something

do you remember me?
the tall one with the yellow flowers
the flowers in my hair and in my sigh
as I wait for you in the fields
tall grass
nobody knows we were there

the sun gave us away
it zig zagged that day
nobody noticed
but to the sky
the bells rung
How's the view from the fence?

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  • chadwickchadwick up my assPosts: 20,898
    wonderful
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • F Me In The BrainF Me In The Brain this knows everybody from other commetsPosts: 8,696
    I love the idea of "the sun gave us away"....the many images those words create in my mind are all fun/cool for me to get lost thinking about.
    Rob
    Seattle

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  • rollingsrollings unknownPosts: 6,650

    I love the idea of "the sun gave us away"....the many images those words create in my mind are all fun/cool for me to get lost thinking about.

    these are the best type of compliments , thank you , F me

    How's the view from the fence?
  • Jason78Jason78 Posts: 384
    love this
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,434
    Rollings you make me dream ! this is such a great poem, it takes me to places I can't explain, thanks' !

    Godfather.
    it dosen't matter to me what a man dose for a living you understand..
    as long as his interest's don't conflict with mine.
  • TalonTeddTalonTedd TorontoPosts: 711
    From your vision. We be the lucky
    I remember when, yeah. I swore I knew everything, oh yeah.
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 100
    Thanks.
  • whispering handswhispering hands Under your skinPosts: 13,118
    Beautiful!
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    The first rule of the ten club fight club is you don't talk about the ten club fight club!
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