scent of a woman

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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    If this continues
    and the illusion collapses
    I could be left empty handed
    and so
    start the planning
    for every situation

    I remember what it was like in a small town
    It no longer feels like home..

    Resting in ashes
    While autumn comes crashing down
    I will hold up
    long enough
    to let down my end of the bargain

    It no longer feels like chivalry

    Onset Sunshine,
    Setting before dawn,
    Check the grammar, because this will be a set back
    I die in small town, somewhere, in the middle of September.

    Its not like you care... too much.
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • exhaleexhale Posts: 185
    Originally posted by anOmis
    im spending my time
    sunken into my memories
    bulding my own glassy wall
    coz this world is just too small
    to understand my needs


    flowers get wilted
    under the black old sun
    no dreams to build
    and no hope to come

    with the scream of an inscect
    and the soul of a climbin plant
    im just spendin my days
    waitin for the turn of time

    you write so beautifully, anomis.
    the rhythm and the simplicity of your words make one daydream...
    it is the universal language in your poems that enables everybody to find his/her moment of life.
    thank you for letting us read your work
    Write. Wind each new thought upon the stream;
    and in its contradiction of response,
    Or seeming stagnance, see that rippled gleam
    That might suggest true movement. If you sense
    a hidden wave in what seems blanket still,
    Write more, wind each desire, and you'll see
    The willows nod and rustle, and you will
    hear the rushing babble of the free
    gush of water, brimming, charged with light
    That is your reader's understanding heart.
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    shame on me for not having read your poems before..

    beautiful.. the heart of a friend is moving..

    i am still reading them..

    thanks for sharing
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    thank you all
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Hand in hand they walk
    Monsters waiting
    Like toy soldiers
    Marching off to war
    On bended legs, tin insides
    And aluminum arms twisted
    Like a spider lying in its
    Death knot

    Beaten black and blue
    Until you're green in the face
    Yellow belly showing
    Steel toes and cracker-jacks
    Kicking and biting like
    Dining ants and pushing pins


    Untill they steal our colours
    and leave usall in gray!
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    As she stood there breathing with difficulty
    lost in her black sorrow
    dancing wild dances and reading her epitaphy

    Far from the world where her spirit fought
    trying to build a paradise in her meters..
    Living in the edge... but...
    dying every sunshine with the poets...

    In her eyes a diffrent world
    a sea for all the dolphins
    In her heart a diffrent word
    love the food of nymphes

    Even in her last hour
    she never left the poem
    escape her lips

    because she knew..
    this world wasnt made for hers
    but now she is going
    to a paradise build in her meters....
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Lovely poem, anOmis. :)
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