My petty Pearl Jam pet peeve...
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DewieCox wrote:PJStatTracker wrote:I get what the intention is, it just doesn't make any sense.
To have an aforementioned verse, you have to mention a verse. He mentions moss - what he really means to say is "that's the aforementioned moss in the previous verse."
It makes perfect sense, and I don't think it breaks any grammar rules. You don't have to say "verse" for it to be aforementioned. Once he sings the verse it becomes aforementioned.
I disagree and this is exactly why this line has always been a little annoying (besides it just being awkward). The moss would be aforementioned, not the verse. Aforementioned doesn't mean "something that has preceded something else" it means "previously cited". He's called our attention to the moss in the earlier verse so it has been cited and can be referred to as aforementioned. However, simply singing a verse is not citing the verse unless you specifically reference the verse itself during that time, which he doesn't.0 -
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october22 wrote:I disagree and this is exactly why this line has always been a little annoying (besides it just being awkward). The moss would be aforementioned, not the verse. Aforementioned doesn't mean "something that has preceded something else" it means "previously cited". He's called our attention to the moss in the earlier verse so it has been cited and can be referred to as aforementioned. However, simply singing a verse is not citing the verse unless you specifically reference the verse itself during that time, which he doesn't.
I get what you're saying, but it doesn't have to be that specific. I thought, hell, I might be completely wrong and decided to look it up and it can be used both ways.
Either way, he wouldn't be the first songwriter to stretch the rules and all in all it's much more effective the way he worded it.0 -
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DewieCox wrote:october22 wrote:I disagree and this is exactly why this line has always been a little annoying (besides it just being awkward). The moss would be aforementioned, not the verse. Aforementioned doesn't mean "something that has preceded something else" it means "previously cited". He's called our attention to the moss in the earlier verse so it has been cited and can be referred to as aforementioned. However, simply singing a verse is not citing the verse unless you specifically reference the verse itself during that time, which he doesn't.
I get what you're saying, but it doesn't have to be that specific. I thought, hell, I might be completely wrong and decided to look it up and it can be used both ways.
Either way, he wouldn't be the first songwriter to stretch the rules and all in all it's much more effective the way he worded it.
Well, no doubt that nerdy conversations about grammar don't have a real place in rock n' roll. Otherwise Wishlist would be a complete disaster. But it's a great song, as is who you are, regardless of how I feel about that one word.
Out of curiosity, though, where have you found that "aforementioned" can be used in this way. I would love to find out I'm wrong as that line has always bugged me.Download the unofficial <a href="http://bit.ly/PJStatTracker">Pearl Jam Stat Tracker</a> app for iPhone/iPad. It's <em>FREE.</em>
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PJStatTracker wrote:Well, no doubt that nerdy conversations about grammar don't have a real place in rock n' roll. Otherwise Wishlist would be a complete disaster. But it's a great song, as is who you are, regardless of how I feel about that one word.
haha, very true. I really don't give a fuck. I only nerd out for sport. Could you imagine if I was an Alanis Morisette fan?? "Isn't it ironic?" No, bitch, it isn't!!!0 -
october22 wrote:PJStatTracker wrote:Well, no doubt that nerdy conversations about grammar don't have a real place in rock n' roll. Otherwise Wishlist would be a complete disaster. But it's a great song, as is who you are, regardless of how I feel about that one word.
haha, very true. I really don't give a fuck. I only nerd out for sport. Could you imagine if I was an Alanis Morisette fan?? "Isn't it ironic?" No, bitch, it isn't!!!
HAHAHA. yeah, the entire premise of that song is bass ackward.
(btw, nerds are hot.)0 -
Anyone remember when MTV showed videos, and they had that greasy cabby in their commercials? "It's like rain, on a rainy day!"october22 wrote:PJStatTracker wrote:Well, no doubt that nerdy conversations about grammar don't have a real place in rock n' roll. Otherwise Wishlist would be a complete disaster. But it's a great song, as is who you are, regardless of how I feel about that one word.
haha, very true. I really don't give a fuck. I only nerd out for sport. Could you imagine if I was an Alanis Morisette fan?? "Isn't it ironic?" No, bitch, it isn't!!!
Also liked his Black Dog version: "Hey hey Mama said the way you move, gonna make you sweat, gonna make you....sweat!"0 -
Reading this back-and-forth about 'the moss' I'm reminded of the guys in the bleachers from the movie Major League. After a home run they argue for several minutes whether it was 'too high' or 'too far' or something like that and one guy finally says 'who gives a shit, it's gone.'0
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"Here's one for the serious collector." *insert easily accessible track from Lost Dogs*
Black: "Can't it be miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnneeeeee..." Only needs to last a few seconds. Too long ruins it, Hamilton 11's version was almost a piss break.
The Who covers... :sick:
Amongst The Waves.... :roll:Like a book among the many on a shelf...
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veddertown wrote:"Here's one for the serious collector." *insert easily accessible track from Lost Dogs*
Black: "Can't it be miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnneeeeee..." Only needs to last a few seconds. Too long ruins it, Hamilton 11's version was almost a piss break.
The Who covers... :sick:
Amongst The Waves.... :roll:
Yeah Ed said that before playing Leatherman I believe at a show I was at. He said 'I don't think I even own a copy of this...' My brother and I just looked at each other like 'OK?...' :?0 -
DH62179 wrote:Reading this back-and-forth about 'the moss' I'm reminded of the guys in the bleachers from the movie Major League. After a home run they argue for several minutes whether it was 'too high' or 'too far' or something like that and one guy finally says 'who gives a shit, it's gone.'
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october22 wrote:
haha, very true. I really don't give a fuck. I only nerd out for sport. Could you imagine if I was an Alanis Morisette fan?? "Isn't it ironic?" No, bitch, it isn't!!!
Ed Byrne takes care of the Alanis slagging for you! great skit.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nT1TVSTkAXg
I like this thread though! I think we have a right to dissect lyrics and their grammatical correctness . . . while song writing has some leeway, it's fun to find mistakes....Barrie 08/22/98
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