The Void

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  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    edited May 2011
    I'm bit from
    Everyone's bit some
    I'm only a bit fazed
    I can't be lit ablaze
    I'm already on fire
    Hardwired, discarded
    They couldn't understand the hand's card dealt
    They didn't lie but they got help
    You don't got it?
    Here let me hold it for you
    Old fool, usin' cold fission
    Readmission
    We've been silent since remission
    Three prisms opened the channels of precipitation
    Misinformation
    A disservice to this nervous query
    On Minerva's curve crushed clearly
    The blood thins sincerely
    In the sun dries merely in thine eye
    But is seen from afar in the tears of a jaguar
    The final years of a mage are
    At best spent finding immortal sleep
    So immoral sheep can keep their alchemy schemes in their waking dreams
    Faking mistakes taken aback
    Alkaline lakes, waiting at the gates
    Porcelain plates on the porch of a Porsche in a container at the port
    Date at court, Georgia Straight chortle
    Portable potable in the portal
    Snake rattle battle axe on the mantle, Alex
    Haley choking on his own comet
    Calm it, cool and collected
    Mind detected, mine selected
    Undefined indefinitely
    Most probable unmeasurable in a fine line.

    ~Bit~
    ~2011~
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  • LoulouLoulou Posts: 6,247
    Really cool Gabe and different! 8-) I like it!
    “ "Thank you Palestrina. It’s a wonderful evening, it’s great to be here and I wanna dedicate you a super sexy song." " (last words of Mark Sandman of Morphine)


    Adelaide 1998
    Adelaide 2003
    Adelaide 2006 night 1
    Adelaide 2006 night 2
    Adelaide 2009
    Melbourne 2009
    Christchurch NZ 2009
    Eddie Vedder, Adelaide 2011
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 1
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 2
    Adelaide BIG DAY OUT 2014
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    Days in which night looms,
    Our eyes look above to be consumed,
    By matter that composes life,
    I don't have to look far this night,
    To see what others have called,
    The brightest star of them all.

    ~Sunlight / Stargazing~
    ~2005~
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    how now? The Void be massin the mountains/flowing like fountains/pulling back curtians - on the world
    hes looking and he's writing them words down like he possesed with obsession for the pencils and mics now
    and my eyes, their hanging from their sockets and smoking, my jaw hanging open, i can't believe all this dope rhyme ~my ears/my tipper/ they be begging for beats and now they making up they own sounds like they born on the streets
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    It's just obscene how much money I'm making,
    all the leaves I'm raking in, which front am I taking the most
    dough from?  None at all 'cause I just robbed Fort Knox, melted down
    the gold and sold it to the Aztecs for a couple ears of corn and all
    their first born, but that was before Cortes insisted that Montezuma
    resist the Spanish attacks, should have watched their backs but
    Quetzalcoatl put em in a choke hold right off the bat, imagine that
    throat infection that left em with nothing but their health, what do
    you expect when the bombs are stealth.  When that was over I took back
    my wealth and my followers, we marched so far into the jungle we came
    out two thousand years before we entered, so we walked right into the
    center of the Olmec's cities, damn that was pretty, too bad you
    weren't in the trinity, anyway that day may have changed the grain of
    salt they took with every meal, they knew the energy and wisdom I had
    was so real they decided to take the jaguar with them to the now
    ruined city of Tikal.  I never claimed to be a god but they worshiped
    me as if I was an idol.  I walked away from their beliefs for I am
    just a man, that might have caused the Toltec to try and take control
    of my last empire.  They may have survived and prayed for my return, I
    told them it was their time to burn.  They cried and asked why I lied,
    told the truth that they'd be better off without the boss trying to
    explain the loss of their culture to uncivilized vultures that feed on
    chrome carcasses, stripped the bone of the narcissist that had a
    catharsis and broke all his mirrors in the hall of his house, ripped
    his lip when he did a back flip on the hull of his pimps shipwrecked
    Pinto, where'd you put the manuscript with the last insight ripped
    off?  The original was stolen along with the copies.  Oh you try to
    replace me with a disgraced decree, you want to taste me laced with
    herbal tea, which degree did you feel it reach?  The fifth wave on the
    beach crashed on the rippled tide that tripled inside the curl off of
    the north shore of the floral state and sank into the banks of white
    sand, digging for clams and miscellaneous rocks dropped by flocks of
    seagulls full of French fries by Lumberman's Arch, slip into trance
    and dance faster than an avalanche, drenched in sweat and bliss,
    that's what I miss.  

    ~untitled~
    ~2000~
  • LoulouLoulou Posts: 6,247
    Wow :thumbup: :clap:
    “ "Thank you Palestrina. It’s a wonderful evening, it’s great to be here and I wanna dedicate you a super sexy song." " (last words of Mark Sandman of Morphine)


    Adelaide 1998
    Adelaide 2003
    Adelaide 2006 night 1
    Adelaide 2006 night 2
    Adelaide 2009
    Melbourne 2009
    Christchurch NZ 2009
    Eddie Vedder, Adelaide 2011
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 1
    PJ20 USA 2011 night 2
    Adelaide BIG DAY OUT 2014
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    VoidOfMan wrote:
    Any more pieces I share I'll try to write in what year it was written as I have material that dates back about 13 years. I think I'm going to post it all in this thread so that I don't spam up this forum with new threads.

    Dear VoidOfMan,

    This thread has 19 pieces of your work in it and has received 699 views. That's only averaging about 37 views for each piece. This stuff deserves more exposure. Please don't worry at all about "spamming up this forum with new threads". In my opinion, this forum needs the impact of individual posts, especially those as well-written as your colllection.

    Sincerely,

    Half (of Four) Full (Cents)
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    Thanks dopebeastie, I am in the process of trying to make some beats for some of this stuff but it seems like the way I'm doing it is way over the top and words aren't needed. I can't seem to chop it down to basic beats / instruments so that I can put words over.

    Thanks again loulou!

    Thanks half full, I appreciate that too but I find it easier to find them all in here, kind of it's own archive. I would like more replies but I understand how most users won't reply, if I saw something like I write I would have no idea what it's about, hell, I barely understand what I write as it is.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    VoidOfMan wrote:
    if I saw something like I write I would have no idea what it's about, hell, I barely understand what I write as it is.

    Understanding overstated beatings fill room of too inflated, dated all but written, just not said, I said doping beasts from A to E to E to E to D instead,
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    to two too tall
    who'd you fall
    with voodoo doll
    in the dead of daylight
    delay progress of life
    are you protecting the land you live on
    or the people who claim ownership
    moan and bitch, flip the split
    attached to an attaché
    flash grenade
    smash and grab
    over-complicate simplicities
    unimpressed by technology
    discredited Tesla, now agenda?
    blend in with the crowd
    give speech but not freedom to be proud
    Edison's eye brow seen on paper currency
    while they switch currents and feed greedy
    empty shells, hollow molds hold no souls
    you only lose a little blood crushing coals
    never had a heart, inhumane element
    video footage lighting up an elephant
    it's irrelevant, history never repeats?
    same old new strains of disease
    Westinghouse testing grounds
    throw em into the fire and watch em drown

    ~Canon~
    ~2011~
  • IdrisIdris Posts: 2,317
    Dang Dang wrote:
    Dear VoidOfMan,

    This thread has 19 pieces of your work in it and has received 699 views. That's only averaging about 37 views for each piece. This stuff deserves more exposure. Please don't worry at all about "spamming up this forum with new threads". In my opinion, this forum needs the impact of individual posts, especially those as well-written as your colllection.

    Sincerely,

    Half (of Four) Full (Cents)

    I agree, Void, you write some top stuff. Keep at it bro, :ugeek:
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    I ain't a pimp, hustler, thug, Crip or Blood, Latin King or mobster from Sicily
    What I is is one of the sickest lyricists to exist this side of Tripoli
    I write on mirrors backwards equations that stump dyslexic physicists
    Delete explicits, are they really illicit? Implying I'm implicit? Double knits
    Reverse split, forfeit your corporate benefits for another tidbit of misinformation
    Disservice, this verse is mad nervous it can't find some sort of correlation
    Dispersed through the universal, reverse roles and usurp the game's throne
    In an unnamed inane king's dream of a newly chiseled gravestone

    Socks with sandals, douchee and gabbanna, polo shorts are laughable
    Sword and staff, you fell, got attacked by half a bull
    You're more mooved by something that's attached to a cowbell
    You have a harder time getting up than the giraffe that fell

    I took my thoughts everywhere I went
    I took them to bars and full moon parties
    Hunched over, out of shape, get bent
    Like a down's syndrome midget late you're a little tardy
    Reason I say more than one subject is because this is boring
    I have a thousand eyes that see everything on these angel wings
    I don't just pinch, this scorpion stings
    You were given away like an orphaned thing
    Nine months after an unimportant fling

    We may start the race in a juxtaposition
    But believe me when I say I leave you decommisioned
    In an alley way you need a new clear vision
    Seven ten splitting more atoms than nuclear fission
    Like rolling in bowling I'm knockin' them down competition
    Like a protest in West Bank I'm rockin' the crowd ammunition
    And making the food market crash like they was the Dow Jones dietitian
    In addition, you're in an unenviable position bent over in front of a known physician

    ~What I Is~
    ~2011~
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