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depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
take a picture if it helps it last
take a moment, let it all pass
the entrance sets us all back
the exit still rests inside our heads
sitting in my own mind, you were more than I could have ever thought
you came and went within our own time, embrace the moment to hold for all pride
something that makes one unique
something to provoke immortality
absolution not defined
soaked in progress so refined
live and die while it is all undone
live and die for one notion
the moments that always drive us all mad, while they calmly walked ahead
subdued panic rapes the throat, yearning to shake it off
put to bed past demons and angry ghosts
can't take the moment back, living through a 16 second test
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key

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    justamjustam Posts: 21,392
    I like reading what you put up even when (like this one) I'm not sure what it means.
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    TheiaTheia Posts: 145
    sometimes it only takes 16 seconds to become someone's hero. or enemy. or just a memory.
    this was nice to read. thanks.
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    depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    edited June 2015
    I kinda spewed that out faster than i probably should have. It just kind of plopped on paper in a few minutes, so a bit of a revision here;

    take a picture if it helps right now
    take a moment to let digest
    the entrance sets us all back, bitter exits will drown instead
    theme burning into my own mind, you were more than I could have ever thought
    you came and went within our own time, embrace the moment to hold for so called pride
    something that makes one unique
    something to provoke immortality
    absolution not defined
    soaked in progress too refined
    live and die while it is all undone
    live and die for one false nation
    these moments always drive us all mad, while he calmly walked ahead
    subdued panic rapes his throat, yearning to shake it off before it's all dead
    all past demons
    angry ghosts
    all this passion
    empty meaning
    deranged emotion
    rearranged commotions to once again amend
    can't take back the moment, 18 journeys in the sun
    and for reason, one embracing reason
    an Ocean's loss gained more than when it won
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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