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of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
dreamwhispers are all i have
to touch to feel to kiss
when all i want is a hand to hold
all i can hold is my self and my soul
all i can have is my wants and your voice



i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body...
i want to bottle your voice
bottle your voice
bottle your...

your

you

drip it all over my body.

drip all over my...

drip all...

over...

my...
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    grrrrrrrrowwwwlllll

    nice one j-to the-e-to the double-s-i-e

    good to see you around these parts posting your lovely (albeit seductive) poems :)
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    grrrrrrrrowwwwlllll

    nice one j-to the-e-to the double-s-i-e

    good to see you around these parts posting your lovely (albeit seductive) poems :)

    *wow chicka wow wow*

    :p


    ahehehehehheehehhehe

    thanks pattttt
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    dreamwhispers are all i have
    to touch to feel to kiss
    when all i want is a hand to hold
    all i can hold is my self and my soul
    all i can have is my wants and your voice



    i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body...
    i want to bottle your voice
    bottle your voice
    bottle your...

    your

    you

    drip it all over my body.

    drip all over my...

    drip all...

    over...

    my...

    "i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body..."

    awsume line off a girl
    really atmospherical poem
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by anOmis
    "i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body..."

    awsume line off a girl
    really atmospherical poem

    whoa hey thanks! :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    it's teh sexxay......:D
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by ISN
    it's teh sexxay......:D

    word :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you're such a cool dude :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • orig_bise2postorig_bise2post Posts: 193
    *fantasizes of_the_girl* ... (my wittiness this morning is astounding :) )

    this is a huge step out of the 'usual' jessie poem...
    but it is seriously awesome jessie... i'm drunk or i'd post more.
    "Nobody is ever promised tomorrow. Increase the peace."
    ~Juan Azize
  • amoviescriptendingamoviescriptending Posts: 4
    "i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body"

    GREAT line!
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    Very unique and new...i like it!

    great job really speaks for itself
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    very cool poem jezzie belle.. very cool :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • MeddleDealMeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    HOT DAMN JESSIE! That is er, erotic! hahaha :p but very GOOD!!

    *daydreams about her man*

    *sighs* :)
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn
  • Love objectiveLove objective Posts: 37
    Very, very,very cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    dreamwhispers are all i have
    to touch to feel to kiss
    when all i want is a hand to hold
    all i can hold is my self and my soul
    all i can have is my wants and your voice



    i want to bottle your voice and drip it all over my body...
    i want to bottle your voice
    bottle your voice
    bottle your...

    your

    you

    drip it all over my body.

    drip all over my...

    drip all...

    over...

    my...
    why does this turn me on? ;)
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

    http://www.wishlistfoundation.org

    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



    Morgan Freeman/Clint Eastwood 08' for President!

    "Make our day"
  • tracingdaisiestracingdaisies Posts: 40
    It turns everybody on because it's hot, in that way that only poetry *can* be hot. :)

    I likes a lot.
    I wish I was a Democrat
    One that had a chance to win
    I wish I was a Republican
    But would I be a human being?
    --from 'Wishlist,' 7/6/03, Philadelphia

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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    *bump for hottness* :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • HoorayForHumansHoorayForHumans Posts: 151
    *fans self*
    this heart's on fire
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by HoorayForHumans
    *fans self*

    :Dyessss
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I like this thread. :)
  • fitzyfitzy Posts: 20
    I tried that once.. believe me:

    M E S S Y.

    Nice one Jessie :)
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    lol!! haha thanks :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    oooooooooh nice.... :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    I just love resurrecting this thread now and then :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh, I remember THIS


    :)


    I totally relate
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    oh, I remember THIS


    :)


    I totally relate
    yes... THIS :D hee heeeee
    and hey! long time no see, pastalicious!
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i took off for the summer
    ate real love for breakfast everyday
    and cut the insane green shit coming up in my backyard, endlessly

    :)


    nice to see you, too.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    i took off for the summer
    ate real love for breakfast everyday
    and cut the insane green shit coming up in my backyard, endlessly

    :)


    nice to see you, too.

    real love?

    mary j. blige :)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Originally posted by violet ray
    real love?

    mary j. blige :)

    indeed indeed, violet ray... I never knew before, and now I am continually increasingly amazed
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    indeed indeed, violet ray... I never knew before, and now I am continually increasingly amazed

    well deserved amazement for you PN...
    you make me smile with this:)
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thank you, violet
    thank you very much

    xoxoxoxox
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