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tenaciousA
tenaciousA Posts: 604
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
slightly off center
slightly not round
but soft
so soft
and skinned
slipping past oraclatious paths
catching in diastomacious spaces
catching in blood laden breath
so thick
and shivering
the points of my greater thans
pressing patterns in peach colored carbon
those rounds in my purple hands
like chains fired red hot
sizzled
and could not be held tightly enough
~all is full of love~
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  • keven 33
    keven 33 Posts: 259
    your light years smarter and more fluid than a lot of stuff here especially me awesome poem
    convicted
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    no... not boobs...


    thx k33 (:
    ~all is full of love~
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    soooo...


    anyone else wanna guess what this is about???



    (:

    Originally posted by NastAngels
    This about boobs right?
    ~all is full of love~
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    soooo...


    anyone else wanna guess what this is about???



    (:


    Ummmmmm, is it about ass then? :p

    Just kidding! Don't know what it's about but I do like it!

    Especially:

    "slipping past oraclatious paths
    catching in diastomacious spaces"

    I need your dictionary tA!! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    see topic, pm :)
    It's all yellow.


  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    I need your dictionary tA!! :D

    So do I! Those words ain't English! ;)
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  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Almost sounds like you're eating fruit...

    And you have gingivitis. :)

    Now yellow... why single me out?
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Peas. it's about peas, dammnaggit!

    :D
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Now I'm thinking about being lost at sea. ;)

    Arrrr, matey! Thar he blows! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Yellow
    see topic, pm :)

    One for Yellow. ;)
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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by tenaciousA
    slightly off center
    slightly not round
    but soft
    so soft
    and skinned
    slipping past oraclatious paths
    catching in diastomacious spaces
    catching in blood laden breath
    so thick
    and shivering
    the points of my greater thans
    pressing patterns in peach colored carbon
    those rounds in my purple hands
    like chains fired red hot
    sizzled
    and could not be held tightly enough

    I know. It's your heart or heart pulse.

    :)
  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Now I'm thinking about being lost at sea. ;)

    Arrrr, matey! Thar he blows! :D


    the being is SO enlightened :):):)
    It's all yellow.


  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Hey yella....this Tenacious has given us a real puzzler.....

    Any suggestions?

    :D
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    Hey yella....this Tenacious has given us a real puzzler.....

    Any suggestions?

    :D

    I'm sure she can come up with something... even if it is just a shot in the dark.
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  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    let's see...



    *I* think it's about getting a facial










    (:
    It's all yellow.


  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Yellow
    let's see...



    *I* think it's about getting a facial










    (:

    Just be sure not to get any in your eyes! It's stingy and makes them all red and icky, sticky!



























    Kinda like a shot in the dark! ;):D


    G'night folks! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Just be sure not to get any in your eyes! It's stingy and makes them all red and icky, sticky!

    Kinda like a shot in the dark! ;):D


    G'night folks! :)

    Shot my g/f in the eye once. But I was down by her tummy.
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  • Yellow
    Yellow Posts: 699
    good night, she who is enlightened...

    watch out for flying slugs in the dark...


    :D
    It's all yellow.


  • mulac
    mulac Posts: 97
    when i read it the first time i thought it was about fighting for a cause you don't believe in until you do


    but then again i'm full of shit and almost certain that that is not what it is about. that's what i got from it anyway



    good poem
    the passenger is life
  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    I think this is about the human muscle known as the heart.

    just a guess.

    oh and I like it too.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason

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