here could attest to.;)

Well I've got no problem with your ranting. You do it so eloquently.

But I'm quite sure that it's expected that I don't.

Ms Silhouette

catefrances wrote:

me of course. i got that ranting thing down, girlfriend. as im sure a couple of people on here could attest to.

I like your ranting.

catefrances

sshhh both of you. you're confusing me. LMAO!!!

catefrances

Strawberry wine, lilac wine
Holyoaks and paths crossed dark
All i ask is for peace my love
Release all the demons and the
Key shall be yours.

Ms Silhouette

catefrances wrote:

sshhh both of you. you're confusing me. LMAO!!!

You reckon you're confused!!! :eek: ;p haha!!

catefrances

Showering falls
Held high on breezes
All is quiet now
Rustling leaves turning amber
Kicked beneath my feet.

catefrances

Swallowing
Hopelessness
Angry
Rants
Kill and kill and kill again.