drug and alcohol abuse poetry

chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
edited November 2013 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
days daze
they been melting away
i don’t remember

i don’t remember
new shoes…
so holy now
shuffling away trying
sidewalks’ holes are veins

existence eats away concrete and steel
from my throat and dope
while the salvation army feeds
all the lost undead
needing living
for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."

Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    "Holy now!"...days/daze

    Hey! haha

    rocks
    and steel
    taken for granite
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    some people should be ran over with a ocean liner delivering marshmallows.
    some people think i am glorifying the derelict lifestyle.
    it's a god damn poem, what the fuck??????
    supposedly i am not honoring those who have the strength and whatnot to get and stay clean.

    fuck off.
    pm me more stupid shit about this and im gonna send a atom bomb to your address.

    i love almost everyone.
    im sorry society has hardcore drug addicts and alcoholics trippin balls amongst others.

    next poem titled... AA & the blow job every wednesday night.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    chadwick wrote:
    ...

    next poem titled... AA & the blow job every wednesday night.

    am waiting in excited anticipation for this. :mrgreen:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    acid in a mirror
    funny years ago
    rebel for freedom
    my youth spoke volumes
    hey, any mota??and handed him a twenty
    waited 30 minutes and he never came back
    Insane--two meanings
    Beehar and Dirthead--funniest fuckin' guys I ever met
    The memories are spinning now
    The daze/days needed to end
    (the fun actually stopped a long time ago)
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    runaway wrote:
    acid in a mirror
    funny years ago
    rebel for freedom
    my youth spoke volumes
    hey, any mota??and handed him a twenty
    waited 30 minutes and he never came back
    Insane--two meanings
    Beehar and Dirthead--funniest fuckin' guys I ever met
    The memories are spinning now
    The daze/days needed to end
    (the fun actually stopped a long time ago)
    rock on.
    love it
    love u

    nicely done
    this is inspiring acid & shrooms days back in the day
    hold on to your nuts
    you're about to fry
    :mrgreen: :twisted:
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    chadwick wrote:
    ...

    next poem titled... AA & the blow job every wednesday night.

    am waiting in excited anticipation for this. :mrgreen:
    how do i write it?
    never written porn poetry much :think: :lolno: :twisted:

    she was a drug & alcohol dependency counselor
    i was one of many i’m sure
    cross addictions
    problems with law-way

    she would lay herself
    with everything open
    into my hands
    sliding herself on top of my hard jeans

    whiskey, weed,
    tweekin’ balls got me here
    she’s my drug counselor
    i’m fucking her brains loose after every wednesday night’s meeting.

    we’re in the church basement
    she’s the oral queen showing me god
    spinnin’ saintly rooms of sweat
    no air
    she kisses me like poison

    i would taste her open pours
    thighs all wet before me
    her firm diamond
    a grape
    my mouth to love

    next wednesday
    i’ll be late for the next substance abuse class
    but that’s cool and stuff
    i’m fucking the counselor’s brains loose
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    shes the oral queen showing me god

    love it!

    :lol::lol::lol::clap::clap::clap:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    it seems chad has found his calling... for wednesday nights

    :lol::mrgreen::clap:
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
    ........
    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • mikalinamikalina Posts: 7,206
    Wow Chad, this is pretty powerful stuff....

    You've never written porn poetry ?? I have to admit - you're very good at it !!! 8-)

    This should give you some ideas for your next book.... ;)
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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    chadwick wrote:
    she was a drug & alcohol dependency counselor
    i was one of many i’m sure

    Chadwick,

    I always thought your poetry was in a league of its own,
    But this one really takes the grape..CAKE, I mean cake. :shock:


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  • hard
    ...deep inside the core

    sex, drugs
    where's the rock n roll

    fuck it, you're good
  • chadwick wrote:
    fuck off.
    pm me more stupid shit about this and im gonna send a atom bomb to your address.

    and you just let me know if you need anything... just kidding ;)
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    i’ll remove it
    down through the floor
    right down beside the bed
    no more walking
    or standing there
    now throw it all away
    more bile drips

    a box of fluid falls steady and fast
    straight through my worlds
    down at bedside’s illness
    as doctors fold
    as if cards or arms
    giant glass buildings

    no tools do i see
    nor feel
    only my wounds
    only my wounds
    they weep
    they weep all my stuff

    all my stuff
    fallen
    now empty floors of balloons
    sailing soft
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    Elaborately tethered
    indulgence
    the onslaught doped onward
    repeated maintenance is fortune
    both gained and lost
    destroying lives
    both ends scream

    Just shoot it
    let it be
    bang the prize
    bring it home
    just take the moon-ride-home
    it only takes seconds

    Sounds always through the woods
    each tree an amp, apple or pinecone
    slowly guitars fly as if squirrels dancing canopy to canopy
    I under the music as if swimming above fish
    yet I am standing under forests
    among foliage
    the way to live
    the way to comfortably
    destroy self

    As I get on the fire
    bringing the flame down
    rolling the pin
    shattering dreams
    the lace dove takes me away

    It’s just the audible
    the hearing
    the beautiful ring
    all fades the landing
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    I do it to myself everytime
    thoughts that come about
    ...you are horrible
    when will I conquer you
    You have always helped
    now depressed...
    WTF>'
    If only I would stay away from you
    If only you would stay away from me
    I love you,...but hate you as well
    Fuck me,...no fuck you!!
    You no longer work for me....
    back in the rooms...how long will
    that last
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    runaway wrote:
    I do it to myself everytime
    thoughts that come about
    ...you are horrible
    when will I conquer you
    You have always helped
    now depressed...
    WTF>'
    If only I would stay away from you
    If only you would stay away from me
    I love you,...but hate you as well
    Fuck me,...no fuck you!!
    You no longer work for me....
    back in the rooms...how long will
    that last

    i know
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    runaway wrote:
    I do it to myself everytime
    thoughts that come about
    ...you are horrible
    when will I conquer you
    You have always helped
    now depressed...
    WTF>'
    If only I would stay away from you
    If only you would stay away from me
    I love you,...but hate you as well
    Fuck me,...no fuck you!!
    You no longer work for me....
    back in the rooms...how long will
    that last


    The poems in this thread are too good for words! shit-hot, every single one of em. Maybe try one of my own around midnight. The witching hour seems to bring the best lines out of me
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    You said neck it
    You said smoke it
    You said sniff it
    We said mass
    We cried
    You never once did that
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    tremors wrote:
    You said neck it
    You said smoke it
    You said sniff it
    We said mass
    We cried
    You never once did that
    love it

    thank you for your writings.
    i enjoy your work.

    the witching hour may just be your hour
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    chadwick wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    You said neck it
    You said smoke it
    You said sniff it
    We said mass
    We cried
    You never once did that
    love it

    thank you for your writings.
    i enjoy your work.

    the witching hour may just be your hour


    Thanks - there are some superb poets on this board - and you are one of them - must be in the water!!

    Actually it's 8.30pm here - just got inspired to write something from what I've been reading. My head is reeling a bit now though - those 6 lines were a bit like a fast forward through 15 years....
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    part (IV)

    tearin skin
    my skin
    tearin skin
    laughin alone

    why i gotta be someone else
    why i gotta hide off

    hide off
    tearin skin
    my skin
    tearin skin

    i don’t know why
    leave me alone
    don’t know why
    leave me alone
    leave me alone

    pain everyday
    rippin me apart
    i don’t
    i don’t

    my pills
    pills
    the fire inside
    fire inside
    i don’t know

    so much hurts
    so much hurts am i
    hurts

    skin torn about
    apart
    torn bone apart bone

    bones grind miserably
    endless everywhere
    everything inside
    tearin apart
    torn whiskey
    torn pills pull apart
    don’t know who to be
    who am I
    don’t know
    don’t know

    leave me alone
    leave me be
    cross your heart
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Chip McFlenniganChip McFlennigan Posts: 1,162
    edited May 2012
    ......
    Post edited by Chip McFlennigan on
    I knew it all along, see?
  • runawayrunaway Posts: 427
    Let me tell you something
    You, you bring up a rage in me
    I turn to something to take me
    out of the rage
    It turns out to kill me
    I get sick every day
    but I don't want to think
    Do you understand?
    I don't want to think
    Feel, no, not feelings
    they come around 45 days of sober time
    hate them, the horror
    the pain,
    if sobriety was good
    everyonoe would be doing it
    but the ones in the rooms with smiles and laughter
    how do you get that?
    by going through the pain that I don't
    want to endure
    Music is the universal language
    What's better than a cigar? Ed with a sitar
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    runaway wrote:
    Let me tell you something
    You, you bring up a rage in me
    I turn to something to take me
    out of the rage
    It turns out to kill me
    I get sick every day
    but I don't want to think
    Do you understand?
    I don't want to think
    Feel, no, not feelings
    they come around 45 days of sober time
    hate them, the horror
    the pain,
    if sobriety was good
    everyonoe would be doing it
    but the ones in the rooms with smiles and laughter
    how do you get that?
    by going through the pain that I don't
    want to endure


    Very powerful - very strong poem - thanks
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    chadwick wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    ...

    next poem titled... AA & the blow job every wednesday night.

    am waiting in excited anticipation for this. :mrgreen:
    how do i write it?
    never written porn poetry much :think: :lolno: :twisted:

    she was a drug & alcohol dependency counselor
    i was one of many i’m sure
    cross addictions
    problems with law-way

    she would lay herself
    with everything open
    into my hands
    sliding herself on top of my hard jeans

    whiskey, weed,
    tweekin’ balls got me here
    she’s my drug counselor
    i’m fucking her brains loose after every wednesday night’s meeting.

    we’re in the church basement
    she’s the oral queen showing me god
    spinnin’ saintly rooms of sweat
    no air
    she kisses me like poison

    i would taste her open pours
    thighs all wet before me
    her firm diamond
    a grape
    my mouth to love

    next wednesday
    i’ll be late for the next substance abuse class
    but that’s cool and stuff
    i’m fucking the counselor’s brains loose
    my bullshit writing is still alive
    it is not deleted

    thank you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Sorry if I've started any blasphemous rumours!! I was just plain wrong - thanks god nobody would have the indecency to delete this poem!!

    God bless chadwick and his eloquent exploration of the fucking of the drugs counsellor!!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    tremors wrote:
    Sorry if I've started any blasphemous rumours!! I was just plain wrong - thanks god nobody would have the indecency to delete this poem!!

    God bless chadwick and his eloquent exploration of the fucking of the drugs counsellor!!
    you are not wrong and you are wonderful
    love you tremors

    thank you
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Why can't the whole world be like the PJ poetry forum dammit?
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • idon'tbelieveinlies
    butthetruth'sabitdry
    ineedtogethigh
    andprayidon'tlie

    here's to drug and alcohol abuse
    chadwickstyle
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