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Any english speaker who could help me?

Spiritual_ChaosSpiritual_Chaos Posts: 28,918
edited May 2021 in All Encompassing Trip
Have a short text/story I have written (very-very short) which is a translation of a swedish one I have written. 

Anyone here who would have the time to just read through it and just point out if there are any obvious language/grammatical error?
"Mostly I think that people react sensitively because they know you’ve got a point"

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  • West Coast DreamgirlWest Coast Dreamgirl Posts: 1,819
    Sure
  • West Coast DreamgirlWest Coast Dreamgirl Posts: 1,819
    edited May 2021
    PM me x
    Post edited by West Coast Dreamgirl on
  • hedonisthedonist standing on the edge of forever Posts: 24,524
    Where’s our resident editor?
  • West Coast DreamgirlWest Coast Dreamgirl Posts: 1,819
    Who dat?
  • dankinddankind I am not your foot. Posts: 20,827
    :whistle:
    I SAW PEARL JAM
  • lastexitlondonlastexitlondon Posts: 11,825
    Im english
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  • rw160510rw160510 Posts: 909
    Sure
  • lastexitlondonlastexitlondon Posts: 11,825
    Lets do this 
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  • Spiritual_ChaosSpiritual_Chaos Posts: 28,918
    edited May 2021
    PMed @West Coast Dreamgirl  and @lastexitlondon

    EDIT: And @rw160510

    Thanks!
    Post edited by Spiritual_Chaos on
    "Mostly I think that people react sensitively because they know you’ve got a point"
  • West Coast DreamgirlWest Coast Dreamgirl Posts: 1,819
    Amazing @spiritual_chaos I'm impressed, not just with your English translation but the whole thing, well done, like it!!!
  • lastexitlondonlastexitlondon Posts: 11,825
    I really thought it soulful.  Great 
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    astoria 06
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    this song is meant to be called i got shit,itshould be called i got shit tickets-hartford 06 -
  • Spiritual_ChaosSpiritual_Chaos Posts: 28,918
    Thank you for helping me out!
    "Mostly I think that people react sensitively because they know you’ve got a point"
  • West Coast DreamgirlWest Coast Dreamgirl Posts: 1,819
    Anytime xxxx
  • rw160510rw160510 Posts: 909
    No problem;)
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