Soon, Again

grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Someday I know I'll just start waking up
At six o'clock in the morning again
And drive to my old high school
Bleary-eyed and pissy
And walk unflinchingly into the first classroom
I see, ready to go again.
Or, failing that,
It seems certain
That one day soon the old friends
Will drop by and pick me up
And we'll scurry off to the drive-in theater/pizza shop
To play pool and the juke box and smoke reefer
For a few blissful hours;
Or, failing that,
It seems certain
Any day now some pals from way back
Will knock petitely upon my door
Holding a red bouncy kickball
And invite me to the church down the street
Which boasts a really large green lawn
Upon which we will play a long sweaty muddy game
Of kickball, the kind with baseball rules,
Except you can throw the ball at the runner.
Or, failing that,
It seems certain
That any time now
I will crawl directly back inside my mother
Up the wrong way
And settle down inside the scarred womb
Among the sinew and bloody tissue
To once again hear the songs of angels
And the sleep of forever.
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  • Yey Grooveamatic! Kisses and hugs and whistles
    and ahhh THAT was cool!
    Thank you.
    :)
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    that was a very interesting read.. i liked it for sure. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • Originally posted by Amaterasu
    Yey Grooveamatic! Kisses and hugs and whistles
    and ahhh THAT was cool!
    Thank you.
    :)


    Thank you soooo much! I appreciate that reaction more than you know!!!
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  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    very good! i like all the visual benchmarks.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Some of these people go around saying corporate america
    Like they weren't a functioning
    Member of it;
    It's perplexing;
    They'll saunter around the Wal-Mart
    Buying potato chips and Ricky Martin
    Like they were buying fig leaves
    And hummus
    All innocent-like;
    Never to blame, us americans.
    Always the others, in their
    Made-of-money Ivory Towers
    Somewhere in the Silicon Valley
    Or maybe Boulder, Colorado
    These corporate america fuckers
    Play like puppets with us,
    That's what some of these people seem to be thinking,
    Strolling along in their Keds and flannel,
    Smoking leisurely on their Kools,
    Remembering the good old days
    When there were still products
    That weren't made anywhere,
    Or by anyone.
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  • Where do boys and girls go
    On sunny chilly afternoons
    While old folks chatter idly
    About weather and the nation,
    Where do the boys and girls go?
    Under bridges and nooks,
    Crossing brooks and swaths
    Toying imaginary and planetary
    With only the goo in their skulls,
    Into singular, blissful
    Moments of the fake?
    Where do boys and girls grow
    Besides into men and women?
    Under the most curious verdant meadows
    Where obelisks and markers
    Hold steadfast to the earth,
    And children sometimes run giggling.
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  • Their sweet toils often go awry
    Despite the most foolhardy try
    With miniature hands and tiny playthings
    To devise the purest of imaginings;
    And in drives adulthood with strange alloys
    To squash the secret governments of boys.
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  • The entire time that I sit here writing poetry
    On the porch, a bee of decidedly squashable size
    Insists repeatedly on tasting my coffee.
    He flies about halfway down into the mug,
    Alights on the spoon handle, and appears
    To daintily sip the steaming brew. I don't mind.
    I have more than enough to share with him,
    And I am not afraid of catching any diseases
    Or getting gunk in my guts from drinking
    Where his wild lips have been.
    But I am going to kill him anyway,
    Because it is my right.
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  • Wow grooveamatic

    The impact of Soon, Again snuck up on me in the most satisfying way. Good read.

    And the rest...
    And in drives adulthood with strange alloys
    To squash the secret governments of boys.
    On the porch, a bee of decidedly squashable size
    Insists repeatedly on tasting my coffee.
    just wow :)
  • Jaidra...thanks so much! I was beginning to think no one was reading them anymore!! I'm glad you like them...and very please that Soon, Again was able to sneak up on you!

    :)
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  • From the humid rooms of the apartment
    We emerge into dry sunlight,
    Startled as moles by the narrowing
    Of our own retinas and the freshness
    Of a morning.
    Cars pass noticed. He has learned the word,
    And the one for trucks, as well.
    His little mouth moves, his little finger points
    To light up green cars and red trucks
    Like neon rosaries.

    In the backyard he finds the swingset,
    His skinny four-legged friend,
    Resting where it always does.
    The dewey grass tickles my toes.

    Lighting my cigarette, I watch him
    With interest and affection.
    I ponder the size and grasp of the universe.
    I marvel at the size of his hands.
    So small.

    A squirrel stretches out on the fence like a ferret.
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  • Here we stand on the brink,
    Staving the rush of old age:
    Throwing our arms up in disgust,
    Thwarting fearlessly the rush.
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  • Originally posted by grooveamatic
    Some of these people go around saying corporate america
    Like they weren't a functioning
    Member of it;
    It's perplexing;
    They'll saunter around the Wal-Mart
    Buying potato chips and Ricky Martin
    Like they were buying fig leaves
    And hummus
    All innocent-like;
    Never to blame, us americans.
    Always the others, in their
    Made-of-money Ivory Towers
    Somewhere in the Silicon Valley
    Or maybe Boulder, Colorado
    These corporate america fuckers
    Play like puppets with us,
    That's what some of these people seem to be thinking,
    Strolling along in their Keds and flannel,
    Smoking leisurely on their Kools,
    Remembering the good old days
    When there were still products
    That weren't made anywhere,
    Or by anyone.

    Hey! I see it!

    Funny thing is, is that these "corporate american" fuckers DO fuck with us. How many phone calls do we get each day from people we never gave our number to? Don't get me wrong. I shop as much as the next American. But I don't want to live off the grid. The complaints are valid... not to any extreme as there are, of course, two sides to every coin, but... all toward evolution, right?

    (:
  • grooveamatic,
    Nice writting. Good images, voice, and purpose.
    Live the life you dream

    "Cause I can't wait to figure out what's wrong with me
    So I can say this is the way I use to be" -- John Mayer
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    Hey! I see it!

    Funny thing is, is that these "corporate american" fuckers DO fuck with us. How many phone calls do we get each day from people we never gave our number to? Don't get me wrong. I shop as much as the next American. But I don't want to live off the grid. The complaints are valid... not to any extreme as there are, of course, two sides to every coin, but... all toward evolution, right?

    (:


    Yeah, I know the complaints are somewhat valid, but with this poem, I was addressing those constant complainers and mainstream layabouts who simply echo what they read in Adbusters magazine but never change their actions. I think if someone wants to be a dissenter, they'd better dissent--and stop buying your hummus at Wal-Mart. Know what I mean?

    Thanks for reading it :)
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  • Wal-Mart has HUMMUS???!??


    coooool




    lmao




    gotcha ~ and for all my lack of trust fund, agree



    nice stuff in here
  • Originally posted by PastaNazi





    gotcha ~ and for all my lack of trust fund, agree



    nice stuff in here



    Thanks! :)

    And I only assume Wal-Mart has hummus...they have everything!
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  • On the corner at a small shop I buy a coffee
    And take it outside with me.
    In the air it steams to cool,
    In communion with the breeze.
    Strolling east, the cars and bicycles
    Are sparse today, even birds are few
    This close to downtown. Passing the laundromat,
    Sweet, pungent sofetner assaults my nose
    And the rumble of coin-op dryers is melancholy and promising.
    Turning left onto Reaville Avenue a small boy
    Eight years old if a day
    Sits on the curb just sitting there
    Drying his hair in the sun like the sidewalk
    And I almost say hi to him.
    The coffee cools quickly in the chill afternoon,
    I almost turn back to buy another,
    But think better of the three dollars left
    In my jean pockets.
    I sidle into a quaint bookstore to gape at magazines,
    The lives of others and kitchen equipment
    Glossy and flaxen, and the portly
    Latina by the register eyes me
    And she is beautiful in that way
    Only Latinas and llamas can be beautiful:
    Using solely the eyes.
    I ask her where the restroom is.
    She grudgingly gives me a key
    Knotted to a large wooden block--
    As if this were an interstate filling station--
    And points me to the back corner,
    But the door is open when I get there.
    Safely locked inside, my pants stay buttoned
    And I use only the mirror, studying my lines,
    The old souvenir red blotches, reminding me
    Of lives and moments, other bookstores
    Or towns; some oversize pores poke peskily
    Into view, begging for me to wash my face more often,
    But not right now, not now, a time and place for everything.
    Giving the key back to the girl, I emerge onto Main Street
    And suck deep the stunningly new air,
    Amazed by the realization that you are somewhere far away
    Occupying real space
    Breathing just like me
    And smiling right this instant,
    Your eyes gleaming like little coins.
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  • nIce

    :)
  • I saw a woman stricken today--
    With a heart attack, most likely--
    It was at the flea market that occurs
    Every Sunday in the baseball field
    Beside my house.
    She lay there quite still,
    Her inside arguing most likely,
    And no one came running
    But one woman wearing khaki shorts,
    A daughter probably--
    Somebody's daughter--
    Who knelt to tend to her.
    (she was already dead? perhaps.)
    The other market-goers stood,
    Seemingly stricken themselves,
    Stranded in place and looking on,
    Listening as the ambulance
    From not-so-far away
    Took up it's familiar and chilling cry,
    Not just a wailing, but a caution:
    You should be good.
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  • Originally posted by PastaNazi
    nIce

    :)

    :)

    :)
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  • all of it was beautifully brilliant...
    all of it.
    shy away,run away,oh terrified child.
    move away into the fucken tornado.
  • How do you find the words? Or how do they find you?

    :)
  • Originally posted by sandman
    all of it was beautifully brilliant...
    all of it.

    I thank you, kind sir. :)
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  • Originally posted by SweetRelief
    How do you find the words? Or how do they find you?

    :)


    It's definitely the words that find me, not vice versa. I'm just a schlub from Pennsylvania who doesn't even deserve the words. They search me out.

    Thanks :)
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  • While you were at the store
    I wandered around this place
    Like a tourist, or a man trapped
    In a mausoleum. I passed gas
    In front of your refrigerator.
    It was an electric feeling.
    I took some of the vitamins
    From your medicine cabinet
    And let them dissolve in my mouth
    Like ripe peaches.
    I counted the pictures on the walls
    And there are seven.
    While you were at the store
    I slid down your banister
    And hurt myself minorly
    On the newel post;
    I made static electricity with my feet;
    I smelled the inside of your microwave oven;
    I put my hands indside your shoes;
    I let the air out of your bicycle tires and reinflated them;
    I changed the dog-eared page in the book on the coffee table
    And then I changed it back;
    I yelled at your cat. I'm sorry.
    I rang your doorbell to the tune of La Cucaracha.
    I giggled.
    I had myself a grand old time
    While you were at the store.
    If only my own house
    Made me as uncomfortable
    As everyone else's does.
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  • Why exactly was it we gathered
    On a crest without tears
    So close to the road
    We could feel wind made by cars?
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  • Originally posted by grooveamatic
    The entire time that I sit here writing poetry
    On the porch, a bee of decidedly squashable size
    Insists repeatedly on tasting my coffee.
    He flies about halfway down into the mug,
    Alights on the spoon handle, and appears
    To daintily sip the steaming brew. I don't mind.
    I have more than enough to share with him,
    And I am not afraid of catching any diseases
    Or getting gunk in my guts from drinking
    Where his wild lips have been.
    But I am going to kill him anyway,
    Because it is my right.
    hey I like this! good one grooveamatic I don't know how many times this has happened to me, it's inevitable. [but i didn't kill it] but still very awesome job, very rel to me. GOOD ONE!!! lithe1439
    I waited all day, you waited all day, but you left before sunset. And I just wanted to tell you the moment was beautiful. Just wanted to dance to bad music drive bad cars... watch bad tv...should have stayed for the sunset if not for me. [Vitology cd]
  • The re-papering began simply enough.
    Ripping the old off wasn't tough.
    Getting the corners was a pain;
    They'd slightly warp when it would rain.
    But once we had it stripped down bare
    We gazed at what had been buried there:
    An out-of-place water stain,
    Mold spores shaped just like a brain,
    Some crayon and a few old stickers,
    Fist-holes left from lover's bickers,
    A smudge appearing to be chalk,
    A clipping of TV's Peter Falk,
    A smattering of Eggshell paint,
    I tell you the place did seem quite quaint;
    A ghost room left by former tenants
    Risen briefly to do penance.
    We put new wallpaper on real fast
    Before stinking up a stranger's past.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    you're bloody good (and bloody good you are)......
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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