I got Laid off from work 2 weeks ago because i...

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  • Phil100981Phil100981 Posts: 131
    UpSideDown wrote:
    Interesting read, a pretty cool story overall.

    I am just confused over the money part.......can you clarify - you checked your bank accounts and had much more money than you expected?


    nah man hit the lottery
    You can spend your time alone, re-digesting past regrets
    Or you can come to terms and realize
    You're the only one who can't forgive yourself
    Makes much more sense, to live in the present tense

  • megatronmegatron Posts: 3,420
    Phil100981 wrote:
    jones wrote:
    That was the best run on sentence I've read. Did they have a white lady at the strip club ;)

    stay happy

    Hmmm A white lady at the strip bar yea about 90% of the dancers were white and it seemed like once they are in there. They don't seem like they want or can get out. :?: Yea i just kept typing and typing, I'll get better at interacting through the message baords that was my first post well actually my first rant that wont happen again I am sure. Unless you are into that whole run on sentence thing cause i can roll with the best of em if you need :twisted: them too,


    white lady = cocaine = run on rants
    :D
  • KinseyKinsey Posts: 197
    Dude, don't worry about the grammar or post structure. James Joyce and Jack Kerouac (to name two) both butchered the English language too, but nobody seems to mind too much.

    Nice story
    When we found the things we loved,
    They were crushed and dying in the dirt.
    We tried to pick up the pieces,
    And get away without getting hurt,
    But they caught us at the state line,
    And burned our cars in one last fight,
    And left us running burned and blind,
    Chasing something in the night.
  • DiRtYyELLoWoCeAnDiRtYyELLoWoCeAn Posts: 1,605
    Good story. Stay happy!
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  • JonnyPistachioJonnyPistachio Posts: 10,217
    Phil100981 wrote:
    Dancers need loving too you know.

    haha, yes they do.

    man, I love how you ramble because it makes lines like this so worth reading. But honestly, I can't bear to read anymore. Good luck with your redheaded stripper friend!
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  • Phil100981Phil100981 Posts: 131
    Phil100981 wrote:
    Dancers need loving too you know.

    haha, yes they do.

    man, I love how you ramble because it makes lines like this so worth reading. But honestly, I can't bear to read anymore. Good luck with your redheaded stripper friend!

    HAHA yes i did seem to just ramble and not give to much a damn about spelling or what not. HAHA and honestly now which this could make for a completely different story. I now have 3 girls that would like to be my "GF". Seroiusly I lose my job then girls wanna date me and not just dancers either.
    You can spend your time alone, re-digesting past regrets
    Or you can come to terms and realize
    You're the only one who can't forgive yourself
    Makes much more sense, to live in the present tense

  • Phil100981Phil100981 Posts: 131
    jones wrote:

    white lady = cocaine = run on rants
    :D


    Well if she had the cocaine she didn't share it with me. Just imagine this story if i was coked up.
    You can spend your time alone, re-digesting past regrets
    Or you can come to terms and realize
    You're the only one who can't forgive yourself
    Makes much more sense, to live in the present tense

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