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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    >The arrow in my chest barely affects my breathing as I summit >the rise, my head throbbing with lack of oxygen and overdream; >I realize as the sun rises that I am finally alive, my shirt in >tatters and my consciousness has beaten the path that I can >only see when I turn around. It's a shame I have littered so >much of this mountainside with pieces of myself, but as breath >holds it's own, tangibility available for such a short duration >these days, my lights flicker out. I shudder and float away a leaf >on the tide, a message in a bottle...


    We all float down here!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Egad..

    A Stephen King reference has finally found its way to my thread.

    Sweet.

    Anyone? Anyone?
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • BhagavadGita
    BhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by setaside2
    Egad..

    A Stephen King reference has finally found its way to my thread.

    Sweet.

    Anyone? Anyone?

    Doodie floats.........
  • BhagavadGita
    BhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    We are all messed up little poets.
    Situation, circumstance, regrets---such is life---that's why sometimes I feel like free falling! At least sometimes beauty comes from those things that bring us the pain.

    I:m fond of this one!

    Seta, that was a very beautiful thing to wake up to when i can't sleep at 4am.

    Was like warm milk and cookies of love...

    as always, such a good friend you are. and no, i never mind :)
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    just speaking for myself (though i'm sure i'm not the only one who feels this way) - this thread is one i like to read again and again. i always find something new even in a post i've read time and again. there are so many textures and brilliant complexities layered upon the beauty and truth in every post.

    its a lovely universe you've shared with us and one i enjoy visiting.
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Coleen you sandman sweetheart...

    I do not deserve any such praise. Thank you. With all sincerity.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    Originally posted by setaside2

    Lunar Echo

    ... pull on my puppet strings to impress or to depress or to repress or to regress or to empress or to digress or otherwise enchant upon occasion shared and lit harshly in 5000k halogen...

    ... nay the blood has thawed the homes of the forgotten and all has come forward in a rush for the exits, the excitement of what's to come...

    ...I would but kneel in supplication but the water will no longer support me. It is to flight I have taken and, misdirection or no, sleight of hand or sly of smile, I have now learned the song I am to sing...

    May the voice reach the gods. May their halls shake with the cobwebbed neglect that is felt. May their pride bring them home. May their wounds allow them to return.

    And the Echo echo echo....

    [/B]
    ~~the man upstairs is used to all of this fucking noise~~


    first of all:

    Sleight of Hand/Faithfull/GiventoFly/TremorChrist...


    seta, I daresay... your PJ is showing (:


    the itch in the back as the wings unfurl is what gets me in this one... it's what i feel in this one... but all through this Given wants to be sung...

    so...

    thanks for this

    !:
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    I didn't mean to plagiarize....

    Do you really think...?

    Damn. And just when I thought i was being original.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Sharon_Hearts_PJ
    Sharon_Hearts_PJ Bristol, PA Posts: 1,383
    Originally posted by setaside2
    I didn't mean to plagiarize....

    Do you really think...?

    Damn. And just when I thought i was being original.

    inspiration and plagiarization are totally different things. i saw the sleight of hand thing too. nothing to be ashamed of :)
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    i didn't think it plagerism at all
    god
    i can find a pj song for almost any visual or whatever...
    cuz i dig pj


    you know?

    i love dat stinking rock band...


    :D

    carry on
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    This new piece is driving me fucking batshit. I can't seem to finish it so I won't have another until it is done, I swear.

    love to all. even tenaciousA ;):D

    and you KNOW I mean that lovely!
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    :P


    go create yourself in a corner seta
    ~all is full of love~
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    I'm trying to ya smart ass...
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    giggle giggle

    :D
    ~all is full of love~
  • keven 33
    keven 33 Posts: 259
    bleeding all over my guitar
    guess i went to far
    fell in to deep of love
    your words are pretty good
    for my pain
    convicted
  • tenaciousA
    tenaciousA Posts: 604
    Woo
    You might not ever get rich
    But let me tell ya it's better that diggin' a ditch.
    There ain't no tellin' who ya might meet. .
    A movie star or may be even an Indian Chief.

    (Workin' at the) car wash.
    Workin' at the car wash yeah !
    Come on and sing it with me car wash.
    Get with the feelin' y'all car wash yeah.

    Come summer the work gets kind a hard
    This ain't no place to be if ya planned on being a star.
    Let me tell you it's always cool
    And the boss don't mind sometimes if ya act a fool.

    At the car wash
    Talkin' about the car wash yeah!
    Come on and sing it for me car wash.
    Car wash yeah!

    (Work and work) Well those cars never seem to stop comin'.
    (Work and work) Keep those rags and machines hummin'
    (Work and work) my fingers to the bone
    (Work) at five I can't wait 'til it's time to go home
    Hey
    get your car washed today.
    Fill up and you don't have to pay.
    Come on and give us a play.
    Get a wash right away.

    Car wash talkin' about the car wash yeah!
    Woo car wash

    Those cars never seems to stop comin'
    Well
    I say
    Keep those rags and machines hummin'


    whistle while you work... :P
    ~all is full of love~
  • Amaterasu
    Amaterasu Posts: 317
    I LOVE YA!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVED THIS SONG AS KID!!!
    I'LL ALWAYS LOVE THIS SONG. Yeah and she'll have
    fun fun fun till her daddy takes the T-bird away!!!
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    oh

    my


    GOD


    You did not just defile my thread with this... this... 70's MUCK.


    NO! I deFY you!


    And if it gets stuck in my head all day I'll... I'll... I don't know what I'll do.


    But you won't like it.

    :p
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    What did you want the words to "Ring My Bell" or perhaps "Knock On Wood" ? Or both at the same time? :p
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Amaterasu
    Amaterasu Posts: 317
    :) Congrats on your 200 post! Did I read that correctly?
    Who ever you are you'll always be a star in my heart.
    I love how your words flow along with my soul.
    Don't you worry about what others don't know. You're
    so hot that you're on fire and all the world is in the cool
    season just to figure.

    :) As far as inspiration well let's put it this way, many good
    things have happened over the month. Many positive.
    So much so winter is trying to keep up with me by snowing
    in my land today-October! Think positive, look forward to
    the holy months, only goodness prevails. Don't be afraid,
    try, try, try, don't give up! Set a goal, don't stop until you
    reach it. That is success.
    Much love and lots of flavor.
    AmaT.:)

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