Sanctuary

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  • tremors wrote:
    Eternal instability
    The fear of the fear
    Gyroscopic tendency
    Nothing more clear
    Flee and surrender?
    Retreat and retract
    A fool's game if ever
    there was one to crack
    Assume and be stable
    Head for the light
    It's the demons are shaking
    Let them quake tonight
    Take courage from something
    Courage from hope
    And forever simple,
    Thank god that you've coped


    one of your best yet!
    absolutely beautiful, amazing
    needed it today, completely relate, identify
    you continually blow me away tremors
  • voidofmanvoidofman Posts: 4,009
    tremors wrote:
    Eternal instability...

    This reminds me a lot of how I used to write (and still do sometimes)

    I love this kind of stuff, it's so abstract yet meshes so well on so many levels.

    :mrgreen:
  • mysticweedmysticweed Posts: 3,710
    the soft parade

    "can you give me sanctuary
    i must find a place to hide
    a place for me to hide

    can you find me soft asylum
    i can't make it any more
    the man is at
    the
    door"
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    thank god that you've coped

    that line hits it for me
    peace,
    jo

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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Thanks guys! Thanks so much for all the feedback.

    I feel sanctuary is complete now. This is as far as I can take it. I will try and keep writing, but maybe from some slightly different places.

    Love you all!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • tremors wrote:
    Thanks guys! Thanks so much for all the feedback.

    I feel sanctuary is complete now. This is as far as I can take it. I will try and keep writing, but maybe from some slightly different places.

    Love you all!


    honestly, Sanctuary has been very inspirational to me
    the way you write, the style
    the words are beautiful
    you've helped me to cope with some of the emotions and situations i've been through recently tremors
    thanks for sharing with us

    can't wait to read some new stuff
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    tremors wrote:
    Thanks guys! Thanks so much for all the feedback.

    I feel sanctuary is complete now. This is as far as I can take it. I will try and keep writing, but maybe from some slightly different places.

    Love you all!


    honestly, Sanctuary has been very inspirational to me
    the way you write, the style
    the words are beautiful
    you've helped me to cope with some of the emotions and situations i've been through recently tremors
    thanks for sharing with us

    can't wait to read some new stuff

    Wow, thanks electricxlovex - that means a lot to me, probably more than you would guess. I have started a new thread, and starting writing from a different starting point. I'm not sure I've got the hang of it yet though!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

    lettherecordsplay1x.gif?t=1377796878
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