written on the spot

mookie dmookie d Posts: 43
edited August 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Halfway to mexico
quart of rum in my hand
walking knee deep in

Found two dollars on the ground
Made me smile - because I was
broke...and horny

Whores are cheap down there
They enjoy their work
They do it with a smile

Don't drink the water
It's a myth...and a bad one
Be a man, in Mexico

Big mustaches are in style
Magnum must of been
a real influence on their grooming

Border patrol don't smell the goods
They only want the gringo money
Who's guarding Who?

If you hated it, feel free to tell me so. I just made it up as I went. One line after another. Try it.
my love for you is ticking clock BERZERKER! would you like some making fuck BERZERKER?!

why will you take by force what you may have quietly by love? - Powhatan
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  • k mucho mejor
    dos pesos
    de la paradisio???

    na me gusta nada

    me amore instantanio compostisiones
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • nocode198nocode198 Posts: 125
    I like the style, its good. Spontaneous writing.
    'Fox hunting is barbaric, the people who do it are a bunch of snobby tories with stupid posh accents. Oh damn, i didn't say that - damn, what a giveaway...'
  • ShynerShyner Posts: 1,226
    Long ago
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