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tenaciousA
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slightly off center
slightly not round
but soft
so soft
and skinned
slipping past oraclatious paths
catching in diastomacious spaces
catching in blood laden breath
so thick
and shivering
the points of my greater thans
pressing patterns in peach colored carbon
those rounds in my purple hands
like chains fired red hot
sizzled
and could not be held tightly enough
slightly not round
but soft
so soft
and skinned
slipping past oraclatious paths
catching in diastomacious spaces
catching in blood laden breath
so thick
and shivering
the points of my greater thans
pressing patterns in peach colored carbon
those rounds in my purple hands
like chains fired red hot
sizzled
and could not be held tightly enough
~all is full of love~
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thx k33 (:
anyone else wanna guess what this is about???
(:
Ummmmmm, is it about ass then?
Just kidding! Don't know what it's about but I do like it!
Especially:
"slipping past oraclatious paths
catching in diastomacious spaces"
I need your dictionary tA!!
So do I! Those words ain't English!
And you have gingivitis.
Now yellow... why single me out?
Arrrr, matey! Thar he blows!
One for Yellow.
I know. It's your heart or heart pulse.
the being is SO enlightened
Any suggestions?
I'm sure she can come up with something... even if it is just a shot in the dark.
*I* think it's about getting a facial
(:
Just be sure not to get any in your eyes! It's stingy and makes them all red and icky, sticky!
Kinda like a shot in the dark!
G'night folks!
Shot my g/f in the eye once. But I was down by her tummy.
watch out for flying slugs in the dark...
but then again i'm full of shit and almost certain that that is not what it is about. that's what i got from it anyway
good poem
just a guess.
oh and I like it too.
Jason
there's no match in there...nothing really etymologically close...so I reckon tenacious is the next Finnegans Wake-era Joyce in creating a splendiferous neologism.
As TS Eliot said, genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood, so tenacious can say we understood the implicature on a deep level even though we're still stumped about the basics......
I think it's about the vicissitudes of lurve.
oraclatious = teeth being the oral oracles, i.e. oraclatious path things must consecute to reach the inner mouth
diastomacious - is a combination of two words
diatomaceous = as in being filled with diatoms, or their skeletons
(Diatoms = Any of various microscopic one-celled or colonial algae of the class Bacillariophyceae, having cell walls of silica consisting of two interlocking symmetrical valves.)
diastema = a space, or gap between the teeth
I was making things up, obviously, but they have roots, yes?
This poem is about one special pleasure bestowed upon manhood.
And so, yes, Finsbury, you would have found no such words in your OED.
As is ten-A
Praise be to the glorious venuses of the Hut!
damn I feel silly now, I think in fact I asked miss ten a if this was about just what it was when she wrote it, and I forgot:o
naughty young thing you are;)
Jason
naughty...
hush!
hush hush little ten a, don't say a word
this forum going to treat you to a giant award;)
naughty thing!
Jason
(:
oh damn, I must have missed that:\
how big was it, and where do you keep it now?
on a shelf, on your tele, or somewhere else?
congrats by the way;)
Jason