my first attempt to make it home

ShynerShyner Posts: 140
let it go
set me free
off to a place
i need to be
home is a pit
surrounded by poets
with mathematical hearts
sounds is a good
place to start
home again
i'll be loving you
it's what i do
to make it through
the darkest night

home is a pit



where have all my friends gone
it seems like desolation
is a street i roam
blocked by words
without them unheard
when will we play
play as a child

love you all


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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    What is my gift
    I'd like to know
    To give it away
    And wait
    For nothing

    I am on my way
    I'd like to run
    For light is here
    And rain
    Is singing

    Meaningless
    Envelope
    Open for
    Elation

    Relationships sail
    Relationships fail
    Hail to the love co
    For freedom is thought

    Thanks for reading.
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 5
    Walking the road
    Got this soul
    Son shine on
    When I'm gone
    Too uncertain
    Can't relay wise
    Maybe someday
    Walking the road
    Speed of light
    Might as well be
    35 mph
    For we can't sustain
    The impact mundane
    Dear lord words
    They elude heart
    Son shine on
    When I'm gone
    I know someday
    A star I see
    Gone before realized
    Walking this road.

    Mundane should be insane.
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Pressure builds
    Grace spills
    Losing light
    Out of right
    Under serious pressure
    Under the microscope-
    Of my own mind
    Continuation
    Shattered by a loss
    What is the cost of-
    Losing my belly
    Which way to run
    The best place to hide
    Is inside
    My mind
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    it's all there
    the flowers i mean
    i brought everything
    all for you to do
    what you do
    and for you
    to be
    who you are
    eternally evolving
    stages of morph
    faith and trust
    in all you do
    for the flowers
    are true
    and with it
    i dance
    as a clown
    waiting for elation
    laughter
    it may subside
    it may have died
    i might be alone
    in this life
    at least
    i'm at home
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    many reasons to be me
    i'm shy
    i've been hit
    in the eye
    i got a shine on
    when i turned on
    the tunes
    the establishment
    has passed me by
    cause you see
    my eye is bruised
    somewhat tattooed
    i got the i ain't got the blues blues
    but i still love you
    i still think the room
    is lit up like christmas
    but no one comes around
    i'm the only clown
    in this
    forgotten town
    i'm down
    need to pull a 180
    to get back on the ground
    cause i'm falling
    brain turned into an
    anemometer









  • vogonpoetbythelakevogonpoetbythelake Posts: 1,044
    edited March 5
    thanks for sharing and may the winds keep you as you are... fresh and cool
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Thanks.

    As I try again
    To reach my friends
    I swim in the currents
    Unaware of the end
    It's creeping up on me
    Descending to touch
    I reach for the bottom
    Where could it be
    Lost in the sea
    Lost in the bluest
    Could it be just a dream

    Love you all
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Being alone
    Just being one
    Riverside
    Gravel road
    Alone
    Where to go
    No one there
    I'll just sleep
    Sad to think
    Alone
    And we will rejoice
    When the hour is bright
    We've got tonight
    I've gotta light
    Alone
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Sittin here
    Chillin
    Wish I was
    Swimming
    For I am a fish
    Out of water
    I better start
    I better stop
    I wish that I
    Could see time
    The gift of lift
    Rising up in ruins
    Rising up in love
    Is forever enough
    Does time bore me
    Will it bore me
    Let me bore you
    Stay and pray
    Spirits of one
    Going home now
    Not down
    Not out
    Relying
    On myself

    Love u all
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Journey into the past
    Took a drink of my own glass
    Thought I'd apologize
    The attitude was camouflaged
    In lies
    I found myself thinking
    Took some advice
    Now I am here
    The sand is flowing
    We have all this time
    Forever we have hope

  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Dry river is the brain
    Cells bouncing around
    It's insane
    Walk to the west
    West is the best
    Eastward route
    Leading me to the cold
    Took the road to alone
    Picture of light
    Echoes of the elevation
    Outta sight
    Outta mind
    Outta time
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    U make me wanna die
    U make me cry to wine
    But your gonna miss me when your gone
    U make me tired
    U make me expire
    But your gonna miss me when I'm gone
    Up up and away
    Ascending
    Low low to decay
    Descending

    U make me cower
    U make above me tower
    But your gonna miss me when your gone
    U make me hurt
    U are the first
    But your gonna miss me when I'm gone
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140

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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Lost in translation
    Hesitation waiting
    Running to the light
    Moving along
    Signals cross
    Signals cross
    Throughout night
    Running for freedom
    Always in my head
    Is there a better
    Place to rest
    Place to rest
    In debt to a drum
    In debt and numb
    Moving along
    Signals cross
    Place to rest
    Identity of the lion
    Chamber of dope
    Signals cross
    Moving along
    My place
    To rest
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 8

    shiyner


    the emptiness wraps itself
    around my neck
    something in what
    she never said
    warping the walls
    inside my brain
    reminding me
    of the infinite stains
    sharing a song
    to pass the time
    gave it all away
    now i'm blind
    apologies echo from mountaintops
    floating down onto the mops
    and declaring yesterdays jam a truth
    wish i was young enough to drop the youth



    structure be banned
    take my loving hand
    together we will burn
    the desolate streets
    and peace will resurrect
    all good deeds
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  • AnnafalkAnnafalk SwedenPosts: 3,062
    Thank you for sharing, your great poems enjoyed reading them :)
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 9
    Thank you.
    Can't think
    Can't feel
    Can't earn
    Can't steal
    What is real
    What is not
    Outer space
    All I got
    Cover burst
    Cover thirst
    Fire is made
    Born amazed
    Quiet oceans
    Quiet breeze
    Rise with kiss
    Or incubus
    Love is the key
    Hope I have a
    Love battery

    Shiyner
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 9
    heres my song its called hello world by shiyner

    Post edited by Shyner on
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skinPosts: 13,527
    These are WONDERFUL!
    I love it when words hung just right, Carry you into a different world. Excellent writing here Shyner.
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    The first rule of the ten club fight club is you don't talk about the ten club fight club!
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 12
    thanks.

    Pushing on through the cold
    Every breath I'm feeling older
    Race to the prize
    Pieces in a box

    Set me free set me free
    All I need is just to believe

    The cold air shatters glass
    Vocabulary evacuates a mac
    Race to the abandon
    Fields of joy

    Unfinished
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    River dry brain
    Escaping strain
    Heartbeat races
    Think I cracked my spine
    I really may have cracked my spine

    My heart sank
    Legs are numb
    Heartbeat races on
    And I think I may have cracked my spine

    i miss u
    i do
    i will
    miss u

    i always do




    river dry shakes
    escaping hell
    heartbeat braces
    think i might have died

    my heart shines
    i give u mine
    heartbeat keeping time
    and i think i might have died

    i miss u
    i do
    i will
    miss u

    i always do
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skinPosts: 13,527
    I love how you write'
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    The first rule of the ten club fight club is you don't talk about the ten club fight club!
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    edited March 13
    thanks !

    the light
    is bright
    it's alright
    to hide away
    i'll make my way
    away from here
    the current shifts
    the depth is this
    the light
    is bright
    it's alright
    to shine away
    i'll search for you
    away from here


    goodnight
    goodbye
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  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    Drifting further away
    Spirit not afraid
    Just another day
    Drifting further away
    Scenery of space
    Time sound of place

    I wish I could stay
    I wish we could play
    The elevated state
    Spirit not afraid
    Just another day
    Drifting further away

  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    I was driving
    Arrived on time
    I was flying
    It was Devine
    I was sailing
    Thought I'd drown
    But I'm still here
    Coming down

    I went walking
    Spent my keep
    Had no sorrow
    In too deep
    Ran to save life
    My iron lung died
    Thought I'd ride
    But the truth lied

    And here I am
    A distant second
    Third wheeling
    Drug dealing
    Stealing love
    If given
    I'll take
    Getaway
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    The bridges have crumbled to the ground
    The fire in the sky keeps my head down
    Just waiting for a change to reassure hope
    I might be waiting longer than I can cope
    The exit plays loud as a note
    From a message to a declaration
    I don't know

    Unfinished
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 140
    as i lay down my shivering begins
    where it started where it ends
    reach out like wingspan
    of the center
    falling down into a pit
    i'm a chicken tender

    as i fly away like a reindeer
    red as a bright light
    in the fog
    i will find my gift in the center
    holding you again
    holding on to friends

    the reality is death
    the answers are fatal
    the reality is clamped
    the answers are fatal
    the reality is dramatic
    the answers are fatal
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    very cool !
    it dosen't matter to me what a man dose for a living you understand..
    as long as his interest's don't conflict with mine.
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