Originally posted by PastaNazi thank you, violet
thank you very much
xoxoxoxox
mmmwah, babe
You ask me to enter
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
Originally posted by Sandruwa I promised to post so here I am.
"i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body"...
So many simple words put together in one beautiful line,
I wish the words were mine...
Well done!
Who did you promise to post?? Well, glad you picked my thread to post in. I hope the person you promised is satisfied. hee hee!
Thanks for the compliment btw about my poem.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato
Originally posted by of_the_girl Who did you promise to post?? Well, glad you picked my thread to post in. I hope the person you promised is satisfied. hee hee!
Thanks for the compliment btw about my poem.
Well I didn't actually promise to post but I wrote in your "I wont share my poetry" thread that I should react more often to what I like about your writings... Et voilà!
Originally posted by Sandruwa Well I didn't actually promise to post but I wrote in your "I wont share my poetry" thread that I should react more often to what I like about your writings... Et voilà!
THAT is what you meant hee heeee. I'm silly!
Thank youuuu. I'm glad you decided to pick this one! It's one of my favorites.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato
i wanna bring back some of the old poems that have left this part of the message board....its been down so long i figured some should be brought back
~~~the classic bump~~~
there'll be time for laughin'
there's no time to cry
soon i will be leavin'
look me in the eye
no matter what's in front of me
it's your face that i'll see
Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
softly singing oh oh whoa shari sharah shari sharah
the wind is playing with her love and drawing the sky black
and the silent damsel who cried the stars into the sky
is left wondering where... oh whoa shari shara ...oh where
could my yellow birdfriend be? she used to sing so wonderously...
oh oh whoa shari sharah shari sharah
and then the rain clouds came...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato
THAT poem is so amazing ... I read it again and yesss ... fell in love with it again. Thank you lady for these words ... glad to see you hanging out here again ... Hope to read some new poems ...
*lil' note style*
Dear Jessie,
You know some peeps miss you so bad on this other messageboard they made a thread for you over there ... (I'll pm the link ... )
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mmmwah, babe
But then You make me crawl
And I can't be holding on
To what You got
When all You've got is hurt
----
Underneath this smile lies everything
All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
"i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body"...
So many simple words put together in one beautiful line,
I wish the words were mine...
Well done!
Who did you promise to post?? Well, glad you picked my thread to post in. I hope the person you promised is satisfied. hee hee!
Thanks for the compliment btw about my poem.
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
Awsome poem you have here, indeed!
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
btw, it made me feel good too
thank you for this one.
Well I didn't actually promise to post but I wrote in your "I wont share my poetry" thread that I should react more often to what I like about your writings... Et voilà!
Thank youuuu.
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
~~~the classic bump~~~
there's no time to cry
soon i will be leavin'
look me in the eye
no matter what's in front of me
it's your face that i'll see
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
some more poems por favor
As she slams the door in his drunken face
And now he stands outside
And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
And his tears fall and burn the garden green
~*~*~*~*~*~
softly singing oh oh whoa shari sharah shari sharah
the wind is playing with her love and drawing the sky black
and the silent damsel who cried the stars into the sky
is left wondering where... oh whoa shari shara ...oh where
could my yellow birdfriend be? she used to sing so wonderously...
oh oh whoa shari sharah shari sharah
and then the rain clouds came...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
*lil' note style*
Dear Jessie,
You know some peeps miss you so bad on this other messageboard they made a thread for you over there ... (I'll pm the link ...