hero

depopulationINC

take a picture if it helps it last
take a moment, let it all pass
the entrance sets us all back
the exit still rests inside our heads
sitting in my own mind, you were more than I could have ever thought
you came and went within our own time, embrace the moment to hold for all pride
something that makes one unique
something to provoke immortality
absolution not defined
soaked in progress so refined
live and die while it is all undone
live and die for one notion
the moments that always drive us all mad, while they calmly walked ahead
subdued panic rapes the throat, yearning to shake it off
put to bed past demons and angry ghosts
can't take the moment back, living through a 16 second test

justam

I like reading what you put up even when (like this one) I'm not sure what it means.

Theia

sometimes it only takes 16 seconds to become someone's hero. or enemy. or just a memory.
this was nice to read. thanks.

depopulationINC

I kinda spewed that out faster than i probably should have. It just kind of plopped on paper in a few minutes, so a bit of a revision here;

take a picture if it helps right now
take a moment to let digest
the entrance sets us all back, bitter exits will drown instead
theme burning into my own mind, you were more than I could have ever thought
you came and went within our own time, embrace the moment to hold for so called pride
something that makes one unique
something to provoke immortality
absolution not defined
soaked in progress too refined
live and die while it is all undone
live and die for one false nation
these moments always drive us all mad, while he calmly walked ahead
subdued panic rapes his throat, yearning to shake it off before it's all dead
all past demons
angry ghosts
all this passion
empty meaning
deranged emotion
rearranged commotions to once again amend
can't take back the moment, 18 journeys in the sun
and for reason, one embracing reason
an Ocean's loss gained more than when it won