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amity, doubt it.

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited August 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So here we are
Having the time of our lives
As we dance amongst what are
Ruins of mindless destruction and
Killing for our own amusement.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    catefrances wrote:
    So here we are
    Having the time of our lives
    As we dance amongst what are
    Ruins of mindless destruction and
    Killing for our own amusement.

    thank you cate.
    i like it.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Seering pain within my soul
    Holding it all inside
    Always deluded
    Rarely clear
    Kismet, kiss me, gone.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    catefrances wrote:
    Seering pain within my soul
    Holding it all inside
    Always deluded
    Rarely clear
    Kismet, kiss me, gone.

    nice again cate.
    i had to look kismet up in the dictionary.
    nice word.
    by the way.
    i tried kissin you last night.
    haha.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Silently
    Howling
    Against the wind
    Raging alone
    Karma revisited.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    She fairly remembers what it was like to leave
    Having faced most of her life
    Alone, she relies on her wits and
    Resolve to get it all done because
    Kindness has managed so far to elude her.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    So
    Here we are together
    Alone. I
    Reach out to you
    Kiss, kiss me again.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    So it's come down to this?
    I have to beg for a kiss?
    Is it fair to make me kneel
    so in command you'll feel?
    oh, darling come on back
    change the color to blue from black!
    kiss me, kiss me, smile at me
    hug me, love me, stay and be
    loved
    :)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Shimmer silver whisps upon the air
    Holy demons sprung to form
    All around no one knows whether
    Risking everything is worth a
    Kaleidoscope view of a future newborn.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Subterranean
    Homesick
    Aliens
    Restore
    Karma
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    So, this is it
    Hardly dreaming
    Anymore, no more to be
    Recollections, sombre times
    Kiss me quick and say goodbye
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Standing high above it all
    Hoping dreaming
    Aiming arrows by
    Random chance
    Killing love cold
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Sorrow leave me
    Here I stand
    Alone, exposed
    Reaching out
    Keep reaching out

    Sorry, hope it's alright if I join in.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pacifier wrote:

    Sorry, hope it's alright if I join in.

    Around here it's always alright to join in! :)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pacifier wrote:
    Sorry, hope it's alright if I join in.


    absolutely. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    nice thread of poetry
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    started off as a private joke. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    catefrances wrote:
    started off as a private joke. :)

    what exactly is the joke. Took me a while to catch on to the idea of what you were doing, only figured it out when I saw the single-word-to-a-line poem.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pacifier wrote:
    what exactly is the joke. Took me a while to catch on to the idea of what you were doing, only figured it out when I saw the single-word-to-a-line poem.

    PRIVATE joke. all i can say is it's something about sharks. ;):)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    catefrances wrote:
    PRIVATE joke. all i can say is it's something about sharks. ;):)

    I guessed that part :)
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pacifier wrote:
    I guessed that part :)

    that's all that matters. and that the pattern continues. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • bugbug Posts: 5
    Hi! About that sentence, hope you don't mind my opinion...
    Yes, it's true. But i musr say, everybody knows it, nobody truely cares! :(
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    bug wrote:
    Hi! About that sentence, hope you don't mind my opinion...
    Yes, it's true. But i musr say, everybody knows it, nobody truely cares! :(

    what sentence would that be bug? :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • bugbug Posts: 5
    catefrances wrote:
    what sentence would that be bug? :)

    "So here we are
    Having the time of our lives
    As we dance amongst what are
    Ruins of mindless destruction and
    Killing for our own amusement."

    I don't know if you wrote this or if it is a quote, all i can say is that it is a fact, from my pont of view. But i also consider a fact that nobody truly cares, nobody truly wants to get involved, nobody truly wants to loose his confort.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    bug wrote:
    "So here we are
    Having the time of our lives
    As we dance amongst what are
    Ruins of mindless destruction and
    Killing for our own amusement."

    I don't know if you wrote this or if it is a quote, all i can say is that it is a fact, from my pont of view. But i also consider a fact that nobody truly cares, nobody truly wants to get involved, nobody truly wants to loose his confort.

    yeah i wrote it. :)
    and i think you're right, nobody does seem to care. sometimes i don't even care.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • pickupyourwillpickupyourwill Posts: 3,135
    catefrances wrote:
    yeah i wrote it. :)
    and i think you're right, nobody does seem to care. sometimes i don't even care.

    i like you're poem catefrances--and your sig. I feel like that's where I'm at these days, too---that the world is fucked and so am I. can't seem to get out of this depression. hope that things get better for ya. Never lose that hope for a better tomorrow---its got to get better. :)
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pickupyourwill wrote:
    i like you're poem catefrances--and your sig. I feel like that's where I'm at these days, too---that the world is fucked and so am I. can't seem to get out of this depression. hope that things get better for ya. Never lose that hope for a better tomorrow---its got to get better. :)

    my sig is lifted from the therapy? song, stop it you're killing me
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
    I'll tread water with you, willing our heads above
    the stinking soup of rhetoric and effluent that surrounds.
    kick out, scratch, bite, rage at the circling fins.
    I'll put my body on the line to protect yours
    But I'm powerless to save you from the snapping, thoughtless jaws
    of cold grey predators come to take us
    piece by piece. wound and slice. tear at flesh, bite by bite.
    taking us little by little
    They swallow with no thought to the flavor
    Filling their empty, empty guts then moving on to the next tired soul.
    I'll tread water with you and put my body on the line for yours
    but I suspect we should just lie back and float now and let them take us
    I'm sinking
    I'm sorry
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Ms Silhouette wrote:
    I'll tread water with you, willing our heads above
    the stinking soup of rhetoric and effluent that surrounds.
    kick out, scratch, bite, rage at the circling fins.
    I'll put my body on the line to protect yours
    But I'm powerless to save you from the snapping, thoughtless jaws
    of cold grey predators come to take us
    piece by piece. wound and slice. tear at flesh, bite by bite.
    taking us little by little
    They swallow with no thought to the flavor
    Filling their empty, empty guts then moving on to the next tired soul.
    I'll tread water with you and put my body on the line for yours
    but I suspect we should just lie back and float now and let them take us
    I'm sinking
    I'm sorry


    oh oh oh.
    you got it girl. :)
    this deserves its own thread.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Ms SilhouetteMs Silhouette Posts: 60
    catefrances wrote:
    oh oh oh.
    you got it girl. :)
    this deserves its own thread.

    :o nah, was just unthinking ranting.
    how bout this?

    Sinking beneath the surface
    Hurtling to the depths
    Angry that you've beaten me
    Raging at your voracious hatred
    Kill me quick
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Ms Silhouette wrote:
    :o nah, was just unthinking ranting.
    how bout this?

    Sinking beneath the surface
    Hurtling to the depths
    Angry that you've beaten me
    Raging at your voracious hatred
    Kill me quick

    :)

    unthinking ranting is the best kind.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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