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HughFreakingDillon
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on my mind every single day
my first thought to my last
all I find, other things to say
my wish is to go forward and fast
I must commit that I can't commit
the ultimate crime against the soul
to release it before it's ready
some things just take their toll
a fake smile and
an unfeeling kiss
a short while and
an unappealing bliss
outside love is nothing
when the inside is empty
just a shove into something
where never is plenty
my first thought to my last
all I find, other things to say
my wish is to go forward and fast
I must commit that I can't commit
the ultimate crime against the soul
to release it before it's ready
some things just take their toll
a fake smile and
an unfeeling kiss
a short while and
an unappealing bliss
outside love is nothing
when the inside is empty
just a shove into something
where never is plenty
Hugh Freaking Dillon is currently out of the office, returning sometime in the fall
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like itfor poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7
"Hear me, my chiefs!
I am tired; my heart is
sick and sad. From where
the sun stands I will fight
no more forever."
Chief Joseph - Nez Perce0 -
Very fitting for todayCalgary 04-09-2005
Edmonton 05-09-2005
"A Thousand Ports of light For the Newfoundland...Theres a Kinder gentler American Band"...EV 25/09/050 -
chadwick said:like it
(I don't even recall writing this)
you knew he wasn't just being nice, that he really honestly felt that way.Hugh Freaking Dillon is currently out of the office, returning sometime in the fall0 -
Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.
Good poem. I can relate.I was swimming in the Great Barrier Reef
Animals were hiding behind the Coral
Except for little Turtle
I could swear he's trying to talk to me
Gurgle Gurgle0 -
tish said:Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.
Good poem. I can relate.
he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member.
ah, chadwick.Hugh Freaking Dillon is currently out of the office, returning sometime in the fall0 -
Evsgjamm once said to me that he finds it best to meet poetry with poetry. Here is my feeble response.
Dead inside
No light outside
Breadcrumbs all eaten up
Nothing left in the cup
No smiling eyes
No butterflies
No breath taken away
The darkness is day
I was swimming in the Great Barrier Reef
Animals were hiding behind the Coral
Except for little Turtle
I could swear he's trying to talk to me
Gurgle Gurgle0 -
Good Mourning
Mourning the new morning
Each beautiful dawn silently greets me
The melodic birdsongs mock me
The pink sky cuts my eyes
As I wait for the darkness to fall
Greeted by beautiful dreams
Till the next
Mourning0 -
A month later...many years ago.
The beautiful warm sun shines deeply
Through my blessed life
Capturing the energy
That blows through me
All the peoples' thoughts they share
Cover the dark spots on my heart
The blood from this pen
Drains the sickness out of me.
What do I choose to see?
Empty black space...
Shimmering stars...0 -
HughFreakingDillon said:tish said:Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.
Good poem. I can relate.
he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member.
ah, chadwick.0 -
rollings said:HughFreakingDillon said:tish said:Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.
Good poem. I can relate.
he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member.
ah, chadwick.Hugh Freaking Dillon is currently out of the office, returning sometime in the fall0
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