The Void

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  • Idris
    Idris Posts: 2,317
    Dang Dang wrote:
    Dear VoidOfMan,

    This thread has 19 pieces of your work in it and has received 699 views. That's only averaging about 37 views for each piece. This stuff deserves more exposure. Please don't worry at all about "spamming up this forum with new threads". In my opinion, this forum needs the impact of individual posts, especially those as well-written as your colllection.

    Sincerely,

    Half (of Four) Full (Cents)

    I agree, Void, you write some top stuff. Keep at it bro, :ugeek:
  • voidofman
    voidofman Posts: 4,009
    I ain't a pimp, hustler, thug, Crip or Blood, Latin King or mobster from Sicily
    What I is is one of the sickest lyricists to exist this side of Tripoli
    I write on mirrors backwards equations that stump dyslexic physicists
    Delete explicits, are they really illicit? Implying I'm implicit? Double knits
    Reverse split, forfeit your corporate benefits for another tidbit of misinformation
    Disservice, this verse is mad nervous it can't find some sort of correlation
    Dispersed through the universal, reverse roles and usurp the game's throne
    In an unnamed inane king's dream of a newly chiseled gravestone

    Socks with sandals, douchee and gabbanna, polo shorts are laughable
    Sword and staff, you fell, got attacked by half a bull
    You're more mooved by something that's attached to a cowbell
    You have a harder time getting up than the giraffe that fell

    I took my thoughts everywhere I went
    I took them to bars and full moon parties
    Hunched over, out of shape, get bent
    Like a down's syndrome midget late you're a little tardy
    Reason I say more than one subject is because this is boring
    I have a thousand eyes that see everything on these angel wings
    I don't just pinch, this scorpion stings
    You were given away like an orphaned thing
    Nine months after an unimportant fling

    We may start the race in a juxtaposition
    But believe me when I say I leave you decommisioned
    In an alley way you need a new clear vision
    Seven ten splitting more atoms than nuclear fission
    Like rolling in bowling I'm knockin' them down competition
    Like a protest in West Bank I'm rockin' the crowd ammunition
    And making the food market crash like they was the Dow Jones dietitian
    In addition, you're in an unenviable position bent over in front of a known physician

    ~What I Is~
    ~2011~

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