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  • Porcelain doll

    little girl, all blonde with your eyes
    sitting in a conner
    dead in your life
    playing with the porcelain doll...

    pretty features portrayed in black paint
    reddest lips never able to frown
    flawless pale skin, hard to the touch
    this girl has never loved something so much...

    except for her daddy
    who' yells and screams
    whos hostile outburts haunts her dreams.
    who scares the monsters under her bed
    and sings sweet songs til shes sleeping in bed

    Now look at the doll perched on your shelf
    slouched and dirty,
    black featuures smudged
    pretty red lips cracked and worn
    and the flawless skin chipped and cold...

    you look back to the last day
    she threw down her porcelain doll
    and stalked away
    her rebelious smile
    lost in time
    as you drift off into thoughts...
    'shelooks like her mother but her personality is mine'
    you break down and begin to cry

    dont throw this porcelian treasure
    like you did the vase
    dont llet it break
    like you did her
    a fragile hard self
    shattered to pieces so sharp
    theycut threw skin...

    whats left remains in the porcelain doll
    its more than whats left in her
    you betrayed her, you did
    let her fall down that hole

    little girl, perfect and crisp
    her face plainly marked with innocence...
    and because of you
    it fades into
    the last picture in your head...
    of your beloved daughter, now dead.
    the last spark of life you ran out of her,
    black hair down her back
    red lips bleeding harsh profanities
    and eyes...
    dead eyes...
    of a porcelain doll...
    black makeup smudged away...
    sorrowful tears the wiped away
    the pale perfection of the porcelain doll.
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    Porcelain doll

    little girl, all blonde with your eyes
    sitting in a conner
    dead in your life
    playing with the porcelain doll...

    .....

    you write entirely beyond your years

    (you should go ahead and put this out there in a thread by itself)
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Yes, that is a really really good poem pearljamfan-1997
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Porcelain doll

    little girl, all blonde with your eyes
    sitting in a conner
    dead in your life
    playing with the porcelain doll...

    pretty features portrayed in black paint
    reddest lips never able to frown
    flawless pale skin, hard to the touch
    this girl has never loved something so much...

    except for her daddy
    who' yells and screams
    whos hostile outburts haunts her dreams.
    who scares the monsters under her bed
    and sings sweet songs til shes sleeping in bed

    Now look at the doll perched on your shelf
    slouched and dirty,
    black featuures smudged
    pretty red lips cracked and worn
    and the flawless skin chipped and cold...

    you look back to the last day
    she threw down her porcelain doll
    and stalked away
    her rebelious smile
    lost in time
    as you drift off into thoughts...
    'shelooks like her mother but her personality is mine'
    you break down and begin to cry

    dont throw this porcelian treasure
    like you did the vase
    dont llet it break
    like you did her
    a fragile hard self
    shattered to pieces so sharp
    theycut threw skin...

    whats left remains in the porcelain doll
    its more than whats left in her
    you betrayed her, you did
    let her fall down that hole

    little girl, perfect and crisp
    her face plainly marked with innocence...
    and because of you
    it fades into
    the last picture in your head...
    of your beloved daughter, now dead.
    the last spark of life you ran out of her,
    black hair down her back
    red lips bleeding harsh profanities
    and eyes...
    dead eyes...
    of a porcelain doll...
    black makeup smudged away...
    sorrowful tears the wiped away
    the pale perfection of the porcelain doll.
    Lovely and sad ... submit it somewhere! :clap:
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pandora wrote:
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    The colors of autumn,
    red yellow gold and orange,
    hues of a last hoorah.
    My birds they flock to leave behind
    notes of their final song.


    Ghosts of days past
    crunch beneath my feet.
    Days when a walk in the woods
    could free me.

    Simple tasks and simple wishes
    now gently float to the ground.
    They lie at my feet, out of reach,
    only to wither and die.


    I hear the song, I hum along
    my song of past loves and wants.
    Like nourishment in a ghostly form,
    ghosts of my days passed.

    Pandora,

    I like this picture and the words you wrote for it. :)
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    3980013280_b7e16fab88.jpg


    The colors of autumn,
    red yellow gold and orange,
    hues of a last hoorah.
    My birds they flock to leave behind
    notes of their final song.


    Ghosts of days past
    crunch beneath my feet.
    Days when a walk in the woods
    could free me.

    Simple tasks and simple wishes
    now gently float to the ground.
    They lie at my feet, out of reach,
    only to wither and die.


    I hear the song, I hum along
    my song of past loves and wants.
    Like nourishment in a ghostly form,
    ghosts of my days passed.

    Pandora,

    I like this picture and the words you wrote for it. :)
    thanks very much, justam ... it is a pretty picture, yes,...
    and a road I'd like to take :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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    Crying to the Sky


    to all those I have loved

    I cry

    the moments I have cherished

    I cry

    for some I have not known

    I cry


    and for the gifts of others


    through my gains and losses

    I cry

    with the aching too

    I cry

    learning all the pain

    I cry

    loneliness and shame

    I cry

    loving is what saves

    I cry


    my soul to continue


    reaching to the sky

    I cry

    begging for forgiveness

    I cry

    longing for my others

    I cry

    I am coming home

    I cry


    I am coming home
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    THERE


    smokey.jpg
    I remember you from always even before I knew you were there

    the hushed voice under all others
    a swoosh and a breath
    I knew your words
    while doubting my own

    you were there

    the shooting star
    in the corner of my eye
    a mistaken movement
    a side glance with deep eyes

    you were there

    as sure as a sunrise and a sunset
    starts and ends each day

    as sure as love lasts forever
    and is ours to keep at least until then

    you were there

    I remember your love from always even before I knew it was there
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Wishing-1.jpg
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    pandora wrote:
    Wishing-1.jpg


    "I moon you."

    "I moon you too."
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Rollings wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Wishing-1.jpg


    "I moon you."

    "I moon you too."
    this was a nice surprise! :D
    thanks!!

    what really came to mind what I wanted to say was
    I cherish you!
    but that sounded corny
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    pandora wrote:
    Rollings wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Wishing-1.jpg


    "I moon you."

    "I moon you too."
    this was a nice surprise! :D
    thanks!!

    what really came to mind what I wanted to say was
    I cherish you! but that sounded corny

    What I originally wanted to say was:


    "You're kind of weighty for a fairy. You're putting alot of strain on my tip"

    "I won't be long. My pants are in the dryer"

    "Oh. Okay."
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Wishing-1.jpg

    Celestial Dee Light

    I happened upon a woman
    with wildly golden hair
    spun in curls and waves
    seemingly lit from the inside

    She smiled at me as I gazed in glass
    I knew that I'd been blessed
    her hand held mine within our heart
    this magic was our own

    The tears they fell from
    fields of green
    specked gold and brown
    they reign

    Her lips then moved with words of old
    'Be warm and soft and gentle be'
    she whispered on our path

    heavenly is what she was
    and Heaven she'll return
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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    "Ride a little pony ride to town . . . Ride a little pony don't fall down"

    I am busy at the kitchen sink,
    her still small voice trails over to me

    "Mama this place is wonderful"

    I turn to look . . .'huh?'

    "Home Mama, your home is so wonderful, beautiful, really,
    it really is. It's like heaven."

    She is raiding the pantry, munching from a can of mixed nuts,
    surely choosing my favorites. I smile.

    Turning back to the sink I am hit with a memory,
    the moment rewinds 20 years.
    She is on a small step stool next to me,

    'washing' the dishes.

    Her thick golden hair, dampened, hangs ponytail style.
    Tiny hands covered in bubbles, she blows them off,
    they float gently back into the dishpan.

    Her toothless grin meets my smile.

    A little apron tied at her waist is soaked, drenched through,
    Cookie Monster's face in his familiar forever smile,

    drips water to the floor.

    Giggling she says, "Mama can we play pony after this?"
    She begins to hum the tune.
    The last words echo in my thoughts,

    'don't fall down.'

    Back to this moment, my daughter all grown,
    she stands before me,
    a small whispered prayer . . . 'don't fall down'

    then the hushed words
    'You are Home baby girl . . . you are Home to me'
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    jigsaw.jpg


    Lies

    one day
    the clarity of my life and all those in it
    will be mine to know

    like a puzzle finally complete
    a picture it will make

    true spirits
    are the green valleys
    blue skies sunflowers
    birds in flight against puffy white clouds

    all the beauty in my picture
    they will make

    lies from the dishonest
    form the grey clouds
    a fog that hangs over the beauty
    that could have been seen
    should have been seen
    but for the fear we will never know

    my picture
    obscured by lies
    but knows the truth
    formed less than beautiful
    then mine to keep

  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Been reading back through this thread - there is some great stuff here - I particularly liked this one
    pandora wrote:
    THERE


    smokey.jpg
    I remember you from always even before I knew you were there

    the hushed voice under all others
    a swoosh and a breath
    I knew your words
    while doubting my own

    you were there

    the shooting star
    in the corner of my eye
    a mistaken movement
    a side glance with deep eyes

    you were there

    as sure as a sunrise and a sunset
    starts and ends each day

    as sure as love lasts forever
    and is ours to keep at least until then

    you were there

    I remember your love from always even before I knew it was there
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    Been reading back through this thread - there is some great stuff here - I particularly liked this one
    pandora wrote:
    THERE


    smokey.jpg
    I remember you from always even before I knew you were there

    the hushed voice under all others
    a swoosh and a breath
    I knew your words
    while doubting my own

    you were there

    the shooting star
    in the corner of my eye
    a mistaken movement
    a side glance with deep eyes

    you were there

    as sure as a sunrise and a sunset
    starts and ends each day

    as sure as love lasts forever
    and is ours to keep at least until then

    you were there

    I remember your love from always even before I knew it was there
    Hey thanks tremors, for the time spent and the praise ...
    means a lot to me

    this came from faith,
    at a time when I needed to reinforce, remind and embrace what is mine...
    always mine.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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    Cruel World


    Who are these people? . . . without a kind word

    Who are these people? . . . thinking humans weak

    Who are these people? . . . preying upon others

    Who are these people? . . . living lives for greed

    Who are these people? . . . teaching their young to bully

    Who are these people? . . . profiting from addiction

    Who are these people? . . . raping our children

    Who are these people? . . . spewing criticism and hate

    Who are these people? . . . creating this cruel world




    Who? Who? Who? Who! . . . raise your hand if it is you!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    reflection in a shadow

    i awoke this morning to a lovely shadow on the wall
    intricate branches of a tree outside
    with a few lasting leaves fluttering in a breeze
    i could not feel i could not hear
    i lay mesmerized watching the shadow in fleeting moments

    we had a short time together

    i raised my hand to see it small amongst the leaves
    i moved it with the breeze
    that i could not feel that i could not hear

    i felt separate yet apart changing yet the same fleeting yet lasting

    in a moment in forever i am a reflection in a shadow
  • 3980013280_b7e16fab88.jpg
    (I wrote this after reading the "colors of autumn" thread, actually, thanks for the lovely pictures Pandora, I think they really do stir something)

    Yellow leaves on my window
    Remind me that you’re gone.
    Wet leaves under my feet
    Tell sad tales of love rotting away
    Boughs towering high in shades of gold
    Shine bright on my empty sighs
    Dead leaves on my threshold
    Blown in on the same wind that blew you gone

    Frost on heather time has stopped
    My heart ran out of beats when my eyes ran out of tears
    Flow, river flow, run over my burning skin
    The leaves washed away are never seen again

    Moss on trees thick and dark
    My heart has grown so hard
    The lines on bark tell a story that is hard to read
    As my fingers become number
    Streams trickle by whispering the tale
    Of how you slid like sand through my hands
    Ripples on water a mirror to my deserted soul
    I keep staring in hoping you will appear again.

    I’ll sit again under the fire-leaved tree
    While the frost bites at me
    Wondering what I did that made you
    Ever want to love me

    Should I follow the road
    Or step deeper in the dark woods?
    Should I follow you and beg you to give me back my love?
    Should I let the river take me where it may
    Wash me of all my pain
    Wash away my memories?
    I wish it gave me another glimpse of you
    But all I see are blotches of me

    I’ll sit again under the fire-leaved tree
    While the frost bites at me
    Wondering what I did that made you
    Want to leave me
    Pearl Jam+ Social Distortion, dear God, please make this happen again!!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    3980013280_b7e16fab88.jpg
    (I wrote this after reading the "colors of autumn" thread, actually, thanks for the lovely pictures Pandora, I think they really do stir something)

    Yellow leaves on my window
    Remind me that you’re gone.
    Wet leaves under my feet
    Tell sad tales of love rotting away
    Boughs towering high in shades of gold
    Shine bright on my empty sighs
    Dead leaves on my threshold
    Blown in on the same wind that blew you gone

    Frost on heather time has stopped
    My heart ran out of beats when my eyes ran out of tears
    Flow, river flow, run over my burning skin
    The leaves washed away are never seen again

    Moss on trees thick and dark
    My heart has grown so hard
    The lines on bark tell a story that is hard to read
    As my fingers become number
    Streams trickle by whispering the tale
    Of how you slid like sand through my hands
    Ripples on water a mirror to my deserted soul
    I keep staring in hoping you will appear again.

    I’ll sit again under the fire-leaved tree
    While the frost bites at me
    Wondering what I did that made you
    Ever want to love me

    Should I follow the road
    Or step deeper in the dark woods?
    Should I follow you and beg you to give me back my love?
    Should I let the river take me where it may
    Wash me of all my pain
    Wash away my memories?
    I wish it gave me another glimpse of you
    But all I see are blotches of me

    I’ll sit again under the fire-leaved tree
    While the frost bites at me
    Wondering what I did that made you
    Want to leave me
    oh your words made my heart break

    very well written.... I see from your words

    I feel from them too ...the loss

    makes me long for springtime and the hope of a new beginning
    for us both

    thank you for sharing this means a lot to me
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Vision

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    as we walk upon
    the
    water

    wave and shimmer and shine
    the
    water

    shine upon the path
    the
    water


    Dark-Clouds-1.jpg

    dark clouds form above
    the
    water

    clouds in the west threaten
    the
    water

    light in the east reflects
    the
    water

    as we walk upon
    the
    water


    lightning3-1-1.jpg

    electric sizzle hits
    the
    water

    into the heart flows
    the
    water

    fearless the vision from
    the
    water

    as we walk upon
    the
    water
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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    It's Christmastime Again


    your words sweet
    like candy canes
    swirled in hot chocolate

    steam forms against our pressed lips
    another sugary kiss
    melt me into you

    our gaze reflects in tinsel
    this years tree
    twinkles with secret treasures
    wrapped in years of gold

    twinkle in my heart
    and yours in my hand
    light our memories of old

    hum for me another merry tune
    replay it in your smile
    let it dance there
    and embrace me

    move us through the years
    our lifetime love

    it's another Christmas my love

    It's Christmastime Again
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Our Thirty Two Trees of Love

    Sitting in front of the fire
    this year's tree keeps me company.

    I close my eyes, hold the tears,
    it's always so easy to cry.

    The tears come happy, grateful too,
    no sadness here I feel.

    They wet my smile and make me laugh
    then take me through the years.

    Thirty two trees are there for me,
    a pine forest of freshness and green.

    You my love are by my side
    thirty two trees to feel.

    We have picked and placed, covered in lights,
    the bubbles keep time in my mind.

    Each ornament hung, a story, a first,
    new memories we've made, now keep.

    Thirty two trees stand strong and real
    a wonderment renewed each year.

    And in these trees we believe . . .

    Our Thirty Two Trees of Love
  • pandora wrote:
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    Cruel World


    Who are these people? . . . without a kind word

    Who are these people? . . . thinking humans weak

    Who are these people? . . . preying upon others

    Who are these people? . . . living lives for greed

    Who are these people? . . . teaching their young to bully

    Who are these people? . . . profiting from addiction

    Who are these people? . . . raping our children

    Who are these people? . . . spewing criticism and hate

    Who are these people? . . . creating this cruel world




    Who? Who? Who? Who! . . . raise your hand if it is you!
    I love it, i wish i had your talent :D
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    pandora wrote:
    abstract-wallpapers_00059.jpg



    Cruel World


    Who are these people? . . . without a kind word

    Who are these people? . . . thinking humans weak

    Who are these people? . . . preying upon others

    Who are these people? . . . living lives for greed

    Who are these people? . . . teaching their young to bully

    Who are these people? . . . profiting from addiction

    Who are these people? . . . raping our children

    Who are these people? . . . spewing criticism and hate

    Who are these people? . . . creating this cruel world




    Who? Who? Who? Who! . . . raise your hand if it is you!
    I love it, i wish i had your talent :D
    as I remember you are way more talented with your writings than I ...
    please share some more :D

    I remember the morning I wrote that the anger was all gone what was left was
    a feeling of defeat. My arms body weak from the assault....
    the disappointment, sadness, horror.

    If you let yourself feel this world sometimes you just want to leave it.
    The thought to much to bear what people can do to each other.
  • 7RayZ7RayZ Posts: 488
    The thing is is that it doesnt have to be so painful here.

    Its a shit shame the way people treat each other.

    Always move with the purest of heart and actions.

    Acts of loving kindness are never forgotten, despite others actions around you.

    Purity in this manner cannot ever be defeated.

    After that, bad actions can only be reconciled by those who committed them.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    7RayZ wrote:
    The thing is is that it doesnt have to be so painful here.

    Its a shit shame the way people treat each other.

    Always move with the purest of heart and actions.

    Acts of loving kindness are never forgotten, despite others actions around you.

    Purity in this manner cannot ever be defeated.

    After that, bad actions can only be reconciled by those who committed them.
    kind positive words to live by

    thank you
  • 7RayZ7RayZ Posts: 488
    You're welcome.

    Its a good way to live.

    You cant help the world is full of mean greedy dumb theiving pricks.

    What you can do is ignore them, know you are responsible for your own actions and move your life in the best way possible.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    7RayZ wrote:
    You're welcome.

    Its a good way to live.

    You cant help the world is full of mean greedy dumb theiving pricks.

    What you can do is ignore them, know you are responsible for your own actions and move your life in the best way possible.
    Logical words

    I feel too much ... not something I want to turn off even if I could.
    Feeling is an amazing power ...
    a connection to the the soul and therefore the universe.
    Feeling is the future, that's my belief.
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