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rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
do you remember me?
the tall one with the yellow flowers
the flowers in my hair and in my sigh
as I wait for you in the fields
tall grass
nobody knows we were there

the sun gave us away
it zig zagged that day
nobody noticed
but to the sky
the bells rung

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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    wonderful
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • F Me In The BrainF Me In The Brain Posts: 31,263
    I love the idea of "the sun gave us away"....the many images those words create in my mind are all fun/cool for me to get lost thinking about.
    The love he receives is the love that is saved
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    F Me In The Brain said:

    I love the idea of "the sun gave us away"....the many images those words create in my mind are all fun/cool for me to get lost thinking about.

    these are the best type of compliments , thank you , F me

  • Jason78Jason78 Posts: 400
    love this
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    Rollings you make me dream ! this is such a great poem, it takes me to places I can't explain, thanks' !

    Godfather.
  • TalonTeddTalonTedd Posts: 835
    From your vision. We be the lucky
    I remember when, yeah. I swore I knew everything, oh yeah.
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 1,226
    Thanks.
  • whispering handswhispering hands Posts: 13,527
    Beautiful!
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