scent of a woman

anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
IF U C HIM
little bird that u fly up there
in the celestial paths
when u pass throu love's yard
and the crystal castle of lust

if c see him please give him a kiss
tell him he gives me a reason to live
morning dew nourishes the flowers
his gaze i need every single hour
like a sweet flowerscent his breath
like a beloved , withered leafscent

oh and when he looks at me..
looks into my eyes
blood of this heart of mine
the earth and the clouds smile
my beloved, when he looks at me,
the whole world smiles
fresh water that u gently flow
in your cool crystal paths
if he bathes when u go past
stop and look at his eyes
tell him he gives me a reason to live
~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

F.ZAPPA
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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    THE GAME
    I wake up in the morning
    early inthe morning i wake up and rise
    my love woke me up in the middle of the night
    and came to me with the first shades of light

    inside my mind the game lives
    and fills my eyes with pain
    in unspoken words, deep in my heart
    where the sadness lie stagnant like rain

    inside my mind the game lives
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    MY BABE AND THE LILSTAR
    on the snow my sweet babe sleeps
    the myths and the gods bathe in his dream

    south and north silver and silk will bring
    and the morning star lights up his dream

    on the snow his figure tracks leave
    to find their ways the caresses of spring

    and leave on the pillow a bright star
    for luck to find his way to come

    the wind shakes the willows and the grass
    the rocks whisper whishes in the night

    give my babe lilstar wings to fly
    and in his deep sleep gently will sigh
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • you soul is yearning a bit in hear
    very beautiful poetry


    in jesus name amen
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    ~~petals of the white rose~~


    u have left yer heart print on me...

    Dreaming by the morning - soon
    starin at the pale moon
    so pale in the gloom...
    Petals of the white rose

    Stretching at the sun light smiles
    reflecting on its dew drop tilles
    a glow that can be seen for miles
    The awaking of the white rose

    Delicate as the summer breeze
    pearly white of rare genes
    a queen within the garden green
    the blooming of the white rose

    Soft as love you give it ,when
    hearts should touch a lonely friend
    before the gift of life might end
    The message of the white rose

    As we cry these tender woes
    and say goodbye to the ones we love
    they'll fly wherever spirits go
    On petals of a soft white rose.

    dont cut this rose....
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    really great poems - i especially enjoyed my babe and the lilstar and the petals of the white rose.
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    The winter has hosted my soul
    and the memories tickle my mind
    Regrets may be the only cosullers
    my future, far away, my everlasting Rose

    why poeple blame what they cannot understand?

    the cblood of love has filled me in purple
    and joys that some people have never seen before have covered me .
    I've become a ghost in the south wind of humankind
    my dearest far away, my everlasting Rose.

    -why does soul wonder every nite in regrets?

    On the open sea they lay iin "nostos" for me,
    with triple-masked men-of-war they bombarded me,
    my sin is that I had a love of my own
    Mother far away, my everlasting Rose.


    -why nemesis is blind?

    Once in december his large eyes
    half-opened, deep down my soul, to light up
    the virgin life for a single moment
    Brother far away, my Everlasting Rose.


    And since that day the pain of loss
    has turned on me, shouting out the curse:
    "He who left, let him live in blood and stone"
    Ripping off the petals of my Everlasting rose
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • really enjoyed these...
    thanks :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Darkened clouds, wind and rain.
    Left alone with all this pain.
    It’s winter here without you.

    Landslides always drag me down
    Trapped for days, will I be found ?
    I pray for skies of blue.

    Flooded plains within my head
    nitemares draw near, leave me for dead.
    I feel lost inside of you.

    Drought from tears I know not for
    I’ve cried for days, I cry no more.
    I’ve made mistakes, it’s true...

    Saddow waves dance on my shore
    I’m drowning on my bedroom floor.
    Pain and pleasure mixed together

    This natural bridge from heart to heart
    Collapsed in memories, fallen apart
    These seasons last forever.

    yes...the poet knows...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    the heart of a friend


    silken paths
    unspoken words
    and you standing in the middle ...

    red sun
    hidden moom
    and the smile of a a friend...


    the knowledge of the past
    the feear of tomorrow
    and our coffee talks...

    i miss those longs walks by the river side
    i miss seing you smiling
    i miss my freind


    coz the heart of a friend is like a rosegarden
    can make u bleed ...
    can bring this sensitive odour
    of melancholy...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    We're all just a little alike
    And yet enough apart
    That we can break eachother's heart

    It's expectations we invent
    That do the damage to our psyche
    Betray our souls right from the start

    All the pent up passion
    All the wild reaction

    You have no idea what it is like
    To be tough; To be hard
    To have to always be on your guard
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    seems to have anything to say about my poems..
    or maybe noone really reads them...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    So harbored
    Those notorious vestiges
    Of complacency
    The tried-and-true
    Behaviors we once subscribed to
    May need modifying

    Can we break on through?
    Can we brave the new
    And not yet trodden
    Path of not yet known
    Resistence?
    Take control of our existence?

    Is the we


    p.s.if anyone wants to add anything please do not hesitate.
    even corrections or not very flattering opninions are welcome...
    just to know that someone gives a few minutes of his time to read me, its a bless
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Nightwords and atonment
    for dead gods, angels
    and vertical conjcture

    Horizontal writings, confining
    impulses and choices we
    were ever so forced
    into never made it to daylight

    Slaveshakened, dreams streaming
    through the fingertips much
    like the sensation of fear
    on a cold silent sunday

    p.s..neone read me..anyone?
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Don't worry, if you look at most of the poems on here, there's only two or three responses, not many people are on this board - but jesus slow down - this is too much to take in - the few at the top I read were very promising I'll get back to you when I get through more - don't be discouraged - there aren't too many of us here
  • Ok, I'm up to petals of the white rose

    pearly white of rare genes is the only line I have qualms with I think - everything else fits pretty naturally into the rhythm and rhyme scheme but that particular line trips me up when I read it, one two few syllables - great sentiment though
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    4 yer time and your comments...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • I'm going to print these poems off and read them properly, again and again. They're beautiful.
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    coming from you its means a lot...
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    And it was down the rosy path
    And it was in the hidden pastimes
    Of forever

    Where we barely chose to go
    But on remembering we sat there
    For enough time to absorb

    What hidden moments were in store
    For some begotten of the fate
    That layed forgotten in the wisdom
    Of convention

    And every time we dared go back
    The moment wasn't there to find
    Nor would the feeling gain momentum
    As if it wanted us to leave
    And grow beyond

    And nod towards the next horizon
    As the path we ought to tred
    For here is past and grave
    And fleeting

    And shacks of promise understood
    That housed a wonderful exception
    To the stagnant rule

    And it was down the rosy path
    And it was in the hidden pastimes
    Of forever

    Where we barely chose to go
    But on remembering we sat there
    For enough time to absorb

    What hidden moments were in store
    For some begotten of the fate
    That layed forgotten in the wisdom
    Of convention

    And every time we dared go back
    The moment wasn't there to find
    Nor would the feeling gain momentum
    As if it wanted us to leave
    And grow beyond

    And nod towards the next horizon
    As the path we ought to tred
    For here is past and grave
    And fleeting

    And shacks of promise understood
    That housed a wonderful exception
    To the stagnant rule
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Your ability to use language as a means of expressing the imagistic landscape of sensibility is considerable; in fact, it may be because English is not your first language that you are able to create beautiful tonal effects with words, in finding new idioms in this language to convey those in your own. There are other writers - such as Joseph Conrad, who of course was Polish - whose writings in English exemplify and even perhaps define what we now call modernist literature. You make this language all that much more capable of seeing the world.

    I enjoy the imagery of your poem beginning "nightwords and atonement". If I might here paraphrase Henry James, it "tells" of an idea by "showing" it through images rather than by rhetoric. And I think that's the mark of the poetry I like the best.

    Thankyou.
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    In unison collapse, clinging to these
    random visions of what never
    was

    Liars in wait, serpent solitude
    Severed synapses

    Insipid and dumb
    I swallow glowing sparks from
    the sun

    Fragmentation
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by anOmis
    seems to have anything to say about my poems..
    or maybe noone really reads them...

    oh the art of becoming.........
    a poet.
  • DangerDanger Posts: 1
    Sweet poems :)
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Shhhhhh
    Finger to my own lips
    Silence to the touch
    with a soft smile
    she quiets the thoughts
    Neverending
    Whirlpool memory
    Maelstrom flow
    Leads her to a place
    in Depth
    Shimmering bottoms
    Inlaid with Jewels
    Emerald waters
    and Ruby tides
    Lye awhile
    in the eye of the storm
    along side Poseiden
    Rest assured of his
    Intent to stir up the Gail.
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    do you remember yor first name??

    dont waste your anger..

    You have a taste of bitterness on your lips
    —But where did you travel..
    what have you seen??

    All day long in the hard reverie of stone and malencholy?
    An eagle-repping your memories
    Stripped your longing to the bone
    And the pupils of your eyes received the message of chemerra
    Spotting memory with pain...
    Where is the familiar sun of short September
    on the red earth where you played, looking down
    at your faked smile...

    what have you seen?
    do you remeber your first name??

    But where did you wander
    what have you seen
    All night long in the hard reverie of misery and sea?
    I told you to count in the nakkid water its salty days
    nn your back to rejoice in the returning of all things
    Or again to wander on yellow plains
    with a clover of light on you breast, heroine.

    You have a taste of bitterness on your lips
    And a dress red as blood
    deep in the gold of a summer you have never lived
    and the perfume of chysanthems
    —But where did you wander


    There was cold salty seaweed there
    But deeper a human feeling that is now forgotrten
    and you opened your arms in despair naming it
    Climbing lightly to the darkness of the depths
    where your own starfish shone.

    Listen.
    Speech is the product of the aged
    And time is a passionate creator of men
    And the sun stands over it, a beast of hope
    And you, closer to it, embrace a love
    With a salty taste of bitterness on your lips.

    It is not for you, blue and sharp, to think of another summer,
    for the rivers to change their way
    and take you back to their mother
    For you to kiss other olive lips
    or ride on the western wind.

    Propped on the rocks, without future nor a past,
    facing the dangers of the rocks with a hurricane hairstyle
    you will say farewell to the present that is yours.
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Dark Prince again you came to me last night
    You swept me off of my feet
    My head light and face drained of color
    Tell tell signs of a dark lover
    You drink my life giving essence
    To you I give it freely
    Will it to be and on my back I lie awaiting your peircing kiss
    Bliss is where you send me through the depths of your love

    "You've got a tear in your eye and I'd love to match it"

    I hear symphonies of laughter and Gypsy violin when we embrace
    Upon my face a smile sharp growing with each encounter
    From you I've fed from your Artesian well that runs so deep
    Crimson tears you weep fill my veins with your sorrow

    "When you smile you make my world resolve...then you take over"

    "The future hastens an age beyond my antic reason"

    Embers burn brightly in my heart from your gaze that penetrates my soul
    I disolve my pain in your arms tightly holding my shivering frailties
    Now your life flowing through me resurrects the lover you once knew...long ago...reborn

    "Show me the way to solve your problems and I'll be there"
    "Welcome to the new world.....let me join your hand....take a walk through your world.....with a brand new plan....God only knows how much I love you."

    Expired sunrises lie beyond my sight locked secure in my memories
    Out of reach
    Sunsets on our old remorseful ways and calls us to rise feeding on the wicked ones
    'Evil-Doers'
    Companion through the ages
    Milleniums spent
    Unraveling this eternity
    One thread at a time
    Kisses in depths of passion from anothers last heart beat shared
    Never again to walk this life alone
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Originally posted by anOmis
    Dark Prince again you came to me last night
    You swept me off of my feet
    My head light and face drained of color
    Tell tell signs of a dark lover
    You drink my life giving essence
    To you I give it freely
    Will it to be and on my back I lie awaiting your peircing kiss
    Bliss is where you send me through the depths of your love

    "You've got a tear in your eye and I'd love to match it"

    I hear symphonies of laughter and Gypsy violin when we embrace
    Upon my face a smile sharp growing with each encounter
    From you I've fed from your Artesian well that runs so deep
    Crimson tears you weep fill my veins with your sorrow

    "When you smile you make my world resolve...then you take over"

    "The future hastens an age beyond my antic reason"

    Embers burn brightly in my heart from your gaze that penetrates my soul
    I disolve my pain in your arms tightly holding my shivering frailties
    Now your life flowing through me resurrects the lover you once knew...long ago...reborn

    "Show me the way to solve your problems and I'll be there"
    "Welcome to the new world.....let me join your hand....take a walk through your world.....with a brand new plan....God only knows how much I love you."

    Expired sunrises lie beyond my sight locked secure in my memories
    Out of reach
    Sunsets on our old remorseful ways and calls us to rise feeding on the wicked ones
    'Evil-Doers'
    Companion through the ages
    Milleniums spent
    Unraveling this eternity
    One thread at a time
    Kisses in depths of passion from anothers last heart beat shared
    Never again to walk this life alone

    this piece is so inexplicably familiar to me I was able to predict the flow...

    neil gaiman perhaps or inspired by the sandman series?

    and even a beach boys reference implied ...

    liking the work anOmis... good to have you here.


    seta
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • funny meeting u here an0mis ;-)

    brilliant poems as always *hugz*
    NeVeR tRuSt YoUr HeArT wHeN iTs OwNeD bY a LiAr
  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    midget..OWOWOWWWWWWWW.
    thank u loads
    *hugs u back*

    ancient tableture
    under waterfall
    inner peace
    my precious jewels
    sun god awaits to heat the rocks
    mountains become like wolves
    chanting their song
    thirsting for reconnection
    with someone who cares
    the book of life closed and went elsewhere
    the book of the dead re-opened for business
    headless children begun to walk the earth
    following the pied piper and his lovely
    sounding flute
    which led them down the hall
    to the door of the grim reaper
    which in-turn was no more
    the parameter changed without notice
    and the foxies of the nightime
    were listening and waiting
    for when the time was ripe
    to bring them to a promised land
    of their own vain imaginings
    eye for eye,one for all
    they laughed and scoffed
    at the true and old
    so did the coyotes
    who feasted for their souls
    pics,flicks, and tricks
    they surround us all
    myrs of firey desires
    crystal ship crystalized
    to end all human suffering
    to give life a new meaning
    behind the music
    the words
    the lives
    driving force of the world
    grant us one more day
    to analize this physical plane
    time of the mind
    it never was about the money
    time to revert of what it really stood for
    he could be watching
    from behind the mirrored sunglasses
    within the shining star above your house
    or the mountains surrounded
    by the snakes and wolves
    where they stick together
    through thick and thin
    away from the populated ant farms
    when the killer awoke before dawn
    he gave tribute to our sacred mother
    if were gonna fuck,let it be so
    on the rocks,let it go
    my life is a gift and a curse
    filled with true pain
    not known to the true amatuer
    i knew i was on top of the world
    when i blended with the finest
    ingredients of the earths surface
    kicked out of heaven
    for offering the god's some dope
    sort of a peace offering
    for eternal life
    so they cast me down to hell
    i guess they did not like my
    jim "n" i humor
    how did we miss this one?
    partys 24/7 here
    if you like hangin
    with a bunch of psychos
    who think they still have bodies
    if there is a god
    i rest my case
    with one final answer
    why did god make people
    who turn out to be assholes
    are they some kind of secret society
    with an all time motto
    "you have an asshole so be an asshole"
    i cant ajust to this description
    we have the power
    so succumb to our will
    hate to be the one to tell you
    but the rewards are greater
    when you die
    why not build an empire
    from the rubble
    you enlightened ones
    have not logged in
    expose yourself now!
    like the paintings
    on the four walls in the gallery
    living by grace is the true
    essence of living
    vain the dream
    to spirit only
    is the spirit life revealed
    by myself the soul of nature
    from myself
    is still concealed
    from the outside world
    blue flames within me
    from it's ashes
    pale and dead
    and i draw the world within me
    and i send my soul without
    with the lightning sword
    i prevail the earth
    drawn into the mystical circle
    near and narrow
    waste and wide
    severed by my selfhood
    from the world life
    of the whole
    there's a method to my madness
    measured by my gladness
    to the last cliffs of space
    i shout
    sing out sing out
    love may repose
    but never rest
    who keeps true time
    shall time outlast
    and it's music
    shall never know
    raptured highs
    and responsive smiles
    young at heart
    veil they fly
    strange days
    and weapons of grace
    errors from the soul
    would pass
    and leave
    the senses pure and strong
    rosy fingers
    radiant hair
    glowing cheek
    and glistering wings
    resume and rectify
    thy rude design
    (inpired by the doors)
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Holy schmoly, anOmis, this is inspired and inspirational stuff. :)
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