Outside Love

HughFreakingDillon

on my mind every single day
my first thought to my last
all I find, other things to say
my wish is to go forward and fast

I must commit that I can't commit
the ultimate crime against the soul
to release it before it's ready
some things just take their toll

a fake smile and
an unfeeling kiss
a short while and 
an unappealing bliss

outside love is nothing
when the inside is empty
just a shove into something
where never is plenty

chadwick

like it

GummiBeer

Very fitting for today

HughFreakingDillon

chadwick said:

like it

just came across this. any time chadwick posted that he liked something of mine, it really, really meant something. 

(I don't even recall writing this)

you knew he wasn't just being nice, that he really honestly felt that way. 

Spunkie

Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.

Good poem. I can relate.

HughFreakingDillon

tish said:

Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.

Good poem. I can relate.

he was a different bird to be sure. 

he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member. 

ah, chadwick. 

Spunkie

Evsgjamm once said to me that he finds it best to meet poetry with poetry. Here is my feeble response.

Dead inside
No light outside
Breadcrumbs all eaten up
Nothing left in the cup

No smiling eyes
No butterflies
No breath taken away
The darkness is day

Loujoe

Good Mourning

Mourning the new morning
Each beautiful dawn silently greets me
The melodic birdsongs mock me
The pink sky cuts my eyes
As I wait for the darkness to fall
Greeted by beautiful dreams
Till the next
Mourning

Loujoe

A month later...many years ago.

The beautiful warm sun shines deeply 
Through my blessed life
Capturing the energy
That blows through me
All the peoples' thoughts they share
Cover the dark spots on my heart
The blood from this pen
Drains the sickness out of me.
What do I choose to see?
Empty black space...
Shimmering stars...

rollings

HughFreakingDillon said:

tish said:

Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.

Good poem. I can relate.

he was a different bird to be sure. 

he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member. 

ah, chadwick. 

Are you sure it wasn't a tank, Hugh?

HughFreakingDillon

rollings said:

HughFreakingDillon said:

tish said:

Once he offered to break a guys' legs who wouldn't stop making unwanted passes. What a sweetie.

Good poem. I can relate.

he was a different bird to be sure. 

he also once told me he was going to drive a truck through the front of my house for something i said to another member. 

ah, chadwick. 

Are you sure it wasn't a tank, Hugh?

lol, i think he said truck, but i could be wrong, it was some years ago.