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  • does anyone else have experience in premonition coming thru in there lyrics/poetry?

    if you have had this happen, describe, post,

    this has been happening to me and it's a little hard to take in.
  • Isn't it not very fuuny
    drive-by shotput paint
    and down goes the honey

    Hematoma headache, it's freezing
    so swell
    pound off tanking seizures
    war is hell
    am I to know or to tell
    it the bone core

    another round at the apple convention
    here's a bell
    takin' it off the skid
    burnin' rubber
    alumini, numb by
    the intentions
    a street war
    my souveniour
    the criminal concussion
    I reap a treasure
    to no ends and these years
    of abrasions

    Drop the random target practice peace
    here it caught me a burst on my sheets
    a center, a release
    a stand, you got me
    to wrath and my attention
    this to you, oh well
    bruises are numb to infection
    eating icy crumbs
    I'm attacking the flow
    at your service
    no point to the cowards road game

    Frown, drown
    melt away the bad be as gone
    as the far, as the blame
    hold the fresh in my tears

    Onl the beats on
    only has a heart to be strong
    I won't choke to be tied on the chain

    All abort
    let it ring in my ears
    out of mouth
    sing, sing
    me your tears

    All abort
    from your hurts
    off your fears
    seize and desist
    off with the shirts
    I am deflection
    No I am protection...

    john G. Earl
  • Originally posted by john girl
    Frown, drown
    melt away the bad be as gone
    as the far, as the blame
    hold the fresh in my tears

    Onl the beats on
    only has a heart to be strong
    I won't choke to be tied on the chain

    All abort
    let it ring in my ears
    out of mouth
    sing, sing
    me your tears

    All abort
    from your hurts
    off your fears
    seize and desist
    off with the shirts
    I am deflection
    No I am protection...

    john G. Earl

    Now I hate to chop up your post but girl, I really, really dig the part that I cut out!!!! Not to say the beginning isn't good but the end just kicks! Nice to see something new! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Thanks

    I was thinking how our
    brain is abstract to logic sometimes.

    Happy Holidays
  • Originally posted by john girl
    Thanks

    I was thinking how our
    brain is abstract to logic sometimes.

    Happy Holidays

    :D I know mine is! LOL!


    Happpiest of holidays to you too! I'm outta here! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Kavita's Saw

    Vaulted
    in idea, dna
    movin' all over the prairie
    reclined on the private moments
    I'd harbored
    no cherries
    for keeps I had carried
    the old secret of
    his shame on me
    I've lost these thoughts
    grew through the timid
    and the rots of leaves
    innocence has been so sifted

    I remember how it's torn, drifted,
    we doped, relieved,
    when it's the crossing
    to go, a leap and born
    of recites and hopes
    of why or what makes
    this an answer
    groping for the touch
    of soap tasters
    made in Iliad
    the
    want is lust, charge
    the jest of ancients mused
    sensory humor, no past has purged

    ~leak on me, I am odd I see
    this floater feeling to
    form a point to destination
    I was wanting a reason
    if you have to know
    there in no reasoning
    only thrown into my guts gulley
    a mending streams of persuasion
    the push becomes by believing
    I have a place and dumb luck

    That and what wasn't only makes you tough
    good or bad
    always want to prize, those from the rough

    got to get a better rut
    a better way than to sink
    to my Father's lures
    hear, I can scream, all my dreams
    through doors that never shut.

    Michelle Raine
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    "poem" in India, feminine

    "Saw" my expression for a guitar
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Evening Grace

    Teething able biters
    chew this lorn
    Oh ma labored cane
    hard sugars, scorn
    a gnaw, a scrap
    the seeds, chored
    and feed my raw,
    the
    in gender
    make potent

    interuptures

    no hand over mouth
    mine wants a kill
    full of kiss
    warming and warning
    of the thaw
    spliced lip, spliced lip
    splice lipped
    the bloody tell me
    of your
    spills and drip
    to love more
    no war
    no weeps
    sleep more
    how down, how steep
    should I want to crawl under
    to peak in
    my poor feast , pleased to eat
    the damning fruit, aah
    I am beast, too
    pick up what fell
    to bite again
    grace
    how you come shivering
    to a bitch,
    like my men
    seize the beauty
    in a luna's shawl


    michelle raine
  • a work by Alistair Crowley, isn't it?


    I like to seem pragmatic
    But in fact I'm telepathic
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    I don't know much about Alistair "Crow"ley,

    i'll admit
    to reading tarot,
    numerology
    etc..
  • No, Crowley's not my thing either. An ex-g/f of mine (still a good friend and published novelist now, I'm pleased to say) is very accurate with her tarot readings.
    I think many of us have experiences we can't explain.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Mycean

    My caves
    almost folded in
    as it lays
    let it fall
    my walls, her
    backlit fades
    may into
    Mandarine and
    the turquoise
    pain,
    my trust, my own
    my room, my quiet
    my greif
    grew from flowers
    angry fragrants
    breezed
    and porous fire
    Know I am not blind
    of blinds kind, no
    I ache to a vagrants rose
    for the good of a dream
    learned
    is
    a tolls paid
    mean day of masks
    those dead eyes
    pluck me outloud
    to black petals haunt
    my hands
    lace be chord
    govern's bloom in swords
    atonement, Why?
    I'd been lingering's
    shadow
    course return'd
    no absence
    this abstinence
    wore no smell
    and I want to reek
    so come no stillness
    come active...

    John G. Earl
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    miss you
    bleeds
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    a "have" to go home,
    family already bought the ticket,
    Anxiety, no Dad
    I am not a loser...

    I can hear him already
    and I feel sick...

    Going to lose myself
    downtown, emp, tower
    sunset and Hendrix
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    amps

    amps


    kisses

    to

    plants
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    with
    drops
    of
    distortion


    Jimi
    can
    you
    find
    that
    ~center~
    within
    me
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    meter
  • Originally posted by john girl
    amps

    amps


    kisses

    to

    plants

    :)

    Have you hugged a tree lately?

    Very short but very sweet john/michelle! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    too, Iowa

    yeah, what the fuck
    bought an electric guitar,
    baby,
    i'm on route 37
    and just like the
    poetry
    I
    have no
    idea
    what the fuck I am doin',

    the saddest part is
    I am sleeping on my ex's couch
    he told me last night
    i couldn't practice
    in his house

    I am sufficating, amps
    he is sufficating,
    my lamps

    go to hell
    to go to heaven
    go to hell
    so I breathe in
    sevens

    I can't help what wants to come out
    why does this make me feel so guilty
    I can't help myself out
    I can't help him
    where is the door
    when I only want out
    to find my chorus

    again,
    begin,
    don't hold back
    breathe in
    she wants hers
    she wants someplace
    some in

    Guitars are not the sin...

    John G. Earl
  • Originally posted by john girl
    too, Iowa

    yeah, what the fuck
    bought an electric guitar,
    baby,
    i'm on route 37
    and just like the
    poetry
    I
    have no
    idea
    what the fuck I am doin',

    the saddest part is
    I am sleeping on my ex's couch
    he told me last night
    i couldn't practice
    in his house

    I am sufficating, amps
    he is sufficating,
    my lamps

    go to hell
    to go to heaven
    go to hell
    so I breathe in
    sevens

    I can't help what wants to come out
    why does this make me feel so guilty
    I can't help myself out
    I can't help him
    where is the door
    when I only want out
    to find my chorus

    again,
    begin,
    don't hold back
    breathe in
    she wants hers
    she wants someplace
    some in

    Guitars are not the sin...

    John G. Earl

    Wow!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    for now,
    sweet dreams
    may all
    our dreams be
    a suite
    my friend
    a man
    amen
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    woke up hearing this song
    going in my head

    "in the plows, in the plows"

    you know how it goes
    hmmm,
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    Lucy Jo'b
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    A
    pit
    inside
    swallow
    the aches
    I desposed

    Not despised
    a truth
    wears a dread
    that I lose
    ink, so it does
    always fade,

    the links
    we unwind
    in down time
    like the
    good ground
    from a print of
    blue shoe,
    shue, shoe
    take me for away
    for awhile, to you



    michelle raine
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    another complicated song

    you may think it
    If I remember
    you,
    oh,
    how you said it

    be strong
    and send me along

    You knew
    cause it fell
    for you

    if the experienced
    could...

    you'd tell
    ah,ah
    lost the words

    to me
    it is that
    what carries me on
    for everyday
    i eat for
    completion

    ah, ha

    a little mess
    for me
    conflict,
    is a fear of
    my own frictions

    I have come to this
    so what
    confessions
    so what,
    composure

    It's
    complicated,
    So,

    Michelle Raine
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    a poem into song

    ~leak on me

    36 keys I noted on my keyboard
    from the right hand side
    count back to

    leak~
    18 + 14

    17 on~

    17+ 14 me~

    I'm ~27+31/19+14~ odd I see
    3I+27
    32+27

    18+14
  • Thanks, john girl!

    I've often puzzled as to how numerology works.

    What does my date of birth tell you? I was born on the twenty-first day of the seventh month, in the year nineteen-seventy two.

    By the way, Jimi's music does that to me, too. When I listen to a version of "Stone Free" that wasn't put on the "Live At The Fillmore East" album but was from the Band of Gypsies gigs - that includes a section of his rare "Valleys of Neptune" - I'm completely gone!

    :)
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    was just trying to match words up with how I thought it sounded,
    experimenting,
  • stumbling onto
    the bricks of
    Bernstein

    it's hard to breath
    it hurts to read
    all of his way
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