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  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Was Jesus a stoner???
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    THAN GOD IS SEVEN
    then God is 7
    then god is seven

    this Monkey's gone to heaven,

    yeah! and I
    ran outta
    thread
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Seven leaves...
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Tight

    Three years
    to presence,
    a look
    the light
    of a dream
    I confess
    this is not the
    sickest world
    I have intruded
    Life is poetry
    and
    I LIVE IT
    wholly,
    and
    I CHERISH THIS
    completly,
    my womb
    my mind
    my soul
    it is the might
    of it to
    hold me close
    ~tight



    {oh, madonna}
    for myself to finally kick in those last barriers of my furious stupidities,
    I see the eighth sea
    Amen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    The Mystery Of Paper

    I can't leave you
    ...
    down to
    my thoughts
    there
    you all are
    renewal
    in
    ink
    drop
    letters
    stretching
    youth and dream,
    memory and wrinkle
    unfolding at the edges
    of panic
    I distressed
    as when I am
    my silent enemy
    and still anger
    when I am my
    voiceless alliance
    those words have me
    at a gathering
    the best she served
    paper cuts are
    healing...

    m.r.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    What Grows from Spring

    slid
    in a sight
    a call was
    acknowledged
    in a K-Mart passage,
    a miracle
    as far as I could
    see the buddha
    gold
    three or so many
    years and
    verses
    ago
    the blue lit errands
    for water,
    puddles
    dug it up
    weeds floating with petals
    dream carnations
    yellows had glows
    in the last garden tried
    and true to red
    you are not a lonely bloom
    in the beads of rain
    we are wet and stems
    of summers shine

    m.r.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    drivin june

    at the wheel of a turn left
    or was it my luck of the draw
    in a prayer
    to say to
    my drive in speaker
    God
    was it a thought
    to jar, to thank
    a fear of nothing
    to guess at
    my right of suspicion
    pasting on a page
    to burn her i want
    to fire the movie leaves
    that I had heard
    that I had you fallin'
    in hopes
    and I need no reason
    but love running the road
    we all travel
    to the dead ends
    living our own shows
    don't leave me bare
    as I stood
    I am always first
    in line to mock my own body
    so twisted and warm
    and laid it to the land
    I want to understand
    how you spell it
    I
    love
    you
    and it wasn't me
    who would crash it
    in the misty roll
    the slow time tears
    of the dew scripted
    I know his body so near
    we picked the words up
    and threw them like
    they were rocks
    the rocks of our tears
    from some empty lot
    we are the noise
    of the junk and the wreckage...

    m.r.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    to the end
    in why
    I was stilled
    by grand impressions
    the shy hands played
    and shivered
    me to silence
    her action
    in words,
    my mouth had a song
    it covered
    out of breath
    no more
    and I deliver
    my lie
    into his felt
    you saw to cut me
    at a bend of folded paper
    releasing he opened
    a waste of no ones station
    walking in these wounds of control
    myself exists
    unmoved in the dark
    if I had not asked
    where is that key of no unknown
    unlocking a secret I was in it
    to be opened
    as a plea to be devoured
    by the dare in my heart
    of believing
    if i could just cry
    I want more
    out of my own
    two hands~
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    the last three years have been
    literally "spiritual boot camp"
    and rock- n- roll high school
    always playing in the back ground

    I never wrote poetry,until three years ago
    It all started by a "chance" encounter
    of seeing the Dalai Lama and him looking back at me

    It probably was maybe a mutual glance that was a second or two
    but for me it is the moment that is timeless
    and defining
    complete and for myself transforming

    at first I couldn't define what I was trying to write
    But it was rock n roll that gave me the canvas...

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
  • I just wish you'd write more often for us.

    Thank you.

    :)
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    but I don't have a computer, unless I go to Kinko's, sneak into college libraries, or, or, or...


    Also I am taking kind of a break from writing poetry to try to get the technicals of my book together, and to really absorb what I wrote,

    I am coming to understand alot of the depths of poetry, and I have to fight that choking feeling and that little voice that tells me I'm an immature, no good writer, and stupid

    I thank "god" for the rebellious nature of thought and action I have from time to time~ that voice in me loves what I am doing, keeps me going and fighting and writing
    I love that voice that says "I don't give a flyin' fuck what anybody else may think, I am a poet god dammit "

    It really is the only thing I ever want to do or how I want to think of myself "a POet"

    I have been reading Steven J. Bernstein's book, I stare at the photos of him, and read his stuff, and he's been keeping me going
    lately for Jessie I will be +++++++++++++++ positive


    be peace
    love
  • You're writing a book? Wow!

    :)
  • Originally posted by john girl
    Black, talkin' to herself...

    the arts

    why

    you know there just gets to be a point in life
    what else can I do to get what i need???
    (beyond the deepest depths of depression)
    that point being AFTER
    youv'e condsidered all your alternatives

    addiction
    suicide
    insanity
    voluntary committment
    incarceration
    isolation
    running away

    but you realize that for whatever various reason, value or responsibility
    that you can't even retreat to those escapes
    I'm at that point

    fuck IT
    what can i do?
    i
    laugh
    and let life do
    what life will do
    allowing Fate now
    to step in

    releasing
    dreams, hope, desires
    zero point
    no expectations anymore

    I'm through fighting
    you
    I'm through fighting myself
    God
    damn
    just so know
    I'm trapped
    and have to play
    but inside
    my thoughts
    I
    don't
    have
    too
    like the rules

    quietly with a smile
    i'm thinkin'
    fuck this
    and
    fuck you

    i have faith
    but i'm pissed

    why didn't i have intrests in business mgt. or math?

    You say something else, John Girl. I mean it. Thank you.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    29 they alone see truly who see that all actions
    are performed by prakiti, while the Self re
    30 mains unmoved. When they see the variety of
    creation rooted in that unity and growing out
    of it, they attain fulfillment in Brahman.

    31This supreme Self is without a beginning,
    undifferentiatted, deathless. Though it dwells
    in the body, Arjuna, it neither acts nor is touched
    32by action. As akasha pervades the
    cosmos but remains unstained, the Self can
    never be tainted though it dwells in every
    creature.

    33 As the sun lights up the world, the Self dwell-
    ing in the field is the source of all light in the
    34 field. Those who, with the eye of wisdom,
    distinguish the field from its Knower and
    the way to freedomfrom the bondage of
    prakiti, attain the supreme goal.




    Reading Andre Breton's Surrealism Manifesto's 1 and 2!

    and I wrote this before the Northern Star was released

    Desiree

    you knew the way to get inside
    trusted feelings and the plight
    (that was not right)
    to go, to leave and so I
    crushed the last battle
    the desire is so deep, I lied
    within my walls
    forced against
    the stalls
    ringing "Desiree"
    calls me like
    a longing wind
    for love
    love is surrender
    in what I can't see
    trusted my love
    inside me~


    nir "out": vana "to blow"
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    G irl you have a lot of talent, and potential that may still be untapped. The best way to harness this is to read as much as you can, absorb all the details of those who came before and those who are your contemporaries and blend them both into a style all your own.

    Also if you like Breton, go pick up Les Chants De Maldoror
    by the Counte de Lautremont, a poetic genius who died at the tender age of 26, but left so much valuable behind before he left, incredibly dark stuff, but wildly entertaining.

    And of course keep pumping it out, you'll find you can never really take a break from poetry, just a break from poems, keep a pocket sized notebook with you and just jot down all the scraps that cross the brain barrier and are lost in an hour if you don't put em down.

    Poetry is an overlooked gift, and you've got it.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    ETE you make me smile,
    you can be in my bath tub anytime UNPLUGGED from electrical outlets that might cause me bodily harm, of course,

    the entities that are music and poetry is about all I can trust,
    thank you
  • Originally posted by john girl

    the entities that are music and poetry is about all I can trust,
    thank you

    Amen.

    :)
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    typO
    blue folder
    poems
    x2
    without out
    is with
    and to be
    sea maidens
    name
    I of nail
    is the missing
    and guards
    the end
    with
    E
  • I wish I could write like that.

    :)
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    was lip liner,
    brandy
    and litttle arms
    message'd
    cross'd
    youths
    demure,
    and cries
    warm color, a pencil
    shade be light
    monologued
    the film
    upon
    the mirrors
    of arts heart
    and the mystries
    elusive
    recanted,
    enchanted
    haunts of moirae
    meant
    delight
    that
    it be said
    amore
    it was
    love
    that spoke
    back to me
    and I get

    ~* ~
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    visual and sound came in a dream quality

    a sprinkling revised

    "I ma back door, man, eye eats more chicken than any, man"

    Back, Door Man
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    written early eve' July 13 2004
    ez 8 motel
    with leonard cohen and in utero present

    Alan Freed

    Discus throwers
    dig for that punk
    and deified fire
    this is Romeos quince
    calling all to the choir
    are you in, son
    in the minefield pen chatter
    Turn It Up
    got have it louder
    this is a chore again
    so fuck the scores of
    black listed, stipends make the charts
    open the doors
    the radios are never closed
    as the heart quest (?)
    the seasons of
    unclear crusades
    and I raped for the blues
    riots chose her a stanzas a cage
    so my mouths out and my envy us
    between the thighs
    all lies of my cats trapdoor
    this is a sit in so take it over
    albeit the combative romancer
    not the misty caller
    to recover sleeves and today
    was a piece of work
    to refashion the powderless shell
    I courted only the radio violence
    free my ears, mix and musee
    rocking "surge" where did it fit in
    the discipline of the undisciplined
    and ginger has fucked us
    all role play (cough)
    my grooms near here
    black peonies in vinyl
    we lounged for the damned admiration
    and baby cotton nipples
    captivated, listen to this peep show

    the groupies kicked it in


    mr
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    with big brother

    and I thought I was all alone

    kiss kiss, and love to you
  • Originally posted by john girl
    written early eve' July 13 2004
    ez 8 motel
    with leonard cohen and in utero present

    Alan Freed

    Discus throwers
    dig for that punk
    and deified fire
    this is Romeos quince
    calling all to the choir
    are you in, son
    in the minefield pen chatter
    Turn It Up
    got have it louder
    this is a chore again
    so fuck the scores of
    black listed, stipends make the charts
    open the doors
    the radios are never closed
    as the heart quest (?)
    the seasons of
    unclear crusades
    and I raped for the blues
    riots chose her a stanzas a cage
    so my mouths out and my envy us
    between the thighs
    all lies of my cats trapdoor
    this is a sit in so take it over
    albeit the combative romancer
    not the misty caller
    to recover sleeves and today
    was a piece of work
    to refashion the powderless shell
    I courted only the radio violence
    free my ears, mix and musee
    rocking "surge" where did it fit in
    the discipline of the undisciplined
    and ginger has fucked us
    all role play (cough)
    my grooms near here
    black peonies in vinyl
    we lounged for the damned admiration
    and baby cotton nipples
    captivated, listen to this peep show

    the groupies kicked it in


    mr

    Oh yeah! I'm diggin' this one! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~on the eighth sea~~~~

    there's a natural mystic feelin in the air

    Poetry rocks
    I love the way angels conspire

    there is so much of something deeper going on out there


    Joy is typing in your bra and panties when it is hot and humid
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    ***************************************************
    joy is practicing my electric guitar in my bra and panties, with becks beer~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    sea change practice the c change
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    God, we are only men women and children


    I know there is a heaven,

    Kim Sun Il "my life is important, your life is important"

    Peace be with you, with us all, Peace
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    can be so cruel
    and hurt us so deeply

    but I still believe this world can change for the better, that is the only hope we have to believe in eachother,

    I struggle at times to remain an optimist,
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    it all, just have to keep loving it all


    I am just rambling my thoughts,

    for a peace filled night
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Seers of the dawns tread
    Rise anywhere and imagine the sea
    knows of the moon's ruby eclipse
    I paid May's dew
    in the awe of the green corona
    of sunset
    to west turn indie
    so to those Isles, beaches of rose
    the unveiling future's come ashore
    la lady knew Samuels court
    secrets we kept a sailin for
    silk roads by ship this lobe hears
    to the steering by my captors of hem
    the seers return salvation
    Begin by rows across all oars
    and arms over our hearts
    in peace
    Time to release the breaking waves
    we are in tears of tea,
    saucers in the cups of life
    rafts are not for sinking
    I wish for the sound of laughter
    alive with the crying
    we're all wearing the sari's
    from long ago
    biting the golden trade
    we are the second coming
    remember this age anew
    tau and true mint
    drinking the lightness
    engage the tasters
    and fearless
    the humble scent...

    Michelle Raine
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